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SpeakThroughFingers — Suspicion
Published: 2012-05-26 01:59:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 689; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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did I spell the title right?This is Alice, from my short story The Mirror I: Suspicion. Her full name is Alyssandra White. I doubt the story will see life here on deviantart, mostly because it's so dear to me, and I don't really feel comfortable posting it online.
Suspicion is the first in a series of 4 short stories. The next is Resentment, and the main character is Annalise I'll be drawing her next.
I have yet to write the 3 companions to Alice's story, but I have a vague outline/idea for them, and plan to work on them this summer. Maybe when I finish them all I'll post it. But I don't know.
Don't ask me how long this picture took. I wasn't keeping track. I used a .5mm mechanical pencil. No reference. It lost some details in the scan, but scanned better than a lot of my pictures.
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Really nice work on her expression! I really like your style
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Really? Thanks so much. That means a lot.
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The eyes looks a little bit too large, and the mouth too thin... Overall, you have done a real good work with the shading, congrats!
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I know about the eyes. I realized it probably right after I finished the picture and took a good look at it. Thanks for the comment about the lips though. I didn't really notice since my brain was focused on the messed up eyes. Thanks for pointing that out.
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Nice work. I like the eyes and her expression is lovely
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Thank you! And yo really think the eyes are okay? I thought the shape was off and the irises too big... That makes me feel so much better that you like them. And thanks for the fav!
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I think they are quite too large indeed but I thought it was fully intendted! 
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nice portrait you got the expression perfectly right
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Thank you! Looking at it today, I think I made her irises a bit too big...
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but i think it works for this portrait
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Haha, thank you. I guess big eyes make her look sort of innocent.
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