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Description i am from a yellow slide in my backyard.                          
i am from fresh-brewed iced tea
and monday night tv.
i am from the strawberry-place.
i am from the pink and green cushions
the yellow high-heeled shoe
i remember sitting on so many nights.
 
i'm from six-dollar lunches,
and the shack next to the river,
from paths in the woods and
a marathon down my street.
 
i'm from knuckle smacks with a ruler
and notebooks full of doodles,
from my brother's tests taped to the fridge.
i'm from faithless sleeping in sundays,
with criticisms logged
and bruised pride.
 
i'm from a broken love,
dinners on the deck
with the sound of air conditioners whirring.
from chasing squirrels up and down a swingset
to the treetops.
 
i am from blue skies and green fields,
and I'd like you to know:
i survived.
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Comments: 21

LancelotPrice [2012-02-16 15:59:08 +0000 UTC]

Really good, a concise history. Congratulations on surviving; it ain't easy.

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snow-angels In reply to LancelotPrice [2012-02-16 23:39:35 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Jrwo [2012-02-15 16:18:24 +0000 UTC]

Nice,..[link]

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snow-angels In reply to Jrwo [2012-02-15 21:51:38 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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Jrwo In reply to snow-angels [2012-02-18 12:11:48 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome grey,..[link]

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annabanana9198 [2012-02-14 23:55:19 +0000 UTC]

<3.

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snow-angels In reply to annabanana9198 [2012-02-15 00:34:50 +0000 UTC]

<3

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dreamsinstatic [2011-07-23 01:17:24 +0000 UTC]

Your fantastic work has been featured in Friday Night Features

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snow-angels In reply to dreamsinstatic [2011-07-23 01:40:44 +0000 UTC]

wow, thank you so much!!

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dreamsinstatic In reply to snow-angels [2011-07-23 01:46:58 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure.

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GlacielAstaldo [2011-07-17 10:57:58 +0000 UTC]

Surviving is good, yes...

Errr rest is nice as well, just wanted to get the most important thing out of the way XD

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snow-angels In reply to GlacielAstaldo [2011-07-18 02:16:13 +0000 UTC]

XD

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GlacielAstaldo In reply to snow-angels [2011-07-18 10:49:18 +0000 UTC]

Being dead really makes it hard to appreciate life and everything that comes with it, so yea

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snow-angels In reply to GlacielAstaldo [2011-07-18 13:55:41 +0000 UTC]

you're dead now?

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GlacielAstaldo In reply to snow-angels [2011-07-18 13:56:44 +0000 UTC]

No no, just explaining why surviving is a good thing XD

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FliegenLicht [2011-07-17 02:59:15 +0000 UTC]

This is... wonderful. No seriously, very well written. Just reading that makes me feel like I've watched you grow up, all your life. And the last stanza is so chokedupfierceproudsad that I couldn't decide whether to cry or shout for joy.


It was nice getting to know you a bit. Now I want to write one of my own...

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snow-angels In reply to FliegenLicht [2011-07-18 02:16:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you!! and go ahead i want to know who /you/ are.

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safia3 [2011-07-16 17:48:09 +0000 UTC]

I'm from many of those things myself. Loved it!

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snow-angels In reply to safia3 [2011-07-16 18:33:31 +0000 UTC]

haha, thanks!

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moonstonezeffiro [2011-07-16 16:33:54 +0000 UTC]

Huh... This really made me smile. (:

It's good to realize where you're from, who you are, and what made you into this person.

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snow-angels In reply to moonstonezeffiro [2011-07-16 16:42:32 +0000 UTC]

i agree. how do you know who you are if you don't stop to look at where you're from?
sometimes, the rear-view mirror is just as important as the headlights.

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