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SphinxOfPride In reply to ??? [2014-12-02 15:59:05 +0000 UTC]
Maybe my fault i guess.
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Loron-Lew In reply to SphinxOfPride [2014-11-30 06:27:17 +0000 UTC]
Hahaha! yasha!!! so true!Β
Yea, you mean uncle Neji! lol
Yea I saw it! I knew the relationships were
going to end up like that. Well, it was kinda
obvious. >.> Ultimate Ninja Storm Pick Hinata and Naruto
and it tells you everything.Β
The coolest character out of the kids to me is, Atsuma's kid!Β
he looked so awesome!Β
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SphinxOfPride In reply to Loron-Lew [2014-11-30 08:03:41 +0000 UTC]
Quite frankly i really hate naruto's son design,I mean just look at him!Does he really look like the son of the seventh hokage!?I dont like bolt uzumaki at allXD
All other kids are digestible to me but not bolt uzumakiXD
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Loron-Lew In reply to SphinxOfPride [2014-11-30 17:54:25 +0000 UTC]
LMAO! he looks more like if Sonic the hedgehog and Naruto had a baby! LOL
I actually expected a female that had the facial appearance of Naruto The
powers like Hinata, and the hair of Neji. That's what I was expecting. >.>
You know? in the respect of Neji's death... Guess not... =___=
I was surprised that it was Sakura and Sasuke. really! even after he
tried to kill her! LOL
I thought it was going to be Kurin and Sasuke and Sakura was going to be
single like Tsunade or end up with bushy brows. =___=
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SphinxOfPride In reply to Loron-Lew [2014-12-01 08:04:56 +0000 UTC]
LOL!XD
I guess neji's character just got wasted.am i really loved that guy T^T....Poor ten tenXD
As for sasuke and sakura,i was thinking of sakura being with sai but nonetheless she's with sasukeXD
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Loron-Lew In reply to SphinxOfPride [2014-12-01 15:31:55 +0000 UTC]
Yea! what was up with that!? He was such an awesome character in the games too!
and it blew my mind that the creator took Atsuma's life too! he was the best
to use in Ultimate Ninja Storm! (Mind Blown!)Β
Hahaha!!! that would have been fitting too! Sai and Sakura! but Sai was too
foolish to understand lol I seriously thought that Sasuke was going to redo the
entire ninja war! lol
That poor guy was so unbalanced! But he had better character development
then Naruto. he went from being loved to being hated by all because of his
brother's loyalty for a village he despised. This is why I liked Sasuke'sΒ
character. Naruto should have just been a preacher and not a Hokage in the
end. Because that is all he did. hahaha!!!Β
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SphinxOfPride In reply to Loron-Lew [2014-12-02 16:22:21 +0000 UTC]
I didn't like naruto from the start.......XD
I mean his personality was too irritating..but i managed to come over that,i began to actually hope
that sasuke would be made hokage but oh wellXD.
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Loron-Lew In reply to SphinxOfPride [2014-12-07 17:19:31 +0000 UTC]
Yea, I hate those characters without any character development. I hateΒ
those characters that easily adapt to everything around them. And that is
What type of character Naruto is.Β
I was hoping that Sasuke became Hokage too!!!Β
I thought they should have lost to Madara. but to a
point to where they can have momentary peace. And
enough time for Naruto to become the same level asΒ
Kakashi. And go through advance missions and give
Naruto better character development. BUT NOPE!
Just ended that way. I'll never be a horrible character
developer and or writing like that. Naruto shippuden was
good in the beginning. Until the repetitive flash backs on
the same subject. over and over. Then they killed Neji and I
was pretty much done after that >.>
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SphinxOfPride In reply to Loron-Lew [2014-12-08 10:51:20 +0000 UTC]
Yeah,every anime has a flashback numerous times or almost ALL the time which irritates me a lot>_<
Developing a character can be a hard job,no one is able to completely nail it but there are some whoΒ
excel in this form of writing.
