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sourumeitos — False Heroes [Husband!Makoto x Reader]

Published: 2014-07-11 03:50:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 17611; Favourites: 315; Downloads: 0
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Description Makoto laughs as he slices through the cake. Your face brightens as you take a piece of the cake and feed it to Makoto with your hand. He leans in and kisses you as everyone cheers. Today's a special day for you and Makoto. You're both newlyweds.

You grin as you lean into Makoto's frame as you both briefly pose for a photo. Makoto takes the plate from your hands. He places it on the table as he leads you over to the balcony for some privacy.

You laugh as he stands behind you, wrapping his arms around your shoulders.

"It's a beautiful night, isn't it, Mrs. Tachibana?" he smiles down at you.

"I'm still not going to get used to that, Makoto," you giggle. "Though yes, yes it is Mr. Tachibana. I'm glad the weather held up for today, though I wouldn't have minded for a rainy wedding either."

"Mhm," Makoto simply replies, kissing your temple. "I'm sorry we have to postpone our honeymoon. It's summer season and everyone's been going on vacation at the station."

"It's okay. We can treat every day as our honeymoon!" you tease. You turn around and wrap your arms around Makoto's torso. You look up and notice him blush due to your choice of words. You chuckle to yourself. He still remains innocent despite the numerous times you've both slept with each other.

"I guess..." he murmurs. His hold on you tightens as he sighs. Makoto smiles again as he looks down at you. "I’ll do anything to please you, my love."

You blush the moment Makoto calls you that. Your greatest weakness for Makoto is whenever he gives you a nickname. Actually, another weakness of yours is whenever he gently places kisses along your neck, which is what he’s doing right now. No, anything he does is a weakness of yours and you’d rather save the intimacy for the bedroom.

“M-Makoto, not now,” you gently rest the palm of your hands against his chest, clutching the fabric of his blazer.

Makoto nods and takes your hand in understanding. “Let’s go back inside.”

“Okay,” you laugh as you both head inside back towards the reception.




"Makoto, am I going to be okay...?" you whisper.

"Y-yes, ____. You're going to be fine," he says, his voice cracking.

"Doesn't sound like it," you softly chuckle. "Besides, you're crying."

"Just keep applying pressure on your wound. We've almost reached the ambulance."

Your husband is doing his best to remain calm and professional as he tightens the cloth that's being used as a tourniquet. Makoto sets you down on the stretcher and reaches for your hand, not wanting to let go. He wipes tears from his eyes with his free hand, scared at the very thought of losing you.

"Don't leave me, please..." he pleads as he lets go of you.

"You won't be alone, I promise..." you smile through the pain, tears also falling down your cheek as medics place you in the ambulance.

Makoto watches the doors to the back of the ambulance close. He feels a hand on his shoulder and turns to look at his chief.

"We've almost contained the fire. Go to her, Tachibana. She needs you."




About two hours ago a fire broke out at the daycare you work at. As part of emergency procedures, you along with a few co-workers needed to ensure the safety of the children. After clearing out the building and checking all the rooms, it took a turn for the worst when part of the ceiling collapsed and you fell onto broken glass. It resulted in a large piece being wedged into your abdomen. You thought you were going to die until Makoto found a blood trail leading towards your location. You recall the shouting he made to his fellow firemen when they found you and the desperation in his voice as he helped you escape from the blaze.

Your vision blurs as you're unaware of your surroundings. You hear voices all around you and feel an oxygen mask being placed over part of your face. You take a deep breath and notice yourself getting drowsy as a result of the blood loss. Closing your eyes, the last thought you have is of Makoto...




One week. It's been one week since you were admitted into the hospital. Makoto places fresh flowers into the vase, setting it near the window.

"I got your favorite flowers today. They’re orchids, like the ones at our wedding. It's going to need lots of sunlight, right ____?" he smiles and turns to look at you.

No response.

He rubs the back of his head as the smile disappears from his face. "It's funny how we only got married a little over a month ago. So much has happened since then, right?"

Still no response.

Makoto sits down near your bedside. "I was told that if I keep speaking to you there's a possibility you'd wake up. Today, chief told me to take the week off. He said that I was working too hard but I disagree. I don't think I’m working hard enough." He pauses as he reaches over for your hand. "If I was, you'd be awake. You wouldn't be in this situation. ____, I thought I got over my fears from my childhood, but now that you're like this, my greatest fear is losing you."

Haruka opens the door and places a hand up to halt Nagisa and the others from entering the room. He turns around to look at them and shakes his head. Haruka is about to close the door until he notices Makoto speak up again.

"I became a firefighter to help others. I became a firefighter to save lives. Tell me, did I do something wrong by not arriving in time? If only I had come a few minutes earlier, maybe you’d at least remain conscious."

Only silence.

Tears start pouring from Makoto’s eyes as he clutches his head in his hands. "I'm so sorry, ____. I just don't know what to do without you."

