Asylymescapeie [2013-10-10 07:07:01 +0000 UTC]
This is great and I would love to see more but one contructive criticism I have is that all the text is in one block. It makes it hard for me to read because of my eyes. If it could be spread out into a few paragraphs it would be even more awesome!
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SplitMindBunny In reply to Asylymescapeie [2013-10-10 23:37:09 +0000 UTC]
thanks so much!! will do, ill keep that in mind!! thanks so much, i haven't written in a while and it was like, a practice one, thank you so much, its very very appreciated!
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zippymax [2013-10-04 03:46:58 +0000 UTC]
You want feedback eh? okay then, I think this is adorable. I can go on if you want!
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