And as for naruto shippuden,only the original naruto was good enough to compare with the likes of dragon ball z,one piece and yu yu hakusho.
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Loron-Lew In reply to SphinxOfPride [2014-12-13 16:27:30 +0000 UTC]
Yea, Its okay to have a flashback here and there. But Naruto even had a filler season
that was all about flash backs. And that is just too much! Me, I have an idea for my story.
I have a good way to take care of those flashbacks. Which will even be more appealing to
the readers or watchers that enjoy the series.Β
I put a lot of consideration in my writing. And I look at a lot of the mistakes that the pros
make. In order to make my work that much better.Β
A good story is one thing. But character design is key. If you make a character that doesn't
experience sacrifice, Unexpected events, Learning life lessons that will make them much
stronger. Dragon Ball Z was a great story. Loved it! But there was that same trend it followed
Just like Naruto. Goku and Naruto had no real character development. But their side kicks did.
Vegeta and Sasuke. Hell, for a while. Sasuke was taking the spotlight in the Anime and through
the fans. All Naruto did was whine and preach. through out the entire series. Until he got the
Sage Jutsu. He got a little better after that. He even began to use tactical attacks with his
Clone Jutsu. Which was awesome! However! Yu Yu Hakasho was golden!!! It wasn't too long
or too short! and it had an amazing story and Yusuke actually had character development!Β
And he didn't always come out the victor. But it made him stronger. That is character development!
And those are the aspects I look at when I want to make a good story. You'll see when I get started with
My Manga. But its cool to talk to somebody who understands a good quality story!
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SphinxOfPride In reply to Loron-Lew [2014-12-13 16:36:27 +0000 UTC]
As for goku,your right about that,goku DID NOT have any development
but the story was just too good to go unoticedXD
By the way you talk,i can tell you'll be a GREAT mangaka!who looks even at the most tiniest of things
to make his manga more appealing!i haven't really seen yu yu hakusho,but from the reviews i can
say that it might be amazing.
And im no good writer,heck if it comes to writing a story i'll take lessons
and tips from you on how to be a good writer!And one tip for you,if you wanna make your manga
SUPER famous then you should probably start submitting your work to groups,they'll help you
ALOT as they really helped me to get noticed here^^
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Loron-Lew In reply to SphinxOfPride [2014-12-15 08:53:43 +0000 UTC]
Yea, that series rocked! and made a big difference in the Anime world.
And you're right. I've been watching DBZ for a long time. And didn'tΒ
realize Goku had no development until Last year. C:
Yea, I am very detailed about my stories and characters a like.Β
and I am really picky with my own work. (I'm my own critic)
Yu Yu Hakasho out does DBZ for me. Completely amazing!!!
And how the battles evolve from simple fights to over the top
action is just mind blowing!Β
Ah! you're a great writer! don't doubt yourself!Β
(Coming from the guy that doubts his work at times. LOL )
Yea! even lessons will make you that much better. Heck.
I might make a journal about how to make stories.
Yea, about that. I want my series to be super famous. I haveΒ
joined groups. But I hardly get any recognition. If you have any
Groups that you can recommend... I'd much appreciate it!!!
I do!!! I do want to be super famous!!!Β (β§ββΏγβ) < YEA.... )
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SphinxOfPride In reply to Loron-Lew [2014-12-15 11:39:18 +0000 UTC]
Now i really have to watch yu yu hakusho!
If your saying so,then must be realXD
I'll work hard on the story to develop it into a MIND BLOWING PLOT!
As for the groups,i'll send you invites!
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Loron-Lew In reply to SphinxOfPride [2014-12-16 16:22:03 +0000 UTC]
You have to man! its so amazing! the series is phenomenal from beginning to end.
:Lecture time!:Β α(γ»βγ» )α
Yea! you do that! Make sure not to rush anything. That is what messes everything up.
