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Published: 2009-12-20 05:04:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 511; Favourites: 32; Downloads: 3
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I'm not done with this but I shall by Christmas D:< And I totally have the whole, "Chestnuts roasting on an open fire~" stuck in my head >:CI am putting it up now 'cause I want some crits on it. If it's linearted already do NOT critique thank you =] Because I realize those mistakes already |D;;
So yeah crit everything else <3 And I know the top of the fireplace looks so off grrrrrr
I just love their expressions <3
Art, Kyiku and Tamiko (c) Me
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That looks so cute
Um if you don't mind me asking you a question about it
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Thanks <3
And sure :]
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Will did you draw this with a pencil or buy using a softwear, and if you did use the softwear how did you get it like that
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I did it in pencil then in ink xD It's still not done though :]
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Okay thank you so much for telling me^^ I'v seen many pictures that way and I want mine to look that way too^///^
I can't wait to see it done
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You're welcome <3
and thanks!
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it looks great! I cant wait to see it finished! ^^
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Thanks so much <3
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I horrible at perspective drawing, we had to do a whole lesson on that in art class, it just confuses me.
But it does look good.
The top of the fire place in the top right probably should be brought down a little.
I love it though 8D
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Ha, ha I suck at the part of it when you have to draw the dot then the lines so you know your view point and lalala so I skip that XD;;
Yeah that's what I was thinking.
And thanks <3
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Me too D:
My lines always end up crooked xD;
You're welcome 8D
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XD exactly OTL;;
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hey there, nice drawing, but you should pull bottom corner alittle to the right, that will give the drawing a sense of 3-dimensinality. some advice for the final version, which by the way, cant wait for..
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Hmm I'll try that! Thank you ;D
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no problem, glad i could help, all my advice will do is make a great drawing, even better...^^
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Nooo, the fireplace doesnt look off at all to me, it was the first thing I noticed, (since Ive seen this before without background) and I thought, wow, what a nice fireplace! lol, no kidding, I really like it x) And as for the background, it looks detailed and cozy, gives off a warm feel, be careful to draw everything straight so it looks real in the finished version
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Ha, ha I felt it needed a background
I shall <3 And oh okay! I'll do that I didn't think of that thanks so much <3
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jup! ^_^ Teehee, no problem at all, I always forget stuff like that x'D
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CAN'T WAIT FOR IT TO BE FINISHED! 
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are you having her draw him in her picture? cuz that would be cute
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Yep that's exactly what she's doing ;D
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how embarrassingly cute (:
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It has a background 
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Yes it does 8D and thanks!
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It looks good!
And I think I would put a picture of Tamiko and her family above the fireplace, just so she doesn't seem like she's the only person in her family.
But I do like it!
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I was thinking of doing that. =]
Thanks though <3 and I'm in the chat by the way I heard I just missed you XD
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lol, I figured that might happen xD
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