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Spark1eFountain — Fallen Angel + SPEEDPAINT
Published: 2017-03-04 02:10:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 990; Favourites: 83; Downloads: 3
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I finally finished this! I'm really proud of this piece~so many Paint Tool SAI crashes, so much time, and so many layers, but I did it! Speedpaint coming soon~EDIT: Speedpaint now available!
SPEEDPAINT: www.youtube.com/watch?v=prWWKZ…
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Comments: 37
Hello there!
Good points:
- The way the colors layer each other makes the shading is very realistic especially at the hair.
- Hmm, the way you included textures on the floor looks very good. It makes it seem that girl had walked by and just sat down to rest. The foot seems to make the floor icy.
- The snow effect. It really adds to the icy feel of this artwork! And you use of cool colors too! >w<
Improvements/Suggestions:
- The feet looks a bit weird to me mostly because it's uneven since one of them looks like flipper while the other looks a bit too round.
- The wings look sort of uneven. One wing curves upward more while the other seems to have fewer feathers.
- The fingers on the left hand seem to very stubby and short. I suggest drawing it longer next time.
Hope this helps!
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This is a very beautiful piece, and i think that the colors really do blend very well, though i do suggest adding a bit more contrast with the colors, like more warm tones!
The attention to detail on here hair is amazing, but her bangs(?) feel a bit spiky and not as flowing as the rest. The wings are a bit weird, but i'm assuming, that they are feather wings, so maybe look up wing references because they don't look very natural.
It looks like it might be snowing and if that's the case, then the snow has too much of a pattern, it needs to be erratic. there would be snow on her clothes as well not to mention. The pose is nice, but use more references! the anatomy feels off, lopsided almost.
Make sure you look up references for hands as well.
Also, but more lighting in the background as well! she doesnt seem to fit in with the rest of the picture because theres more light being reflected off her, and more shadows on her body than the background!
This is a very beautiful piece, don't get me wrong, but i feel like it could be executed better
Sorry if i sounded rude at all!
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Let's get right into it. It's amazing. The shadowing is on. The colors are on. The detail is on. I feel a lot of emotion was put into this. Now, I must ask, what is she? I can tell she's a sort of Asian angel (best kind) but what specifically? There is something that bugs me about this, though. The head. I'm not sure if it looks a little off, or if it's just me seeing things weird, but it just looks... weird. And I almost forgot to mention the wonderful work on the ground. Looks like a sheet of snow. I love it. Unlike the last picture I did a critique on. That one, not one of yours, was just plain awful. Anyways, I love it. I give this a nice clean 10/10.
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Thank you for your criticism. To answer your question, my OC is actually an ice wizard and not an angel, even though the title is "Fallen Angel." Though she does have angel wings as part of her design! ^^
And yeahhh she's Asian c:
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Hello there, I hope you won't mind a critique from me! And sorry in advance if I say anything nasty, I promise, I don't mean it.
So first off, I would like to say that I do enjoy this piece, it is very eye-catching. The colors work really well together and the line art is quite smooth, and clean, great job!
I also really love the attention to detail, especially in the wings, amazing job with that as well!
Her outfit is very creative as well, and I really like the individual strands of hair you gave her, sometimes I forget to do those on my pieces...e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a… " width="19" height="19" alt="
The only thing I would probably suggest focusing more on is the anatomy. Though the pose is executed quite well, the legs look a bit too loose to me. Though, maybe that's just me. I struggle with anatomy as well sometimes so maybe I'm wrong. Also one more thing is that her hands also look a bit...loose...? I don't know, I think the one of the right (or left? It's hard in this pose...^^') looks pretty good, it's just the other one I think needs a bit more attention.
Again, sorry if I was too harsh in anyway, I think your piece was really well done and I hope to see more from you in the future! -^^-
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Since I am in project comment and like writing critiques I might as well kill two birds with one stone.
I like it, though the anatomy looks rather strange in the leg and face. It kind of looks like one of her legs has no bones and is conforming into the other. With that said I do like the general color scheme of the design.
However I do like the effects and it does fit the mood, even if I could do with less snowflakes.
I would also like if you added a bit more to the ground rather than the gray steel color, but over all I don't think it is a bad piece at all. Just a little off here and there.
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I thought this was an amazing eye catching piece.
Areas you could improve:
I feel you should've contrasted the background a little bit so the wings would stand out more. Also, the left shoe is a little weird and the right knee shouldn't look like its sinking into the other knee. Lastly, the fingers - fingers shouldn't look the same.
Areas that were extraordinary:
Overall this was an amazing piece, I really loved it. I liked the softness in her eyes and the snowflakes under her foot. The technique was awesome the shades you used made me feel that the art was realistic and the hair was gorgeous. The gentleness of the snow as amazing too! I LOVE her clothes. Hope this helped!
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This is very impressive. The only thing I would say is that the anatomy of the shoe is slightly off. Overall, though I think you did very well. I do love your shading.
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The hair makes my heart hurt, I love it, it looks so soft.
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It went in random because I don't watch you but it doesn't belong in any of my other categories. Plain favorites is for ppl I watch whose art doesn't go in another category, random is for ppl I don't watch whose art doesn't go into any other category! ^^ But overall very beautiful! (That's what I WOULD'VE put it in, if I had that!)
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You are a great artist with a lot of talent, your drawing is very beautiful
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Well, the coloring is nice, but in Your place I'll focus more on shadows. Try to use other brush to blur, because this don't look the best. I'm talking about clothes, skin is fairly nice, but maybe try to add more colors like red or orange (still in mild tones). Shadows on hair are pretty good, but shape of hair is a little bit weird on bangs. Focus more on anatomy, because hands are not the best, legs are also a little bit weird. Try to practise more feet. And sorry, but wings are terrible. Try to search on internet some tutorials about wings, they are created to help You! Returning to the point, backgroud is pretty good. Maybe except floor, well floor itself is good, but snow is not looking good. I can't draw snow properly, but this there just don't look good. Also try to search some tutorials. And the most important, face. Face is good, but not mouth. I'll try to put it more in center of the face and make it wider.
That's everything from me, I like Your art, but as everyone, You make some mistakes. Keep on going and practice more, because I see progress!
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Thank you for your criticism! I think it would've been best to put the criticism by using the critique feature, but it's fine xD
I'm actually considering switching to a more painting style so my drawings can look more smooth like the background~
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I can see the effort. background needs a bit of work tho.. but it's a great job here <3
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Astonishing!!! The background is so vibrant.
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