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Description Souviens-toi!
Graphite, charcoal (vine and compressed), white chalk on charcoal paper
Completed August 9, 2005
18'' x 24''

Here's one of my summer assignments for the AP studio art class I'll be taking this fall. This particular assignment was to create a still life from observation that includes a wide range of value and use of space (forground, middle ground, background). My drawing was inspired by a poem by one of my favorite writers.

--NOTE--The original piece was all done with traditional media, hence why I placed it in that category. However, the charcoal bits were being difficult and kept giving me a glare whenever I tried to take a picture. The picture I feel came out the best had a tiny glare on the vase, and I removed it with paint shop pro. I also added the black border with this program. I did the best I could to make it look not so obvious...hope it worked ><

Oh, and I AM aware that the roman numeral for the number 4 is actually IV rather than IIII...strangely enough it wasn't like that on the clock I used so I just decided to copy it even though it's wrong. Observation is a major part of any successful drawing, so I draw what I see.


The Clock

Frightening, impassive, sinister, the clock
Raises his finger like a threat: Remember!
Your heart becomes a target: griefs past number
Aimed at its quivering centre, strike and stick.

Pleasure evaporates: will disappear,
Fade like a dancer as the stage goes dark.
Your joys are rationed: each one leaves its mark:
Devours you, and diminishes your share.

Three thousand and six hundred times an hour
An insect voice reminds you like a rhyme:
'I'm now.' Then, 'I am once upon a time--
A filthy tube through which your life will pour.'

'Souviens-toi. Remember.' Unsparing! 'Esto memor.'
(My metal throat speaks all the languages)
'Don't lose your chance, and don't be frivolous.
Extract the gold; treat minutes like an ore.'

Time is a gambler who can't stop. Remember!
He always wins and doesn't need to cheat.
The gulf is thirsty; sands are running out;
Day fades. The night draws in. It is December.

The hours will strike: Chance, the Divinity,
Or Virtue, your distinguished virgin spouse,
Or even Remorse, the last room in the house,
--Or everything, will say: 'Too late now. Die!'

~Charles Baudelaire
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Comments: 83

sognatore In reply to ??? [2006-11-12 17:19:50 +0000 UTC]

thanks!!

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Shadowgrail [2005-10-02 01:57:19 +0000 UTC]

I really like your control of graytones here and your varying textures ! Nicely done indeed ! :woot:

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sognatore In reply to Shadowgrail [2005-10-02 19:14:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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resada [2005-09-20 16:54:37 +0000 UTC]

This is lovely. I like the way you conveyed depth and position. I am just begining to draw, and have no technical training, so I hope to study folks like you and learn a lot from it[I hope!]

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sognatore In reply to resada [2005-09-20 19:33:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot! and thanks for the fave too

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MissCait726 [2005-09-11 02:07:38 +0000 UTC]

wow, thats really good. i especially like the clock and the vase. thats funny about the roman numeral thing. haha.

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sognatore In reply to MissCait726 [2005-09-11 14:25:18 +0000 UTC]

^^ thanks

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imakebuckets [2005-09-10 10:40:37 +0000 UTC]

breathtaking,should be a DD

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sognatore In reply to imakebuckets [2005-09-10 15:37:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks I'm glad you think it's good enough to be a DD it makes me happy

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imakebuckets In reply to sognatore [2005-09-10 16:45:41 +0000 UTC]

good

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GenaroDesia [2005-09-05 15:08:37 +0000 UTC]

yeah nice

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sognatore In reply to GenaroDesia [2005-09-06 19:49:01 +0000 UTC]

thx ^_^

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Lysistrata [2005-09-05 06:40:15 +0000 UTC]

Excellent job with the assignment - looks great

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sognatore In reply to Lysistrata [2005-09-05 14:01:55 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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skyd [2005-09-04 19:13:03 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful!!
Excellent details - so pleasent to watch

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sognatore In reply to skyd [2005-09-05 00:37:09 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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mbeckett [2005-09-04 03:40:52 +0000 UTC]

terrific drawing. very unique subject matter for a still life. well done!

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sognatore In reply to mbeckett [2005-09-04 14:45:23 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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TBCorpse [2005-08-29 05:01:41 +0000 UTC]

the god has awoken.
all must worhsip.
now.
...WORSHIP YOU DUMB BASTARDS
thats better.

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sognatore In reply to TBCorpse [2005-08-29 15:30:22 +0000 UTC]

hahahahh and thanks for the fave :3

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xanthisma [2005-08-22 05:44:25 +0000 UTC]

first of all...sorry for the superly late reply

this is an amazing piece!!! that's mighty awesome i tells ya!!! i suck at drawing still life u see i'm just a boring portrait person -_-

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sognatore In reply to xanthisma [2005-08-22 13:08:35 +0000 UTC]

lol portraits are never boring and thanks, i'm glad youi like my piece :3

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xanthisma In reply to sognatore [2005-08-25 08:36:15 +0000 UTC]

LOL well...if it's got a fun expression or sumthing
OF COURSE i like it!! it's awesome!!!! ^^

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apocthepengu [2005-08-21 03:01:05 +0000 UTC]

WOW. You > everything.

And you used my favorite poem, too! ^___^

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sognatore In reply to apocthepengu [2005-08-21 14:20:42 +0000 UTC]

^_^ thanks a lot! Glad you like it Heheh the poem kicks ass, doesn't it?? I love Baudelaire

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shadowswillshine [2005-08-16 04:01:42 +0000 UTC]

PS

What's the title mean? And HOW did you get the numbers on the clock so straight?!

