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Published: 2011-07-23 02:37:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 542; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 5
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Description i'm lost somewhere between
enchanting jewels of
ruby red and ivy green,

and reality.
multiplied a hundred times
each threatening insanity.

it's just a telescope
with broken glass and a mirror;
and some simple etiquette.

you can turn it and the colors change,
but no matter what,
the picture always stays the same.

i can't tell where i'd rather be,
dancing with swirling colors
or with you inseperably.

i cannot find grace here.
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Comments: 31

dAb-blingin-art [2011-09-11 00:16:41 +0000 UTC]

This wonderful piece is featured in my journal here [link]

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snow-angels In reply to dAb-blingin-art [2011-09-11 03:44:43 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much!!!

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dAb-blingin-art In reply to snow-angels [2011-09-11 15:47:48 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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Randamyte [2011-08-29 01:39:58 +0000 UTC]

A lovely simple poem with a deep meaning, and excellent emotion coming from it! Super job!

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snow-angels In reply to Randamyte [2011-08-29 01:43:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you!!

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Randamyte In reply to snow-angels [2011-08-29 02:15:05 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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dAb-blingin-art [2011-08-28 17:20:22 +0000 UTC]

This beautiful piece has been featured in my journal today: [link]

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snow-angels In reply to dAb-blingin-art [2011-08-29 00:26:32 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!!

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dAb-blingin-art In reply to snow-angels [2011-08-29 02:52:18 +0000 UTC]

You are so welcome!

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Agnes-Arelia [2011-08-28 09:24:59 +0000 UTC]

A beautiful read. It sounds so... elegant, for a lack of a better word. I love the imagery and the way it flows.

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snow-angels In reply to Agnes-Arelia [2011-08-29 00:26:48 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!!

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Agnes-Arelia In reply to snow-angels [2011-08-29 08:13:12 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!

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ravenclaw99 [2011-08-26 15:10:45 +0000 UTC]

i love this! it's beautifully written

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snow-angels In reply to ravenclaw99 [2011-08-26 17:41:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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ravenclaw99 In reply to snow-angels [2011-08-26 21:03:58 +0000 UTC]

no prob!

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Kakekun [2011-08-26 07:30:41 +0000 UTC]

ITS AWESOME!
Also it woulda fit perfectly into the poetry book I made with my sis
a long time ago
u should publish yours into a book!

Also if u get bored check out my story preview:
[link]

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snow-angels In reply to Kakekun [2011-08-26 17:41:22 +0000 UTC]

thank you! and i might, eventually.

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XxInu-MayxX [2011-08-26 04:25:31 +0000 UTC]

I love this, immeasurably. I can't even put my finger on what exactly it is about the poem I love; this is perfection in its entirety.

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snow-angels In reply to XxInu-MayxX [2011-08-26 17:41:31 +0000 UTC]

thank you so, so much!

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XxInu-MayxX In reply to snow-angels [2011-08-27 02:17:55 +0000 UTC]

You're very, very welcome~

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HighestVelocity [2011-08-26 02:46:55 +0000 UTC]

amazing

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snow-angels In reply to HighestVelocity [2011-08-26 17:41:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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RollingTomorrow [2011-07-29 17:19:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for participating in our prompt at #Live-Love-Write !

Your idea in this piece is quite lovely; it shows how kaleidoscopes can create such colorful brightness, but at the end of the day, it is just broken glass and reflections.

Good work!


*TheFinalHikari
Founder of #Writers--club , #LandoftheSky , and #Live-Love-Write

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snow-angels In reply to RollingTomorrow [2011-07-30 02:10:05 +0000 UTC]

my pleasure! kaleidoscopes are so pretty

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RollingTomorrow In reply to snow-angels [2011-07-30 17:43:11 +0000 UTC]

They are!

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VincentBaalberith [2011-07-26 01:56:58 +0000 UTC]

This is spectacularly imaginative && very pretty. Digg the vivid imagery. You are certainly talented [:

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snow-angels In reply to VincentBaalberith [2011-07-26 01:58:35 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much!

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Empresskitsune [2011-07-25 09:30:38 +0000 UTC]

I've been looking through your gallery and you have such a talent for words. Your work is not only pleasurable to read, but makes you think, which I believe true art should do. I look forward to seeing more of your work

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snow-angels In reply to Empresskitsune [2011-07-25 12:28:03 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much! that's my intent (:

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mspadfoot2 [2011-07-23 19:07:41 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful. I love kaleidoscopes (though I don't like spelling them), and this poem captures them so well. I really love it. And I love how it is simply impied except in the title.

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snow-angels In reply to mspadfoot2 [2011-07-23 21:05:14 +0000 UTC]

haha, thank you so much!

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