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Description Chapter 13 of "A Friend in Darkness" is finally up!

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It's totally Bonnie to laser in on cute guys who are hanging around Kim (even if Kim doesn't like them), and Grimm is no exception, but why does he look so uncomfortable....?
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bleachcrater [2024-09-11 11:01:26 +0000 UTC]

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Kermitthefrog223456 [2015-02-21 02:02:29 +0000 UTC]

I always knew that Bonnie was evil.

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Blairaptor [2012-07-12 12:30:29 +0000 UTC]

Reminds me of a FanFiction I once read in which a time paradox ends up with teenage Monkey Fist in the present. We he hangs around school, Bonnie goes after him. She doesn't know who he is, and it's so typical of her to practically prey on any guy that comes through.... it seems not even Grimm is safe.

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Slyrr In reply to Blairaptor [2012-07-13 01:01:42 +0000 UTC]

May have to check out that one
But Bonnie seemed the type who would at least make a try for anyone remotely cute.

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Blairaptor In reply to Slyrr [2012-07-13 13:35:32 +0000 UTC]

I guess Bonnie's what you'd half-jokingly and half-seriously call a "predatory female" LOL.

The fanfic was called "The Road Not Taken" and it's by PengyChan. It's unfinished, which is too bad, since I was really into it and now I'm on the edge of my seat for the next part. It doesn't get really good for about four chapters, when the young Monty enters the story. But then it's a combination of time-travel brain-pain and comedy with character development.

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Slyrr In reply to Blairaptor [2012-07-14 17:15:16 +0000 UTC]

I know PengyChan - she's left a few nice reviews, and is an excellent writer...

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Blairaptor In reply to Slyrr [2012-07-14 19:03:20 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I saw you gave her a line in "Kim da Yada". I loved that songfic, by the way. Makes me miss KP though.

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Slyrr In reply to Blairaptor [2012-07-14 23:22:56 +0000 UTC]

We all do
Glad you're enjoying FiD so far... It's 30+ chapters though, so hunker down...

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Blairaptor In reply to Slyrr [2012-07-14 23:58:03 +0000 UTC]

I sit on my bed reading it on my iPod touch, and then when I check the clock and hour's gone by without me realizing... but it's so good!

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Slyrr In reply to Blairaptor [2012-07-15 19:54:53 +0000 UTC]

My brothers and I call it a 'book trance'...

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Blairaptor In reply to Slyrr [2012-07-15 23:12:06 +0000 UTC]

Ah, good term for it.

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GhostwritterMO [2008-08-17 23:08:32 +0000 UTC]

Sorry buddy but you have to admit I keep you on your toes.

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jurneejakes [2008-08-17 14:40:24 +0000 UTC]

I still find it interesting how you're managing to mirror Kim and Ron's life. What I have to wonder though, is what would keep Grimm from going Kung Fu on his respective bully, whom I'm guessing goes along the lines of... Donnie?

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Slyrr In reply to jurneejakes [2008-08-17 15:01:22 +0000 UTC]

That will eventually be shown.... Keep reading!

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Nethar [2008-08-17 08:17:00 +0000 UTC]

I cloundn't stop laughting! Bonnie has a thing for the bad guys and the subtext... i almost suffocated for laughting.

U're ironic humor and tallent for picking up all the small runinggags from the show is one of the things that make u one of the very best.

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Slyrr In reply to Nethar [2008-08-17 13:54:59 +0000 UTC]

That's awful nice of you Thanks!

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Nethar In reply to Slyrr [2008-08-17 16:03:26 +0000 UTC]

did i tell u how fanny i find ure way of working around Moniques last name?

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Slyrr In reply to Nethar [2008-08-18 04:28:42 +0000 UTC]

I had to do it this way since no one knows what it is

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Nethar In reply to Slyrr [2008-08-18 15:14:26 +0000 UTC]

Yes but instead of just making something up like most FFautors you making a great running gag out of it.

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Slyrr In reply to Nethar [2008-08-19 00:11:59 +0000 UTC]

I admit being inspired the the Simpsons whenever anyone tries to reveal the location of Springfield....

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Nethar In reply to Slyrr [2008-08-19 16:45:15 +0000 UTC]

and that is one big runninggag

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GhostwritterMO [2008-08-16 22:56:01 +0000 UTC]

Forgive me but I got to say it. But it's about time that Grimm was affected by someone else's "head" games, but it makes you wonder which one?

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Slyrr In reply to GhostwritterMO [2008-08-16 23:28:07 +0000 UTC]

I'll try not to read too much into that

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