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Published: 2010-01-09 09:49:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 131; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description As I lay there in my bed,
I think of you, my sweet,
It just won't leave my head,
The first day we meet,

Your long, flowing brown hair,
And your dark, chocolate brown eyes,
Your skin soft and fair,
With all these features, no wonder you attract all the guys,

With your sweet, soft voice like chocolate,
I was drawn to you like a bee to a flower,
My hands in my pocket,
I went to talk to you, not doing my usual cower,

Hanging out with you was a treat,
By being with you, I started to learn new things,
I was a new person for people to meet,
My personality was so loud; I could hear it as it rings,

As I stared into your eyes,
I was glad for what I've done,
That was when I would realize,
You were the one,

The one who brought me up when I was down,
The one who constantly made me happy,
The one I wanted to hold hands with, in any town,
But, you were the one who completed me,

And what makes me feel that way,
What you say, how you look,
Took my breath away,
Especially the way you can cook,

So with my confidence high,
And with no worry or doubt,
I walk to you, knowing where my feelings lie,
Deciding to ask you out,

Without a care in the world, I carry on,
My heart and emotions have finally won,
All my fears were gone,
It was all because, you were the one.
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Comments: 4

Midna-Mcellion [2010-05-03 05:07:36 +0000 UTC]

That is so sweet~
you're very emotional
I write poems too


... years ago I got a award for writing a poem about link LOL but you know im not attracted to him anymore....

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SonicMan17 In reply to Midna-Mcellion [2010-05-18 18:33:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks. you really aren't? lol who is it this time?

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Midna-Mcellion In reply to SonicMan17 [2010-05-21 17:08:00 +0000 UTC]

im emotional XD i write stories better then poetry

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SonicMan17 In reply to Midna-Mcellion [2010-05-21 23:23:08 +0000 UTC]

lol really?

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