Comments: 45
NyraStarray [2011-07-21 01:14:00 +0000 UTC]
this is really good too!!! but again it has open spots in it, like who are the people tearing them apart? why are they being teard apart? im in euantes and our teacher ask us questions like this ^^" but it helps us be better writers!! (btw euantes is a literary magazine)
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snow-angels In reply to Yu-Lan1994 [2011-05-19 19:57:10 +0000 UTC]
thanks! and i'll go take a look at her work!!
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TheDarkFlash [2011-02-05 03:57:52 +0000 UTC]
Love this...though it was sad in the end I really felt and admired the flow of it all
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Xx-vampire-brat-xX [2011-02-05 03:44:30 +0000 UTC]
not bad depressing though but it was good
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DarlingAngel0565 [2011-02-02 14:51:52 +0000 UTC]
I really like this piece.
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jazzle-ink [2011-01-30 17:57:01 +0000 UTC]
this is really really good
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007Balel [2011-01-30 15:46:33 +0000 UTC]
Sad, but very beautiful...
I really like how you have turned the car crash into something very calm and serene.
Great work.
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snow-angels In reply to ChaoticLivi [2011-01-30 15:18:08 +0000 UTC]
thanks, yeah.. everything's a mystery, life, love, death.. you never know..
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TalonDesign [2011-01-30 03:45:14 +0000 UTC]
a very interesting piece, it caught my eye when I was looking through the latest submissions for one of the poetry groups. I love the imagery used at the accident.
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Dividedwestand8 [2011-01-30 02:46:50 +0000 UTC]
I think its beautiful and sad. Don't listen to what anyone else says. This is the best poem I have ever read.
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Dividedwestand8 In reply to snow-angels [2011-01-30 03:00:43 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome. Seriously, tho, It is soooooooo good. i luve it
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GlacielAstaldo [2011-01-30 01:25:47 +0000 UTC]
... I like it, I don't like it
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