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snickiedude [2017-08-12 02:41:55 +0000 UTC]
Every now and then I come back and look at/read the various deviations in my Favorites and collections, and this one always strikes me because of the first stanza, not because of any history of any kind of eating disorder or a specific craving for sweetener, but because of the sometimes extreme turns my mind takes (the imagery of sewing the mouth shut) whenever someone reacts negatively to my even hinting that something might be wrong (asking for sweetener) whether with myself or something I did or something I may have been responsible for because I'm so angry at myself for being wrong and burdening other people with my wrongness.
Usually I'm too dense to appreciate writings like this so good job. /totallyinadequatecompliment
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HanginWithJudas [2015-12-06 19:01:48 +0000 UTC]
This is incredible. I feel like through those few stanzas I was able to feel how you feel. It's like taking a small peek into your mind and experiencing all of the joy and pain you have dealt with while enduring your eating disorder.
You have a beauitiful mind, my dear. You are an amazing artist. :')
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skullhips [2015-10-12 22:28:57 +0000 UTC]
whoa
i love this & i want to give you a million hugs holy shit
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ShadowDazer [2015-09-26 15:00:06 +0000 UTC]
I don't get it... There is something amazing here, and I don't see it.
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AlansArmy [2015-09-14 19:38:21 +0000 UTC]
scares me, kind of
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AlansArmy In reply to snowveins [2015-09-15 05:24:13 +0000 UTC]
yeah, and it's well done. Like you wrote down a piece of reality.
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snowveins In reply to AlansArmy [2015-09-16 02:34:42 +0000 UTC]
well, i would certainly hope so, considering how each story is true!!
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Zorbonaut [2015-09-14 11:33:35 +0000 UTC]
Goody story, brilliant title.
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GDeyke [2015-09-11 14:22:21 +0000 UTC]
Sort of painful and scary to read, but I like the urgent tone of it. (Hope you're all right.)
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chuuni-tsukkomi [2015-09-11 06:06:42 +0000 UTC]
I'M CRYING THIS IS SO GOOD
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UnluckyAmulet [2015-09-10 23:29:40 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god, this is so perfect and sad. Even though I haven't had this exact experience, the feelings behind it were so real. I loved the last lines especially- a beautiful combination of defiance and desperation. Amazing work!
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snowveins In reply to UnluckyAmulet [2015-09-15 00:29:17 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much! i'm really glad i could convey my emotions to you like that, it's great to hear!!
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UnluckyAmulet In reply to snowveins [2015-09-16 22:20:47 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, I look forward to future stuff from you. :3
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Ripplingwaves [2015-09-10 14:52:26 +0000 UTC]
Sending you all the warmth of the world
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Andvili [2015-09-10 10:58:16 +0000 UTC]
Are you okay now?
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snowveins In reply to Andvili [2015-09-15 00:27:32 +0000 UTC]
unfortunately not, i'm still struggling with this. i have yet to receive the psychiatric care i'm in need of. hopefully i will be on a path to recovery by the end of the year, but i'm honestly not sure what will happen to me :/ thank you for asking, though—nobody else has!
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Andvili In reply to snowveins [2015-09-15 01:31:35 +0000 UTC]
I hope so too. I wish there was advice I could give you. Unfortunately (fortunately?) I've never dealt with an eating disorder. My head's got different demons in residence.
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girlnumber20 [2015-09-10 08:50:22 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations on the DD - this was a very brave piece to write. I hope things get easier for you.
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Lintu47 [2015-09-10 08:22:02 +0000 UTC]
Congrats on the DD!
Have a nice day!
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snowveins In reply to Lintu47 [2015-09-15 00:23:15 +0000 UTC]
thank you!!
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Lintu47 In reply to snowveins [2015-09-15 18:03:46 +0000 UTC]
My pleasure!
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snowveins In reply to Redsterfish [2015-09-03 21:14:04 +0000 UTC]
i'm sorry? i don't understand what you're saying here
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Redsterfish In reply to snowveins [2015-09-04 07:22:21 +0000 UTC]
www.youtube.com/watch?v=gajcY4… if THAT helps?
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snowveins In reply to Redsterfish [2015-09-05 00:19:37 +0000 UTC]
apparently my eating disorder, which caused me severe trauma and hospitalization, is a joke to you? okay then
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snowveins In reply to Redsterfish [2015-09-06 16:13:23 +0000 UTC]
yeah you're probably right, almost dying isn't serious at all ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ cool cool
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photosynthetichuman [2015-08-27 02:58:35 +0000 UTC]
Lovely poem despite being tragic and the little details painting it personal and powerful, excellent title but I might be biased.
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