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theEVILduchess [2010-05-31 05:16:21 +0000 UTC]
Oh, oh Hozi. You do know that I love you, right? Ridiculously so? In an absurd, silly way that only nerdy fangirls (who now knows waaaay too much about pig oil) can?
This was lovely. The imagery was so...so...I dunno, great. The part about Lulu's shoes, the apartment, Lucas, and Vivi and the goths and the sheets and everysinglelittledetail was beautiful. You've captured Indigo in a much better way then I could ever do, seeing him in your hands is marvelous. I constantly find myself admiring your obvious talent.
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tazrrr In reply to soquedhozi [2010-05-16 01:09:17 +0000 UTC]
I would believe it is too; except, you know, the Lulllleee : D
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goood <333
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soquedhozi In reply to tazrrr [2010-05-16 02:13:18 +0000 UTC]
*sigh* the Lulee. Oh, it's so retardedly beautiful and amazing! I will never get enough!
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WaitingInTheRain69 [2010-05-14 20:26:56 +0000 UTC]
*re-reads it squealing* This just painted the picture so vividly in my head, you could just see it as a mini-movie! You really pwn at writing these!
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soquedhozi In reply to WaitingInTheRain69 [2010-05-15 16:33:33 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! That was part of what I wanted.
You pwn at reading them (;
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solmie96 [2010-05-14 16:25:03 +0000 UTC]
Hozi, sweet lord....
your use of imagery is astounding.
Your writing is poetry. I loved this especially! with all it's beautiful details and lovely whispers that make me shiver. This was picturesque, eloquent, PERFECT!
I am in love! XD could that "splash of red in his hair" be red goth? or maybe my charlie?
over all, this was wondorous. XD I love reading your writing whenever I'm having a downer day, because it never fails to lift me back on my feet again!
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Leo-Kid [2010-05-14 13:58:46 +0000 UTC]
Hozi-dear, this was just wonderful. Really. New York scene and all the lovely cameos and beautiful words! <3
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soquedhozi In reply to Leo-Kid [2010-05-14 14:01:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I kind of like it myself.
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