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Published: 2008-06-14 23:15:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 3937; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 28
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Description Whew - chapter 11 of "A Friend in Darkness" is up!

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Grimm uses his head gaming a little too much and then it's time to slug things out! Kim may well mop the floor with Grimm, but will that really make her the winner...?
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Comments: 26

voltagelife7 [2024-05-04 22:12:51 +0000 UTC]

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Slyrr In reply to voltagelife7 [2024-05-30 00:26:18 +0000 UTC]

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fjbdfhhdgfuigffgxjhb [2014-06-28 16:53:05 +0000 UTC]

He deserves it :grin:

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Slyrr In reply to fjbdfhhdgfuigffgxjhb [2014-06-28 20:36:16 +0000 UTC]

Well, he practically asked for it

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fjbdfhhdgfuigffgxjhb In reply to Slyrr [2014-06-28 22:15:35 +0000 UTC]

He's like chase young

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fjbdfhhdgfuigffgxjhb In reply to Slyrr [2014-06-28 21:02:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm on chapter 6 of the story, is he still evil

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foxman4 [2010-09-12 13:37:58 +0000 UTC]

Is that one punch or two sir

Looking back at these chapters, I liked this bit, because i wanted Grimm to get a piece back of what he had been doing.

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Slyrr In reply to foxman4 [2010-09-12 18:17:39 +0000 UTC]

That's why I put it in. A lot of people wanted to see Grimm get some kind of comeuppance...

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straYDoubter [2008-10-30 01:01:01 +0000 UTC]

I was scared at this point in the story. Man, I gotta tell ya, you definitely have creative juices flowing.

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Slyrr In reply to straYDoubter [2008-10-30 22:15:31 +0000 UTC]

I hope so. There's still a lot to come in this tale, and the upcoming chapter is set to be a doozy...

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straYDoubter In reply to Slyrr [2008-10-31 08:55:51 +0000 UTC]

So you're NOT done? Wow, I have a new hobby!

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Skoshi8 [2008-09-27 09:14:46 +0000 UTC]

Great action shot of a fightin' Kim. Can't get enough of them!

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Slyrr In reply to Skoshi8 [2008-10-30 22:14:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks - it was a heckuvva fight - I stood like that, but not for long!

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thorman [2008-08-17 06:35:15 +0000 UTC]

good job.

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Jose-Ramiro [2008-06-25 11:22:15 +0000 UTC]

Whoa! Great hit, KP.

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Slyrr In reply to Jose-Ramiro [2008-06-25 23:58:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Look for more soon...

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Jose-Ramiro In reply to Slyrr [2008-06-26 04:14:56 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for telling.

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Nethar [2008-06-17 12:37:38 +0000 UTC]

Well it isn't a nuckelsandwitch but he sure got some just dessert.

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Slyrr In reply to Nethar [2008-06-18 00:51:55 +0000 UTC]

He had it coming. Lots of folks who read the chapter think Grimm pushed Kim a little too far....

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Nethar In reply to Slyrr [2008-06-18 10:16:36 +0000 UTC]

I thing that if she got around after this, he'll have it a lot harder to wind er up that much again

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swordbunny4486 [2008-06-15 12:00:01 +0000 UTC]

nice.

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Slyrr In reply to swordbunny4486 [2008-06-15 16:55:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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GhostwritterMO [2008-06-15 03:32:17 +0000 UTC]

Not really... head games give people an edge when skill doesn't work (I forget who said that) but the fact that Grimm has to bring in a lawyer says alot right now... but so does Kim wanting to fight instead of biting the bullet so to speak.

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Slyrr In reply to GhostwritterMO [2008-06-15 16:55:01 +0000 UTC]

More on that in future chapters

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GhostwritterMO In reply to Slyrr [2008-06-15 17:52:46 +0000 UTC]

yeah I kinda figured you would say that...

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Slyrr In reply to GhostwritterMO [2008-06-16 04:37:14 +0000 UTC]

You think you know me so well

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