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Published: 2011-07-16 03:10:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 366; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 6
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Description i fell in love with the little gray cat on the front stoop.
            he purred and purred, rubbing at my ankles;
            impatiently flicking his white-tipped tail and meowing at my shoelaces.

i fell in love with the wool top hat the man wore.
            if i lived in the eighteenth century, i could see my father having one just like it.
            i could picture myself, not nearly six, climbing on his black pantleg and asking to wear it.
            it's too big for me.
            the brim falls over my eyes.

i fell in love with the green cornfield next to the road.
            i watched the wind ripple through the strong emerald stalks and the sunlight glance off their waxy leaves.
            i remember the faint woosh sound of the wind in the rows.
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Comments: 12

Jrwo [2012-02-15 16:20:37 +0000 UTC]

that's good grey,..[link]

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snow-angels In reply to Jrwo [2012-02-15 21:51:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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Jrwo In reply to snow-angels [2012-02-18 12:11:55 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome grey,..[link]

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icefire-awakening [2012-02-15 01:44:33 +0000 UTC]

i can imagine that you would be submitting a few things to the creative writing contest yush?

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snow-angels In reply to icefire-awakening [2012-02-15 03:00:14 +0000 UTC]

just one, i haven't submitted it to dA yet. i might when it's done, though. how about you?

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icefire-awakening In reply to snow-angels [2012-02-15 03:44:47 +0000 UTC]

ya something... need to edit though

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snow-angels In reply to icefire-awakening [2012-02-15 21:52:00 +0000 UTC]

is it something already on dA?

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icefire-awakening In reply to snow-angels [2012-02-15 21:58:09 +0000 UTC]

no. i just wrote it a few days ago.

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snow-angels In reply to icefire-awakening [2012-02-15 22:30:14 +0000 UTC]

ah, i see.

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icefire-awakening In reply to snow-angels [2012-02-16 01:57:53 +0000 UTC]

yup

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GlacielAstaldo [2011-07-17 10:54:14 +0000 UTC]

Second stanza is adorabuul XD

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snow-angels In reply to GlacielAstaldo [2011-07-18 00:48:18 +0000 UTC]

haha, thanks

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