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Published: 2008-06-15 01:37:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 256; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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Description THE HOLE

The ignorance,
the slyness,
how she makes me feel...
the cleverness,
the deceit,
does she know?
the care she shows,
the betray she emits,
she stole my heart...
the love i feel,
the pain i feel,
now my hearts sank...
the lies she told,
the broken promises,
and i have a feeling...
the thoughts i think,
the truth in them,
like a emptiness...
the men she kissed,
the men she fucked,
and its consuming me...
the things she said,
THE THINGS SHE SAID!
even when i dont see it...
the reason is unknown,
the result is assured,
i know...shes cheating..
the life is gone,
the love is destroyed...
and its killing me...
when she says...
I Love You
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Comments: 9

CrimsonST [2011-07-11 21:24:49 +0000 UTC]

I like the way you write! ItΒ΄s sad, but also romantic, this makes me think love hurts... but without love, we are hollow...

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specterfreakz In reply to CrimsonST [2011-07-22 03:10:40 +0000 UTC]

that poem sums up almost every love relationship i have ever been in XD and reading this poem, i get chills :3 its defidently a deep rhythmic poem

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MadameStrange [2008-06-16 15:57:05 +0000 UTC]

oh they're old. Ok you really scared me there I was like "oh gawd what'd I do now...." lol sorry. Great work

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specterfreakz In reply to MadameStrange [2008-06-16 17:23:36 +0000 UTC]

XD yes very old lol

haha im sowie for scaring you :3

and thanks XD

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MadameStrange In reply to specterfreakz [2008-06-17 02:20:18 +0000 UTC]

it's ok; you're welcome

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ellopoppet666 [2008-06-16 04:14:02 +0000 UTC]

DUDE UR A..dude????

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specterfreakz In reply to ellopoppet666 [2008-06-16 12:30:24 +0000 UTC]

dude, i am a dude
...
dude?

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ellopoppet666 In reply to specterfreakz [2008-06-17 00:44:03 +0000 UTC]

where did u go???

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specterfreakz In reply to ellopoppet666 [2008-06-17 12:01:33 +0000 UTC]

everywhere

and yet

nowhere

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