After you get to a certain point that is comfortable for you to say its time. Then make a
release date with a preview. Giving your fans something promising to look forward to.
Don't fall behind like most upcoming and professional Mangaka Artist do. When you
build hype for your series like I am trying to do for mine. make sure you meet up with
the expectations of your hype. It will disappoint people if you get lazy with your series.
And you will begin to lose fans. Just like Naruto and Bleach did. Its good to have an
On-going series. But not everybody in the world is a hardcore Otaku Guru. And not
everybody is going to follow a series that is too long. DBZ actually was suppose to end
after the Freiza battle. But then the Android Saga and Buu Saga were made by
popular demand. Now if people are wanting more. You decide as the author if you want
to go ahead and add more. Always remember. Do it for yourself, because the heart you
have for the story. And you finally end it. And you are happy with your ending. Weather
or not people want more or not. It is about weather you want more or not. Because it
might flop, just like Dragon Ball G.T. did. Akira wanted nothing to do with G.T. and claimed
its a parallel universe because he made a mistake and made that series only due to popular
demand. And not because he wanted to do it. Β So that series was a waste and is considered
non-Canon now. Don't get me wrong, I do love my fans. I love them a lot! I adore my fans.
But when it comes to your work. You have to have heart in it. Like I always say. With out
Heart in Art you can never complete it due to the combination of the two. For the twoΒ
work together as one to make the word Heart. He-art. Β
Never forget that...
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SphinxOfPride In reply to Loron-Lew [2014-12-16 16:30:58 +0000 UTC]
DBZ GT was awful>.>
And thats coming from a hardcore fan of DBZXD
Yeah i mean just look at the plot!Nowhere good as DBz or original DB!
Your right about putting our heart into everything we do,it's the only way to get something right!
unless it's just a burden on us.
And thnx for your very informative lecture buddY!means alot!
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Loron-Lew In reply to SphinxOfPride [2015-01-29 01:33:12 +0000 UTC]
Yup! I agree! Though I have thought of making a fan version of Dragon Ball.
If I did something like that. I'd only make it 25 episodes long. and that is it.
I wouldn't spend too much time and heart making something based off other
peoples work.Β
Though I would still do it just to honor those who inspired people all over the
world.
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SphinxOfPride In reply to Loron-Lew [2015-01-31 17:16:00 +0000 UTC]
It must be really exciting right?!
You're damn lucky bro to PUBLISH YOUR OWN MANGA!?
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SphinxOfPride In reply to Loron-Lew [2015-02-06 16:23:27 +0000 UTC]
yeah!!People get tired of seeing the same thing over and
over again!plus im quite impressed that you
even have the lyrics of the OST of Calamity trigger!
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Loron-Lew In reply to SphinxOfPride [2015-02-07 14:04:13 +0000 UTC]
True! This is very true. If you keep repeating things
over and over, people begin to see that cycle.
And thanks man! Yea, The Orchestra is actuallyΒ
working on that as well as we speak. I told them
what I want, and I am highly involved in the
development of the music! I want the music to
be as emotional as the storyline. And the battleΒ
themes to scream action pact while still capturing
that emotional feel to it. You'll see when its up and
going. I am even playing an instrument in the
orchestrated Choir Song.Β
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SapphyreRarity [2014-09-13 19:32:24 +0000 UTC]
Uuuu... kitten likes dis one.
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Ryu-chii [2014-03-16 09:28:31 +0000 UTC]
Sweet bro~
You draw him so well!
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Emmaginative [2014-01-10 20:23:05 +0000 UTC]
And I fangirlΒ Β
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Emmaginative In reply to SphinxOfPride [2014-01-14 13:57:33 +0000 UTC]
Stop it! I love inuyasha! He's so cute!Β Β
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Emmaginative In reply to SphinxOfPride [2014-01-14 14:36:48 +0000 UTC]
I would try my best not to tackle him with a hug but I would fail and hug him. Then he may kill me. IT WOULD BE WORTH IT!
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