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soquedhozi — Where smoke curls: Gothigo
Published: 2010-05-14 13:47:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 246; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 6
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Description It's Central Park in black and white, early morning spring mist slowly rising from the ground and a girl in pigtails with an umbrella under her arm walking away.

It's people crossing a street, you can only see their shoes and there's so much black and brown and a pair of yellow flats catches your attention but they're not in focus.

It's a small bar in Queens and a young man looks up from his glass, his lips so beautiful you can't look away from his smile long enough to notice it doesn't reach his eyes.

It's a group of good-looking people laughing, but you focus on the four that aren't - they're spread out but you can tell they're together, their hair and clothes black and their stares makes you feel uneasy.

It's one of them, the one with a splash of red in his hair, in profile against the bright lights of a late night New York and you can tell he's clenching his jaw but there's something soft in his gaze when he looks at you.





And once the cameras are off and while the film is being developed - because this is done the old-fashioned way - there are the things you don't see; the tiny two-room apartment where cigarette smoke curls around the dirty dishes, where the bed is never made but the sheets are always clean. Where nicotine-stained fingers run through bright blue hair and where there are more DVDs than books.

It's a dream and Indigo is living it.
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Comments: 14

theEVILduchess [2010-05-31 05:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Oh, oh Hozi. You do know that I love you, right? Ridiculously so? In an absurd, silly way that only nerdy fangirls (who now knows waaaay too much about pig oil) can?

This was lovely. The imagery was so...so...I dunno, great. The part about Lulu's shoes, the apartment, Lucas, and Vivi and the goths and the sheets and everysinglelittledetail was beautiful. You've captured Indigo in a much better way then I could ever do, seeing him in your hands is marvelous. I constantly find myself admiring your obvious talent.

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soquedhozi In reply to theEVILduchess [2010-06-03 00:37:57 +0000 UTC]

As I love you, m'dear Duchess

I think this is... one of the best things I've written. I'm just happy someone like Indigo has been created, to be an outlet for weird scribbles like this one. Really, the credit should go to you. <3

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tazrrr [2010-05-15 06:49:01 +0000 UTC]

I like this in insane amounts.





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i really do hope someone comes along and makes that smile reach his eyes

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soquedhozi In reply to tazrrr [2010-05-15 16:32:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm liking it more and more myself. It might be one of the best things I've written this year.


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Don't read too much into that part. It's really just there to be pretty.

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tazrrr In reply to soquedhozi [2010-05-16 01:09:17 +0000 UTC]

I would believe it is too; except, you know, the Lulllleee : D


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goood <333

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soquedhozi In reply to tazrrr [2010-05-16 02:13:18 +0000 UTC]

*sigh* the Lulee. Oh, it's so retardedly beautiful and amazing! I will never get enough!

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WaitingInTheRain69 [2010-05-14 20:26:56 +0000 UTC]

*re-reads it squealing* This just painted the picture so vividly in my head, you could just see it as a mini-movie! You really pwn at writing these!

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soquedhozi In reply to WaitingInTheRain69 [2010-05-15 16:33:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! That was part of what I wanted.
You pwn at reading them (;

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WaitingInTheRain69 In reply to soquedhozi [2010-05-15 20:09:56 +0000 UTC]

And you say I spoil YOU too much!

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solmie96 [2010-05-14 16:25:03 +0000 UTC]

Hozi, sweet lord....
your use of imagery is astounding.
Your writing is poetry. I loved this especially! with all it's beautiful details and lovely whispers that make me shiver. This was picturesque, eloquent, PERFECT!
I am in love! XD could that "splash of red in his hair" be red goth? or maybe my charlie?
over all, this was wondorous. XD I love reading your writing whenever I'm having a downer day, because it never fails to lift me back on my feet again!

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soquedhozi In reply to solmie96 [2010-05-15 16:39:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh, darling, your comment makes me so happy I didn't want to reply to it at first because having it here waiting for me every time I checked my messages made me so happy <3
But that's silly, and you deserve thanks. I'm so happy this got to you, because it's really one of the best pieces I've written in a long time.
The boy in question is our dear Red Goth, but now that you mention Charlie... I should write something with him. Something nice, for you, once I'm done with your present

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solmie96 In reply to soquedhozi [2010-05-20 19:51:57 +0000 UTC]

oh geee, you're makin me blush, Hozi!

I'm real happy that you're happy, XD but I was just pointing out what's true. This piece really did melt my heart.

haha, I knew it was Red Goth! I'm usually terrible at guessing things,so I'm quite proud of myself.
awww~ if you'd write something with my dear Charlie, I'd be smiling for days! It'd make me insanely happy if you would!

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Leo-Kid [2010-05-14 13:58:46 +0000 UTC]

Hozi-dear, this was just wonderful. Really. New York scene and all the lovely cameos and beautiful words! <3

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soquedhozi In reply to Leo-Kid [2010-05-14 14:01:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I kind of like it myself.

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