Comments: 48
Chai-and-Danishes [2018-06-12 04:35:00 +0000 UTC]
I love how *that’s* the first thing they go do after the reader is done with therapy. Priorities, man...
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Shadow1601 [2015-04-22 21:21:23 +0000 UTC]
Ha! Very cute story! I loved it!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Inedible-Sashimii [2015-03-31 14:33:11 +0000 UTC]
0///0 Dammit!! these thoughts invading my mind again!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
LovinoFeliVargas [2015-03-30 23:05:23 +0000 UTC]
How dare you play us like that, thinking that it was going to be cute, then acting like reader was gonna, THEN MAKING MAKOTO DOUBT HIMSELF, and at the end have a cute\sexy scene. XD I don't know whether to cry or nose bleed lol
You did a really great job with this
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
sourumeitos In reply to LovinoFeliVargas [2015-03-31 02:42:06 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. ;D playing with feels is what I do best.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
kakumei2246 [2015-03-20 13:36:39 +0000 UTC]
Such a sweet story, I enjoyed reading it.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
ioniabulldog154 [2014-12-29 18:19:52 +0000 UTC]
Omigosh! I'm crying makoto is so sweet!!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
kittykatt765 [2014-11-09 00:42:48 +0000 UTC]
OMG THIS WAS SOOO SCARY
AT THE BEGINNING I WAS LIKE:
AFTER THAT I WAS LIKE:
AFTER THAT I WAS LIKE:
AFTER THAT I WAS LIKE:
THEN AT THE END I WAS LIKE:
(I literally had a nosebleed)
👍: 0 ⏩: 2
ArtsyBlueWolf In reply to kittykatt765 [2015-01-14 23:34:51 +0000 UTC]
YOU'RE COMMENT IS THE MOST AWESOMEST I'VE EVER SEEN!!!!!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
IfYouSayYouLoveMe [2014-09-30 16:58:19 +0000 UTC]
*sobs and chokes* I AM NOT CRYING I'M NOTTTTT
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
KeiNunez [2014-09-26 04:17:58 +0000 UTC]
Aw, so sweet yet so sad. I'm glad she came back though. And Makoto, such a loving husband.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
MLoyalty [2014-09-25 06:11:45 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I felt so many feelings with this one.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
PiercetheOtaku [2014-09-14 11:07:06 +0000 UTC]
i really loved that ending though -u-
glad i didn't die, i think i would've cried in the afterlife ;A;
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
stevie-writes [2014-09-05 19:40:16 +0000 UTC]
Ouch, right in the feels.
Loved it though <3
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
FrozenMLPfan [2014-08-13 04:06:59 +0000 UTC]
//reads beginning//well that escalated quickly
//keeps reading// ;A; why u do did to me!
i luv this story
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
lnfluenze [2014-08-10 02:04:38 +0000 UTC]
Oh dear god. You had me worried there, Author-san! I almost thought Reader-chan was gonna die. But thank god she didn't. anyways, enough of my blabbing. Great job on this! ;w;
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Yuekinomoto647 [2014-08-01 20:00:02 +0000 UTC]
Aww!! I'm so glad I didn't die, I don't think I could handle Makoto's crying.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
sourumeitos In reply to meyriu [2014-07-17 09:49:25 +0000 UTC]
lol that was my intention. It's a short story, after all. I appreciate the kind words though.
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Hatake75 [2014-07-15 14:11:15 +0000 UTC]
That was awesome!!! I especially loved the fluff... Are you gonna do a part 2?? I hope so
♥♥♥♥♥♥
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
sourumeitos In reply to Hatake75 [2014-07-15 15:17:16 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. And there's no need to do a part two. I made sure that this fic was broken down into small parts within so that it isn't necessary. This is a one-shot.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
Hatake75 In reply to sourumeitos [2014-07-17 22:07:11 +0000 UTC]
Oh well OK then my bad... :/
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
xxNordicFlagsxx [2014-07-13 23:43:21 +0000 UTC]
AGH, YOU SCARED ME. DON'T DO THAT! D8
The first part had me like,
The second part had me like
The third part had me like
The fourth part had me like
The last part had me like
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
sourumeitos In reply to xxNordicFlagsxx [2014-07-14 00:06:33 +0000 UTC]
HAHA! That means I did my job right then by making you get all different kinds of feels~ :'D <3
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Anime-and-Disney [2014-07-13 15:27:35 +0000 UTC]
Oh my gosh that was amazing!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
sourumeitos In reply to BleachMyLife [2014-07-13 15:02:39 +0000 UTC]
Whoa, I really appreciate your kind words! To have that kind of effect on you with this fic means that I did my job right. Thank you so much! (:
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
BleachMyLife In reply to sourumeitos [2014-07-13 18:53:29 +0000 UTC]
It's no problem! I love your writing. c:
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
Kikisan333 [2014-07-12 04:20:29 +0000 UTC]
i thought reader-chan was gonna die
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
sourumeitos In reply to Kikisan333 [2014-07-12 04:36:23 +0000 UTC]
she originally was :'D but I changed my mind last minute and decided not to put anyone through the heartache ;u;
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
milkiue [2014-07-11 04:09:18 +0000 UTC]
i almost had a heart attack with reader-chan dyING
coughs blood
why
though another hella good story oh my gosh *0*
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
sourumeitos In reply to milkiue [2014-07-11 04:14:11 +0000 UTC]
YO I WAS ORIGINALLY GONNA KILL HER OFF LOL. Then I added random fluff parts at the beginning and the end and was like "...so much for that."
why thank you. ;D I tried. OTL
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
milkiue In reply to sourumeitos [2014-07-11 04:16:52 +0000 UTC]
tHATS THE MOST EVIL POSSIBLE
think about makoto auTHOR-CHAN ;A;
omfg angst-y fics are so good but so bad
yea np! u have achieved many great things
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
sourumeitos In reply to milkiue [2014-07-11 04:18:46 +0000 UTC]
-cough- maybe if i feel like writing an angsty fic again I'll kill someone off hehe D; ...or not.
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
milkiue In reply to sourumeitos [2014-07-11 04:23:18 +0000 UTC]
you have too much power
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
sourumeitos In reply to milkiue [2014-07-11 12:48:08 +0000 UTC]
(whispers) I sent you a message btw... ;__;
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
milkiue In reply to sourumeitos [2014-07-11 19:53:49 +0000 UTC]
eeeep thank you again for it, ill go make a psa now
👍: 0 ⏩: 0