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SomberAid — African wild dog

Published: 2015-02-05 15:57:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 512; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Description More lineless art becouse I can. o3o I really enyoj making fur textures cx with some markings its a bit hard tho.. I did fail a bit with getting the markings look right with the fur here... but ohweelll

Hope you all like it ^^ I drew this mainly becouse we are writing about endangered animals in my english lesson, I am writing about the AWD so I felt like drawing one They have such beutiful fur <3

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heroined [2015-02-05 16:05:27 +0000 UTC]

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Ohwell
I really like the fur texture here, it looks really nice and natural. It lovely fits with lineless style, which I'm still practicing, so I hope I can lear from you!
I also adore the spots on dogs back, it looks very good <3
Shading around muzzle is a bit flat, whcih makes the head look really weird. The head anatomy generally doesn't really resemble lycaon...
Eyedots should be a lot higher than they're now. Left eye looks mutated or soemthing and the general eye detail doesn't fit into drawing
Nose is almost not shaded and the mouth line isn't even fully colored.
Ears look really cute though and their shape is almost perfect.
Lighting in general looks really appealing, especially on dog's back and neck.
As for the background I really love the color choice and the way birds are drawn. Trees should be more developed though.
Oh
And the dog has huge gap between neck and chest in the front! XD

So ye that's all ;;

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SomberAid In reply to heroined [2015-02-05 16:51:02 +0000 UTC]

First of all - the gap between the neck and the chest isnt a gap, the light made the fur disapear somehow... eh didnt realise that.

I was actualy looking at a reference for once, so the eyebrows are not misplaced here, actualy ^^' ...however I cant find it now for some reason.... but actualy when I look at it now again, I have actualy placed one of them really weirdly o-e I will probably fix that cx I saved it as a psd file anyway.

about the shading around the muzzle - I know about this but it is really hard to make it look alright there o-e I need to find something to look at so I know how to really do it there. 

I do aswell have problem with this pose, with the other eye, so yeah it is understandable that it looks a bit strange, o3o' 

Anyway thank you for you critique, I will attempt to fix it slightly cx

oh and I didnt really understand what you meant with the mouth line?

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heroined In reply to SomberAid [2015-02-05 16:53:08 +0000 UTC]

mann  what happened to the text wy are the codes everywhere ;A;

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SomberAid In reply to heroined [2015-02-05 16:57:40 +0000 UTC]

It happens at times owo' I think I fixed it? 

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heroined In reply to SomberAid [2015-02-05 17:05:15 +0000 UTC]

Oh, now it's ok XD

Yeah, I understand XD 
As for the mouth line I just mean that the dot on the end of the mouth isn't colored fully, I can see colorful pixels underneath
But ye
it's a good drawing anyway ;v;

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SomberAid In reply to heroined [2015-02-05 18:36:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I know about the mouth, I usualy draw that way... I dont know why I like drawing it like that, but I suppose its part of my style or something? xD

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heroined In reply to SomberAid [2015-02-05 18:37:56 +0000 UTC]

oh XD
if so, then go on with this XD

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SomberAid In reply to heroined [2015-02-05 18:40:54 +0000 UTC]

I fixed the gap between the neck, so that it is visible that it is fur, I dont know why it did that o3o might have drawn it on wrong layer then accidently covered it or something, who knows. also fixed the eyebrow.

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heroined In reply to SomberAid [2015-02-05 18:47:42 +0000 UTC]

Nice nice <3

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aniwablue [2015-02-09 19:42:47 +0000 UTC]

Wow...! That's amazing! When a draw looks more beautiful and right than a picture, that's tell me the artist have fantastic talents! You're a pro!

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SomberAid In reply to aniwablue [2015-02-10 17:54:28 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you ;; tho I think I should have made the markings on the shoulder go more along with the fur, thats one thing I think I did wrong... thank you also for still being such an awesome watcher, can't thank you enough for that x3

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aniwablue In reply to SomberAid [2015-02-15 03:00:38 +0000 UTC]

You're truly welcome!

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