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Star-Watcher — A Worrying Thought
Published: 2006-04-04 22:45:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 181; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 8
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Description From a nightmare I have waken
Feeling unsafe and physically shaken

I opened my eyes to find it wasn’t just a dream
It was my life, resulting in a scream

Tears fell from my tired eyes
As I kept wishing this life was a lie

I closed me eyes again hoping itself it would sort
Only to open them to the same and think a worrying thought

If he haunts both my dreams and waking life
Maybe it would be easier to end it with a reach for the knife
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Comments: 22

Jungle-Jew [2006-07-08 16:46:40 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. and I thought your emotional contrast entry was good.... This is powerful.

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Star-Watcher In reply to Jungle-Jew [2006-07-08 23:11:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank You

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FancyRed [2006-04-17 11:46:16 +0000 UTC]

really all i can say it that in just the few short days since i have joined deviant art,,i am finding more and more that i am not alone.
i loved it

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Star-Watcher In reply to FancyRed [2006-04-17 12:21:52 +0000 UTC]

Thanks & You Are Never Alone... Don't Forget That
I'm Here If You Ever Want To Chat.. Just Note Me

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FancyRed In reply to Star-Watcher [2006-04-17 12:41:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you,,and i will keep that in mind
/hug

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Star-Watcher In reply to FancyRed [2006-04-17 14:46:10 +0000 UTC]

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Nightmares376 [2006-04-10 05:51:41 +0000 UTC]

Excellent. I know how it feels to wake from something and be too afraid to go back to sleep. I know what it feels like to open my eyes during my waking life and feel so much anxiety and fear that all I want to do is close them again. I know what it feels like to feel and be trapped both mentally and physically in both waking and sleeping hours. Great piece...obviously, I can relate. lol

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Star-Watcher In reply to Nightmares376 [2006-04-10 07:36:00 +0000 UTC]

Lol Thank You

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iwillbeback [2006-04-09 10:55:40 +0000 UTC]

Dreams blend with reality and the separation can sometimes be thin.

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Star-Watcher In reply to iwillbeback [2006-04-09 11:19:49 +0000 UTC]

Very Thin

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MikeyT333 [2006-04-06 06:52:48 +0000 UTC]



well its very well written as always, but i like the other more for abvious reasons

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Star-Watcher In reply to MikeyT333 [2006-04-06 08:01:37 +0000 UTC]

Sorry Lol Thanks

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MikeyT333 In reply to Star-Watcher [2006-04-06 11:41:53 +0000 UTC]

stop saying sorry

lol

i love you so much

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Star-Watcher In reply to MikeyT333 [2006-04-06 16:17:50 +0000 UTC]

Soo Nearly Said Sorry For Saying Sorry Then Lol
Aww * Blushes * Love You x

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MikeyT333 In reply to Star-Watcher [2006-04-07 07:58:50 +0000 UTC]

ha ha ha, mmmwah

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xRandomSinsx [2006-04-05 17:41:11 +0000 UTC]

Don't kill yourself it fucks people's lives so much trust me I should know. Though it is a good poem!

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Star-Watcher In reply to xRandomSinsx [2006-04-05 21:00:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks & I Know

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Dark0Goddess [2006-04-05 16:42:42 +0000 UTC]

Very emotive. Great flow.

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Star-Watcher In reply to Dark0Goddess [2006-04-05 20:58:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanking You

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Dark0Goddess In reply to Star-Watcher [2006-04-06 13:06:36 +0000 UTC]

Welcoming you...hmmm...that means something else. You're welcome!

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westsideprincess [2006-04-05 10:39:06 +0000 UTC]

a not very socially acceptable thought, but one that should be talked more about
you did it very well and with taste

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Star-Watcher In reply to westsideprincess [2006-04-05 20:55:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank You

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