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Published: 2008-06-15 01:48:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 241; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Description How

How
Does the perfect, become flawed
The beautiful, become ugly
The strong, become weak
The fast, become slow
The geniuses, become the idiots

It’s simple

LOVE

Love ties the tongue
It stops the heart
Destroys the lungs
Stops you dead
Helps you understand what pain is

SO WHY

Do people search for it

Simple

They want to be needed
The want to be noticed
They want to be changed

So how

Does the perfect

Become flawed?
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Comments: 5

MadameStrange [2008-06-16 15:55:12 +0000 UTC]

vetty vetty deep! I likes^^

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specterfreakz In reply to MadameStrange [2008-06-16 17:24:24 +0000 UTC]

:3 you would love my other one
[if i could find the darn thing]
-rummiges thru my pile of old school stuff-
AHHH IM SO LOST T^T

but yea, i loved the one poem i lose lol

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MadameStrange In reply to specterfreakz [2008-06-16 21:27:19 +0000 UTC]

lol i can't say I'm not guilty of that...*stuck in a pile of papers with poems, drawings, doodles, all that crap*

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thehitlersuicides [2008-06-15 01:59:28 +0000 UTC]

Love? is it a trick question? sorry you're not going to get a very advanced critique but i'll give a simple one. simple but sincere. It's beautiful and thought provoking. It puts love in a perspective that i havn't really seen before. i really dig it

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specterfreakz In reply to thehitlersuicides [2008-06-15 02:35:56 +0000 UTC]

=]
thank you very much ^^

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