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soquedhozi β€” Goodbye, Mary Sue
Published: 2010-01-09 07:17:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 543; Favourites: 10; Downloads: 4
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Description Love smiles and leans in over the girl, letting one long finger run along the curve of her jaw. Her eyes are large and innocent, her features so delicate she looks like a porcelain doll even in the sharp, unforgiving light that surrounds them.

"Do you think they love you?" he whispers, observing the perfect shape of her eyebrows and the way her lower lip trembles. "Do you think anyone has ever loved you?"

"Of course"; she whispers back, her voice shaking with emotion. "Why would they not? I am beautiful."

"You have no personality."

"I am nice to everyone."

"As I said, you have no personality. No opinion."

"I do! I like cute things and strawberries and I'm always caring for those that needs it despite feeling so lonely because no one understands me and I really don't like rude people though I think-"

Love leans in closer and she shuts her eyes for a moment, eyelashes so long and thick they rest against her cheek. When she opens them again, wondering why he hasn't kissed her, he has a new look in his violet eyes.

"Do you think I am beautiful?" he asks her, his voice soft. She looks at him – his cheeks are sunken in, his upper lip is not as full as it could've been, his nose is a little too long, his black curls hang down as if they haven't been washed in a while. Even the yellow ribbon tying it back looks stained and she sees now that his clothes seem old, worn out.

"Yes, Love, I do."

"And yet I am not perfect. I have flaws, I'm arrogant, I'm nosy. I rarely give people what they want the moment they want it, I'm inconsiderate and selfish at times. This makes me, for some reason, more human than you. Do you think you have flaws, my dear?"

She looks at him in confusion. "I am unique."

"You're boring." He lights a cigarette. She opens her mouth-

-and disappears. Love pokes the remaining silver dust with the toe of his sneaker.

"Goodbye, Mary Sue."
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Comments: 25

Silverfoxalchemist [2011-08-07 00:19:13 +0000 UTC]

THANK YOU THANK TH HAN HANK YOU!!!

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soquedhozi In reply to Silverfoxalchemist [2011-08-07 00:55:38 +0000 UTC]

Hahah, you're welcome!

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Silverfoxalchemist In reply to soquedhozi [2011-08-07 03:19:30 +0000 UTC]

you donΒ΄t know how much i hate mary sues......i used to do them when i was like 7.....

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soquedhozi In reply to Silverfoxalchemist [2011-08-07 14:21:24 +0000 UTC]

I think everyone had them at some point - but what else can you do when you grow up with things like Sailor Moon and you desperately want your fandom crush? I think they're a part of growing up, in a way, but... the problem is that not everyone outgrows them .___.

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Silverfoxalchemist In reply to soquedhozi [2011-08-07 19:06:20 +0000 UTC]

yup when i was like 8 ish i did a tokyo mew mew mary sue....i used to think she was so adorable..(she was part fox as foxes are my favorite animal) but now when i look at her... i want to pull every hair out of my head......

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ChristmasPrincess [2010-01-24 08:56:12 +0000 UTC]

...Holy crap.

Fav.

xD

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soquedhozi In reply to ChristmasPrincess [2010-01-24 17:05:49 +0000 UTC]

He's just made of awesome, isn't he? Thank you <3

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ChristmasPrincess In reply to soquedhozi [2010-01-24 17:19:24 +0000 UTC]

Yes. I'm 100% sure he's the best oc I've ever seen......Ever. xD

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soquedhozi In reply to ChristmasPrincess [2010-01-24 17:42:49 +0000 UTC]

Huzzah! :3 that makes me very happy <3

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Leo-Kid [2010-01-09 19:32:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh Love...Love is my hero <3 Oh goodness if anyone could take on a Mary Sue like THAT it's Love.

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soquedhozi In reply to Leo-Kid [2010-01-10 02:11:40 +0000 UTC]

He has magical poweeeers! And Sue-eyes, but I kind of think he's allowed that. Especially after this :3

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OrangeHush [2010-01-09 17:29:51 +0000 UTC]

Yaaaaaaaaay! If anyone could do away with MS, it would be Love. Seriously, Love is one of the best OCs in any fandom, anywhere, evar.

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soquedhozi In reply to OrangeHush [2010-01-09 18:05:50 +0000 UTC]

He's also the best head-voice! I'd narrate my whole life from his point of view if I could. It's hilarious.

It's crazy how much you all like him. I'm so proud over him it's silly. Thank you <3

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OrangeHush In reply to soquedhozi [2010-01-09 18:07:27 +0000 UTC]

Seriously. I'm borrowing Love. He's going to show up in "Aquae Multae" cause there's a fair bit of work for him to do...

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soquedhozi In reply to OrangeHush [2010-01-09 18:20:26 +0000 UTC]

Huzzah! He will be soooo happy to dance around in your amazing Hushverse. And I will be equally happy to see him in your hands.

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theEVILduchess [2010-01-09 15:09:14 +0000 UTC]

Sorry you guys, Love is mine! I'll feed him and water him every day. And hug him too.

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soquedhozi In reply to theEVILduchess [2010-01-09 15:10:22 +0000 UTC]

I promise you, Duchess, there's enough Love for everyone <3

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WaitingInTheRain69 [2010-01-09 10:51:28 +0000 UTC]

What would we do without Love? If he wasn't here, there'd be fangirls everywhere!!! I'm gunna kidnap him as well!

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soquedhozi In reply to WaitingInTheRain69 [2010-01-09 13:52:48 +0000 UTC]

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tazrrr [2010-01-09 09:09:02 +0000 UTC]

Holymoly, I swear to god I am Love's biggest fangirl. As soon as I get my hands on a printer I shall print every single picture you've drawn of him. And stick them on my wall. And my schoolbooks

Your amazing. Really.

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soquedhozi In reply to tazrrr [2010-01-09 09:50:51 +0000 UTC]

:''D
I love the fact that you fangirl on him (yes, I consider 'fangirl' to be a verb at times). It's so insanely awesome, you have no idea <3

you're more amazing! your love is better than tea & newly-baked scones.

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SkaterSkittle [2010-01-09 07:58:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh, me like. Love is just the guy to bitchslap (using words rather than hands) a Mary-Sue.8D

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soquedhozi In reply to SkaterSkittle [2010-01-09 08:01:32 +0000 UTC]

I have voices in my head that make me creative :'D

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butanokaabii [2010-01-09 07:25:18 +0000 UTC]

Another awesome Mary Sue-related piece.

(Also, I like cute things and sending people very long and detailed insults. This>>>>>Sue by default.)

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soquedhozi In reply to butanokaabii [2010-01-09 07:31:45 +0000 UTC]

What can I say? They DO inspire me. You should see the submission I got earlier today. It made me want to stab my own eyes out. It's a good thing I have Love D:

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