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SpicyBrownieMix — Persistence
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Published: 2017-04-15 00:31:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 165; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 1
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Description
The snow pelted her eyes, and the cold sank into her bones, yet she persisted...
Art Trade with MissDids
Yayyyyyy
I don't know where this idea came form xD
Oc: MissDids
Art: SpicyBrownieMix
My little pony: Hasbro
Speedpaint: none
I hope you like it! <3
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Comments: 19
To be fair, the art style and the color, along with the message, seems very nice and smooth. It leaves an adequate impact which I very much like.
However, the shading, snout, and the snow is flawed. First of all, the shading on the character seems a bit flat. Instead, why not put a type of shade that correlates to the character, such as a type of tan.
Also, the snout is a bit off because of the too rectangular shape. It looks too much like a box rather a mare's snout, which is inappropriate in a way for the gender.
Lastly, the snow that is over the pony makes the pony a bit of a strain to see. I suggest to dim out the snow a bit to show more attention towards the pony.
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Thanks! I knew there was something wrong with that snout xD
i know the shading looks a bit strange, but I made it that way cause in a blizzard, there isn't one point the light is coming from, and it is instead being reflected from everywhere.
although it dose look a bit strange.
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Holly molly guacamole! mah boi MissDids looking awesome! 
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I'm just gonna critique this in a comment because I don't like how deviant art does the actual critique thing... okay
Overall this piece looks very good. The front leg looks oddly bent. Usually with horses/ponies whatever you want to call them have their legs bent a little more down and the other way. From this point of view, the back leg looks wide compared to everything else. I don't know if the white streaks in the hair are a part of the design but if they are there to add a hair texture effect I suggest lightening the value of it. Finally, the shading it as if looks out of place and you used black to shade. When adding shading there should be a point where the light is coming from and shaded as if the light is hitting the horse. Shading with black is something that a lot of people do but to make a piece better try to shade with a dark shade of a colour. Maybe a dark blue or brown would better suit this picture. When adding a dark colour as shading instead of a black, it adds more emotion in the picture and makes the character seem more natural.
If there is any background information that I didn't know, extra things you think I should touch upon, or anything else just tell me.
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Oh, I actually used dark green to shade xD
it dose look like black. kind of an odd choice, I guess.
also, I didn't know directly where the light was coming from, because if you have ever been in a snowstorm, you will realize the light is coming form everywhere because of the could and snow reflecting the light. It didn't turn out nearly as well as i wanted :I
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AWWW YEAH THIS IS AWESOME
hehe it works perfectly for new England weather XD
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Awesome! I am glad you like it ^^
and yea, its snowing here too xD
don't you live in the us?
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Yeah, new England is in the US heh
North east?
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wut
never heard of it xD
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Boi
It's literally one of the regions of the US 😂
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New England is?
is that what you people call pacific time? xD
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No I'm in eastern time xp you're in Pacific time, I feel I remember correctly. I'm 2 hours ahead
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No, i'm in mountain time. If I was in pacific time I would not have asked the question xD
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Oooh heh I got it now x)
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I has no Idea
I just draw x'D
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