Haruka closes the door and makes his way towards the waiting room. After entering the waiting room he looks at his friends with a composed expression.  He sits down with the others in silence.

“Haruka-senpai, will ____-senpai ever wake up?” Gou asks, trying her hardest for her tears not to well up. She leans into her older brother’s frame as she lowers her head.

Haruka doesn’t answer as he looks at the expressions on all of his friends’ faces.  They’re all in pain.




Crying. That’s the first thing you hear.

“What… where am I?” you softly say.

Makoto’s eyes widen as he bolts upright from the chair. “____, you’re awake! I-I’m going to call for the nurse.”

“Okay…” your regain focus of your surroundings and recall the incident that happened while you were last awake. You watch a doctor enter the room with a nurse to check on your vitals. You notice Makoto being asked to wait outside the room. He nods and looks back at you, a smile on his face as he wipes away his tears before exiting the room.




It was a year since the incident. You were discharged from the hospital early but still had a lot of therapy to do before you’re given the okay to return to normal activities. Today you were finally given the clearance from your doctor.

“Makoto, I’m home! Everything’s okay!” you exclaim as you walk inside the house.

“You still should’ve let me go with you to the doctor,” he pouts and crosses his arms.

“Hey, I asked you to take off from work today. That’s more than enough,” you cheerfully say as you tiptoe to kiss him on the lips. “Was the station able to manage without their ‘firefighter of the year’?”

Makoto chuckles, “Yes, they managed. So really… you’re given the okay to do ‘anything’?”

“Uh-huh…” you slyly grin at him, “I’ll race you to the bedroom.”

“You shouldn’t even have to ask,” he laughs as he races you upstairs.
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Comments: 48

Chai-and-Danishes [2018-06-12 04:35:00 +0000 UTC]

I love how *that’s* the first thing they go do after the reader is done with therapy. Priorities, man...

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american-otaku-girl [2017-01-26 06:17:10 +0000 UTC]

I love it i love it i love it and oh the pictures in my brain of Makoto as a firefighter...

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ScarletKnightReterns [2016-02-17 19:57:49 +0000 UTC]

You have played with my feelings!!!

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Shadow1601 [2015-04-22 21:21:23 +0000 UTC]

Ha! Very cute story! I loved it!  

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sourumeitos In reply to Shadow1601 [2015-06-05 10:52:32 +0000 UTC]

Yup.

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Inedible-Sashimii [2015-03-31 14:33:11 +0000 UTC]

0///0 Dammit!! these thoughts invading my mind again!

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LovinoFeliVargas [2015-03-30 23:05:23 +0000 UTC]

How dare you play us like that, thinking that it was going to be cute, then acting like reader was gonna, THEN MAKING MAKOTO DOUBT HIMSELF, and at the end have a cute\sexy scene. XD I don't know whether to cry or nose bleed lol

You did a really great job with this

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sourumeitos In reply to LovinoFeliVargas [2015-03-31 02:42:06 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. ;D playing with feels is what I do best.

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LovinoFeliVargas In reply to sourumeitos [2015-03-31 22:44:25 +0000 UTC]

Well then.... KEEP ON DOING GIRL

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kakumei2246 [2015-03-20 13:36:39 +0000 UTC]

Such a sweet story, I enjoyed reading it.

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ioniabulldog154 [2014-12-29 18:19:52 +0000 UTC]

Omigosh! I'm crying makoto is so sweet!!!

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kittykatt765 [2014-11-09 00:42:48 +0000 UTC]

OMG THIS WAS SOOO SCARY

AT THE BEGINNING I WAS LIKE:   
AFTER THAT I WAS LIKE:   
AFTER THAT I WAS LIKE:   
AFTER THAT I WAS LIKE:   
THEN AT THE END I WAS LIKE:   

(I literally had a nosebleed)

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ArtsyBlueWolf In reply to kittykatt765 [2015-01-14 23:34:51 +0000 UTC]

YOU'RE COMMENT IS THE MOST AWESOMEST I'VE EVER SEEN!!!!!

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kittykatt765 In reply to ArtsyBlueWolf [2015-01-15 12:39:30 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you! To me, you're comment is the most awesomest I've ever seen!!

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ArtsyBlueWolf In reply to kittykatt765 [2015-01-16 20:45:26 +0000 UTC]

THX!!!

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kittykatt765 In reply to ArtsyBlueWolf [2015-01-16 22:28:25 +0000 UTC]

YOU'RE WELCOME!!!

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Abcsparkie In reply to kittykatt765 [2014-12-06 04:32:16 +0000 UTC]

Comment of the year man

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kittykatt765 In reply to Abcsparkie [2014-12-06 12:59:53 +0000 UTC]

heh. ya that's what I thought of.  And so did my sister. 

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IfYouSayYouLoveMe [2014-09-30 16:58:19 +0000 UTC]

*sobs and chokes* I AM NOT CRYING I'M NOTTTTT

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KeiNunez [2014-09-26 04:17:58 +0000 UTC]

Aw, so sweet yet so sad. I'm glad she came back though. And Makoto, such a loving husband.

