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Slyrr In reply to foxman4 [2012-01-31 23:48:07 +0000 UTC]
hehe. I mentioned that in the chapter. 'Your MIB impression', I think I had Kim say...
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Creativesm75 [2009-05-20 14:39:43 +0000 UTC]
awesome
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GhostwritterMO [2008-08-17 23:20:29 +0000 UTC]
Yeah and so far I think this chapter has been one the best "presents" I've gotten so thanks buddy. I just can't wait for Ron and Rhoda to bust out and hopeful go Spank Monkey and Angry Bear on the bad guys. I'm really hopeing we get to see more of Hana in the story (holy terror to Grimm but angel to "big sis" Kim) and hopefully more soon . Thanks.
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Nethar [2008-08-17 08:13:22 +0000 UTC]
So glad u're back. Allready missed Grimm and Rhonda.
I said the last chapter was u're best and now i have to say this one is the funnyst.
I mean Bonnie, Brakin, Hana and Ron with Rhonda thats just LOL.
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Slyrr In reply to Nethar [2008-08-17 13:53:32 +0000 UTC]
There was a lot to work into this one - hopefully it was coherent. Thanks!
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GhostwritterMO [2008-08-16 23:05:20 +0000 UTC]
Yo buddy!!! Great to see you again and your story as well. I've been waiting for your new chapter and let me just say that once again you've done an other outstanding job. So Grimm is going walk the halls of Middleton High huh?!? Like the twisted mirror that is Grimm's and Kim's life I can't wait for more. P. S. I loved the part about Grimm and Hana (makes me wonder about changing diapers) rolling on the floor literaly! Thanks for the chapter and amazingly it's 2 days before my birthday so Thanks pal!!!!
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Slyrr In reply to GhostwritterMO [2008-08-16 23:29:57 +0000 UTC]
Happy birthday! Glad you enjoy the tale - the chapters have been getting longer and I wonder if ch. 14 will be the same. There's lots of fun stuff that luckily doesn't venture too far from the core of the tale....
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