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Published: 2009-02-28 22:00:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 290; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 0
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Description this is my first camera club mono submission... comments needed please
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warren-wol [2009-03-08 22:13:23 +0000 UTC]

i really like the centering and symmetry on this. i'm a big fan of all thing centered and symmetrical.

what grabs me most is the two windows, one with the diamond lattice pattern, one without. that creates the foundation of interest for me.

what i find distracting is the chicken wire inside. i see how it adds to the concept, but for me i feel like it's pulling my attention away from other things about the photo that i like more.

the mortar seems very overexposed and the bricks themselves seem low in contrast.

anyway, this is what i see. hope it was helpful.

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Spree5326 In reply to warren-wol [2009-03-09 14:55:21 +0000 UTC]

yes very helpful, i always appreciate feedback from thos interested

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