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MLoyalty [2014-09-25 06:11:45 +0000 UTC]

Wow, I felt so many feelings with this one.

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LunaGamerImInPortal [2014-09-22 21:43:22 +0000 UTC]

feels ;u;

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PiercetheOtaku [2014-09-14 11:07:06 +0000 UTC]

i really loved that ending though -u-

glad i didn't die, i think i would've cried in the afterlife ;A;

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stevie-writes [2014-09-05 19:40:16 +0000 UTC]

Ouch, right in the feels. 

Loved it though <3 

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FrozenMLPfan [2014-08-13 04:06:59 +0000 UTC]

//reads beginning//well that escalated quickly
//keeps reading// ;A; why u do did to me!
i luv this story

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lnfluenze [2014-08-10 02:04:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh dear god. You had me worried there, Author-san! I almost thought Reader-chan was gonna die. But thank god she didn't. anyways, enough of my blabbing. Great job on this! ;w;

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Yuekinomoto647 [2014-08-01 20:00:02 +0000 UTC]

Aww!! I'm so glad I didn't die, I don't think I could handle Makoto's crying.

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meyriu [2014-07-17 08:20:25 +0000 UTC]

okaaaaaaayyy this is awesome !! i almost cried at this !
somehow the way u end it is a bit too fast

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sourumeitos In reply to meyriu [2014-07-17 09:49:25 +0000 UTC]

lol that was my intention. It's a short story, after all. I appreciate the kind words though.

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Hatake75 [2014-07-15 14:11:15 +0000 UTC]

That was awesome!!! I especially loved the fluff... Are you gonna do a part 2?? I hope so 

♥♥♥♥♥♥

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sourumeitos In reply to Hatake75 [2014-07-15 15:17:16 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. And there's no need to do a part two. I made sure that this fic was broken down into small parts within so that it isn't necessary. This is a one-shot.

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Hatake75 In reply to sourumeitos [2014-07-17 22:07:11 +0000 UTC]

Oh well OK then my bad... :/

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xxNordicFlagsxx [2014-07-13 23:43:21 +0000 UTC]

AGH, YOU SCARED ME. DON'T DO THAT! D8 

The first part had me like,  

The second part had me like  

The third part had me like  

The fourth part had me like  

The last part had me like   

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sourumeitos In reply to xxNordicFlagsxx [2014-07-14 00:06:33 +0000 UTC]

HAHA! That means I did my job right then by making you get all different kinds of feels~ :'D <3

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Anime-and-Disney [2014-07-13 15:27:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh that was amazing!

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sourumeitos In reply to Anime-and-Disney [2014-07-13 15:29:17 +0000 UTC]

Ahh thank you! (:

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BleachMyLife [2014-07-13 07:36:47 +0000 UTC]

I think I just found my favourite Free! fanfiction. This was beautifully done! I absolutely loved this story. It made my heart shatter and then jump for joy.

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sourumeitos In reply to BleachMyLife [2014-07-13 15:02:39 +0000 UTC]

Whoa, I really appreciate your kind words! To have that kind of effect on you with this fic means that I did my job right. Thank you so much! (:

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BleachMyLife In reply to sourumeitos [2014-07-13 18:53:29 +0000 UTC]

It's no problem! I love your writing. c:

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Kikisan333 [2014-07-12 04:20:29 +0000 UTC]

i thought reader-chan was gonna die

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sourumeitos In reply to Kikisan333 [2014-07-12 04:36:23 +0000 UTC]

she originally was :'D but I changed my mind last minute and decided not to put anyone through the heartache ;u;

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milkiue [2014-07-11 04:09:18 +0000 UTC]

i almost had a heart attack with reader-chan dyING 
coughs blood
why

though another hella good story oh my gosh *0*

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sourumeitos In reply to milkiue [2014-07-11 04:14:11 +0000 UTC]

YO I WAS ORIGINALLY GONNA KILL HER OFF LOL. Then I added random fluff parts at the beginning and the end and was like "...so much for that."

why thank you. ;D I tried. OTL

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milkiue In reply to sourumeitos [2014-07-11 04:16:52 +0000 UTC]

tHATS THE MOST EVIL POSSIBLE
think about makoto auTHOR-CHAN ;A;

omfg angst-y fics are so good but so bad 

yea np! u have achieved many great things 

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sourumeitos In reply to milkiue [2014-07-11 04:18:46 +0000 UTC]

-cough- maybe if i feel like writing an angsty fic again I'll kill someone off hehe D; ...or not.

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milkiue In reply to sourumeitos [2014-07-11 04:23:18 +0000 UTC]

you have too much power

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sourumeitos In reply to milkiue [2014-07-11 12:48:08 +0000 UTC]

(whispers) I sent you a message btw... ;__;

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milkiue In reply to sourumeitos [2014-07-11 19:53:49 +0000 UTC]

eeeep thank you again for it, ill go make a psa now

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