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Published: 2015-07-26 14:52:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 7139; Favourites: 165; Downloads: 0
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Description I.
i asked my mother to buy me sweetener,
and she said "no," and she said "no,
sugar is better for you it's more natural"
so i shrug and i clamp my teeth over 
my tongue and sew my mouth closed
and i steal sweet n' low
from the pizza place

II.
my friends watch me pick at my lettuce,
a rabbit-food-lunch that makes me sick
to my stomach, and when i run to the
bathroom during science class they
follow me and ask what i ate for breakfast.
i say "waffles" because they can't know
i won't let them stop me

III.
my therapist asks me if i think i'm sick
and i'm not, i'm strong, but i can't be
not here not here, and the $$$$$$$$
are ticking away as i consider my answer
so i say "yes" and she asks me what
i will become and i say "better"
because that's all they want to hear

IV.
my dietitian sets up a rough meal plan
and she says i won't gain weight on it
somehow i trust this woman with art
on the walls of her office and i pick
through the day in corn-kernel bites,
but the next morning the number goes up
anyway, so i stop listening

V. 
i drink chamomile tea for breakfast
and a can of [x] cal lemonade for lunch
and when my friends and i go bowling
none of them see the way my fingers
are untouched with grease
and i dance into the night, weightless
and the next morning my stomach
is painfully beautiful, so i shove coins
and weights into my pockets for the
weekly weigh-in and give my dietitian 
a million million fake smiles.

(and i am halfway to the sun—
so watch me. just watch me.
i'll show you how it's done.)
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Comments: 75

snickiedude [2017-08-12 02:41:55 +0000 UTC]

Every now and then I come back and look at/read the various deviations in my Favorites and collections, and this one always strikes me because of the first stanza, not because of any history of any kind of eating disorder or a specific craving for sweetener, but because of the sometimes extreme turns my mind takes (the imagery of sewing the mouth shut) whenever someone reacts negatively to my even hinting that something might be wrong (asking for sweetener) whether with myself or something I did or something I may have been responsible for because I'm so angry at myself for being wrong and burdening other people with my wrongness.

Usually I'm too dense to appreciate writings like this so good job. /totallyinadequatecompliment

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HanginWithJudas [2015-12-06 19:01:48 +0000 UTC]

This is incredible. I feel like through those few stanzas I was able to feel how you feel. It's like taking a small peek into your mind and experiencing all of the joy and pain you have dealt with while enduring your eating disorder.

You have a beauitiful mind, my dear. You are an amazing artist. :')

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skullhips [2015-10-12 22:28:57 +0000 UTC]

whoa
i love this & i want to give you a million hugs holy shit

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snowveins In reply to skullhips [2015-10-13 02:10:28 +0000 UTC]

ahhh tysm!!

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skullhips In reply to snowveins [2015-10-14 00:11:43 +0000 UTC]

no problemo!
you have earned a new watcher haha

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ejeans7 [2015-10-10 23:31:54 +0000 UTC]

I read this, loved it, couldn't think of what to say, then lost track of it.  I've been looking for it ever since.  It made that much of an impact.

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snowveins In reply to ejeans7 [2015-10-13 02:11:01 +0000 UTC]

oh my god, ty!! im so glad i had such an impact on you

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ejeans7 In reply to snowveins [2015-10-18 23:47:05 +0000 UTC]

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ShadowDazer [2015-09-26 15:00:06 +0000 UTC]

I don't get it... There is something amazing here, and I don't see it.

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snowveins In reply to ShadowDazer [2015-09-26 23:34:01 +0000 UTC]

uh... thank you? i think?

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terribly-forgotten [2015-09-23 14:08:13 +0000 UTC]

too real.

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AlansArmy [2015-09-14 19:38:21 +0000 UTC]

scares me, kind of

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snowveins In reply to AlansArmy [2015-09-15 00:31:01 +0000 UTC]

it's supposed to

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AlansArmy In reply to snowveins [2015-09-15 05:24:13 +0000 UTC]

yeah, and it's well done. Like you wrote down a piece of reality.

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snowveins In reply to AlansArmy [2015-09-16 02:34:42 +0000 UTC]

well, i would certainly hope so, considering how each story is true!!

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Zorbonaut [2015-09-14 11:33:35 +0000 UTC]

Goody story, brilliant title.

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GDeyke [2015-09-11 14:22:21 +0000 UTC]

Sort of painful and scary to read, but I like the urgent tone of it. (Hope you're all right.)

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snowveins In reply to GDeyke [2015-09-15 00:31:16 +0000 UTC]

thank you, i really appreciate it

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chuuni-tsukkomi [2015-09-11 06:06:42 +0000 UTC]

I'M CRYING THIS IS SO GOOD

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Cinnamoncandy [2015-09-11 00:56:32 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on your DD!

