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protector96 [2014-08-12 04:15:25 +0000 UTC]
Aww, how sweet.
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SnowTails In reply to protector96 [2014-08-12 04:42:32 +0000 UTC]
thanks im going to wright the next part tomorrow :3
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SnowTails In reply to protector96 [2014-08-12 04:49:51 +0000 UTC]
sorry i kinda switched point a views in this part
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protector96 In reply to SnowTails [2014-08-12 04:53:10 +0000 UTC]
It's ok, though word of advice. You should put quotation marks when someone speaks so your sentences don't get mixed up, the story is great though.
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SnowTails In reply to protector96 [2014-08-12 16:17:13 +0000 UTC]
wrighting the next part right now
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SnowTails In reply to protector96 [2014-08-12 20:12:55 +0000 UTC]
sweet the next part is out were coming up to their adventure to equestria still working on that side story
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protector96 In reply to SnowTails [2014-08-12 20:15:46 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, just need a little more info from 1 person and then I'll write it.. Btw did that artist ever get back to ya?
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SnowTails In reply to protector96 [2014-08-12 20:19:23 +0000 UTC]
i havent checked yet i cant get to the gaiaonline from work only deviantart
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