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RoseOfTealColour [2018-01-29 17:31:53 +0000 UTC]

If you don't mind, I'd like to offer some advice. ^^

The colours are nice, so I'm not going to go into any of that. her neck seems a little bit long. if you removed the collars, it'd be more obvious. 

The curve at the top of the breasts (near the zigzag pattern on her sleeves) is where they sort of "connect" to the armpits. If you look at it this way, it makes for a very narrow torso. A little note that breasts of this size usually hang lower without a bra. If she is wearing one, then they shouldn't face outwards. Fixing the curve below the shoulders/above the breasts would help it a lot. I would suggest making the chest wider.
You can explain the shape of the breasts and their position by saying that it is a special type of clothing she is wearing, but not the width.

As for the shading, pay attention to where the light is coming from. I would say it's coming from the upper left of the picture. Always try to stick to where and how the shadows would fall. Her right shoulder has a little bit too much shadow on it. It would start closer to her collar. There is some lack of shading where her head and neck meet. There is also something off about the shading of the breasts.

Her nose is a bit too high up, and her forehead seems a little too small, but it might only be the hair. Perhaps dragging them closer together and slightly lower would improve the overall look, but I'm not very experienced at faces.

Don't get any of this wrong, I'm not aying it's a bad piece. I only listed all of this because I know you can improve. ^^
Also, I'm not an expert, so sorry if i got anything wrong. I would still advise looking at references, even if you are drawing anime characters. The overall structure is still the similar. 
I'm sorry if the way I write is confusing, I'm not a native English speaker, so I tend to make some mistakes.

Don't give up, I believe in you. <3

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