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UnluckyAmulet [2015-09-10 23:29:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god, this is so perfect and sad. Even though I haven't had this exact experience, the feelings behind it were so real.  I loved the last lines especially- a beautiful combination of defiance and desperation. Amazing work!

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snowveins In reply to UnluckyAmulet [2015-09-15 00:29:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much! i'm really glad i could convey my emotions to you like that, it's great to hear!!

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UnluckyAmulet In reply to snowveins [2015-09-16 22:20:47 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome, I look forward to future stuff from you. :3

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RadicalSabbath [2015-09-10 22:31:33 +0000 UTC]

A piece well done. Congratulations on your Daily Deviation!

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LindArtz [2015-09-10 20:08:08 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on your DD, well done!!    

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snowveins In reply to LindArtz [2015-09-15 00:28:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you !!

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Mythiril [2015-09-10 17:07:54 +0000 UTC]

congratulations!  

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snowveins In reply to Mythiril [2015-09-15 00:28:19 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!! i really appreciate your suggesting this poem for a DD, i am honestly so so so grateful

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Mythiril In reply to snowveins [2015-09-15 01:47:50 +0000 UTC]

you're most welcome, it's a  stunning piece of work

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Ripplingwaves [2015-09-10 14:52:26 +0000 UTC]

Sending you all the warmth of the world

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snowveins In reply to Ripplingwaves [2015-09-15 00:27:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Andvili [2015-09-10 10:58:16 +0000 UTC]

Are you okay now?

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snowveins In reply to Andvili [2015-09-15 00:27:32 +0000 UTC]

unfortunately not, i'm still struggling with this. i have yet to receive the psychiatric care i'm in need of. hopefully i will be on a path to recovery by the end of the year, but i'm honestly not sure what will happen to me :/ thank you for asking, though—nobody else has!

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Andvili In reply to snowveins [2015-09-15 01:31:35 +0000 UTC]

I hope so too. I wish there was advice I could give you. Unfortunately (fortunately?) I've never dealt with an eating disorder. My head's got different demons in residence.

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girlnumber20 [2015-09-10 08:50:22 +0000 UTC]

Congratulations on the DD - this was a very brave piece to write. I hope things get easier for you.

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snowveins In reply to girlnumber20 [2015-09-15 00:23:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much, i really appreciate it

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Lintu47 [2015-09-10 08:22:02 +0000 UTC]

Congrats on the DD!
Have a nice day!

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snowveins In reply to Lintu47 [2015-09-15 00:23:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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Lintu47 In reply to snowveins [2015-09-15 18:03:46 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure!

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Redsterfish [2015-09-03 15:48:18 +0000 UTC]

That might be just a project your body does, in order to get rid of sth. The problem will be solved by itself, as you seem to take it already easy

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snowveins In reply to Redsterfish [2015-09-03 21:14:04 +0000 UTC]

i'm sorry? i don't understand what you're saying here

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Redsterfish In reply to snowveins [2015-09-04 07:22:21 +0000 UTC]

www.youtube.com/watch?v=gajcY4… if THAT helps?

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snowveins In reply to Redsterfish [2015-09-05 00:19:37 +0000 UTC]

apparently my eating disorder, which caused me severe trauma and hospitalization, is a joke to you? okay then

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Redsterfish In reply to snowveins [2015-09-05 07:30:15 +0000 UTC]

Didn´t they let you know, you´re taking yourself way too serious?

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snowveins In reply to Redsterfish [2015-09-06 16:13:23 +0000 UTC]

yeah you're probably right, almost dying isn't serious at all ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ cool cool

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Redsterfish In reply to snowveins [2015-09-07 16:00:20 +0000 UTC]

What about brainwash or lobo or a flood of beer? redsterfish.deviantart.com/art… is this thinner than you. Yo sorry pal, I sometimes tend to be too honest

I was like 52 kg / 178 cm size, some 20 years ago, that does not really help... and got 115 kg later and... serious self realization problem and lack of talking etc.... though very much better now 82 kg I don´t know time is healing? Wish you all the best!!!!

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photosynthetichuman [2015-08-27 02:58:35 +0000 UTC]

Lovely poem despite being tragic and the little details painting it personal and powerful, excellent title but I might be biased.

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snowveins In reply to photosynthetichuman [2015-08-28 22:02:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much! i'm glad you appreciate the title, haha

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baileyalice222 [2015-08-27 02:27:51 +0000 UTC]

My favorite stanza is actually the last one. This poem is so powerful. Keep up the good work

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snowveins In reply to baileyalice222 [2015-08-28 22:02:11 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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