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sognatore In reply to shadowswillshine [2005-08-16 13:32:18 +0000 UTC]

I believe the title means 'remember'...but my french is crap so don't hold it against me if i'm completely wrong XD. I just snagged it from the poem lol

As for the numbers...I just kept erasing them until they looked right lol which is probably why the clock took me a longer time to finish than the rest of the still life combined lol

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shadowswillshine [2005-08-16 03:56:24 +0000 UTC]

... I hate you.
How can you do this? My self-esteme, my cofidance! XD My over-reaction! This is really good. I jealous. You awesome.

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sognatore In reply to shadowswillshine [2005-08-16 13:30:28 +0000 UTC]

thanks lol I know, I know, down with realism and all that jazz. But like I said, my personal goal for this year is to outdo Leah on at least one project lol I"m sick of her hogging all the attention. I want my work to get attention too, dammit!!

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shadowswillshine In reply to sognatore [2005-08-16 13:54:56 +0000 UTC]

But it is getting attention! From me!

I'll fawn over all your stuff, like I did last year, I promise ^.^

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sognatore In reply to shadowswillshine [2005-08-16 21:09:16 +0000 UTC]

yaaaay i'm getting attention from my bestest buddy zephyr

I'll fawn over your stuff too. Mwahaa. And if needed we'll start a classmate support group to help each other recover from blais's harsh criticisms, if he's gonna kick our asses as much as richardson says he will ><

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shadowswillshine In reply to sognatore [2005-08-17 02:27:13 +0000 UTC]

Does Miss R say he's gonna kick our collective retums? Let him try. We'll form a support group, all right. A support group full of Coupling and Muse and the painting soundtrack.

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sognatore In reply to shadowswillshine [2005-08-17 13:08:14 +0000 UTC]

YAAAAAAAAAY mwahahahah and together, you and me and bane will take over the art class. Mwahah it'll be like a coupling/muse/painting soundtrack/olive garden fanclub.

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aeon-of-sorrow [2005-08-14 05:20:01 +0000 UTC]

tis a trulty awsome bit of tonal work, it really is. everything's got such a sense of form and's so solid. the array of objects is also extremaly interesting as they allow you to work with a hole different veriaty of surfaces. i especially like the hour glass.

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sognatore In reply to aeon-of-sorrow [2005-08-14 13:17:18 +0000 UTC]

awww thanks so much!

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splfbuff [2005-08-10 17:55:39 +0000 UTC]

hot damn, that's impressive. charcoal's hard to work with, from what little i've seen. And that is damn good.

and honestly? i wouldn't have even noticed the 4 on the clock. its off to the side just enough that I think most people wouldn't. Ah well, my II cents in.

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sognatore In reply to splfbuff [2005-08-10 22:58:02 +0000 UTC]

thkank you!

and yeah, i know the 4 isn't a big deal, but deep down i'm a crazed perfectionist lol

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splfbuff In reply to sognatore [2005-08-10 23:34:03 +0000 UTC]

better that than overly apathetic, in my not so humble opinion

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sognatore In reply to splfbuff [2005-08-11 14:55:34 +0000 UTC]

lol true

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Hell-Badger [2005-08-10 15:46:38 +0000 UTC]

just wow..... i love you my talented lady. I love you so much!

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sognatore In reply to Hell-Badger [2005-08-11 14:56:53 +0000 UTC]

i love you too, m'dear and thank you for the fave!! Much appreciated :3

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AdanskaBelow [2005-08-10 06:46:16 +0000 UTC]

Love it. It makes me think of my drawling final where I used this wierd hourglass that I sorta bummed offa Bart. While I gave that back I accidentily lifted the glass jar I was using; I use it now to keep ibuprofin in. Eheheh, not my fault...
ANYWAY, love it. It's great. Makes me wish yet again I could draw. Damnit. ;_;
Sets, out.

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sognatore In reply to AdanskaBelow [2005-08-10 13:56:23 +0000 UTC]

hahahah well at least now you have an ibuprofin jar o__0 hehehe

thanks I'm glad you like it :3

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AdanskaBelow In reply to sognatore [2005-08-10 21:48:50 +0000 UTC]

That jar ended up in my bed once. It was creeepy. o.o

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sognatore In reply to AdanskaBelow [2005-08-10 22:57:07 +0000 UTC]

o____O lmao

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AdanskaBelow In reply to sognatore [2005-08-10 22:59:49 +0000 UTC]

Better than Tev's handcuffs!

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sognatore In reply to AdanskaBelow [2005-08-10 23:04:43 +0000 UTC]

lmao this is true. those just disturb me.

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AdanskaBelow In reply to sognatore [2005-08-11 00:04:48 +0000 UTC]

They amuse me to no end. Tis fun to make fun of tevvy for them. ^^ Eh, we're evil.
CHINCHILLAS!!! *runs off screaming*

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bane-goes-moo [2005-08-10 00:49:40 +0000 UTC]

Holy crap! Your still life is so much better than mine. I think I'm going to do another one cuz mine is so boring and kinda crappy.

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sognatore In reply to bane-goes-moo [2005-08-10 14:00:26 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks Glad you like it. I hope blais likes it too...i've been working my ass off on it ><

have you gotten in touch with anyone about the olive garden??

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