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M3G4MAN [2021-03-28 23:44:52 +0000 UTC]
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Co-lord44 [2021-01-04 14:14:05 +0000 UTC]
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YeetusSelfDeletus [2019-10-01 19:35:06 +0000 UTC]
Boys, we did it, pants are no more
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SkycladFox In reply to EternalDragon19 [2019-04-16 22:56:50 +0000 UTC]
They're still posted to my Sofurry account, under the name SkycladFox.Β I wasn't able to maintain my old personal site, unfortunately, but I do have a new one, focused on my writing.
And thanks!Β Always struggled with erotic work, never convinced I really got the tone and feel I wanted - intimate and sensual without dwelling on sticky details - but maybe I wasn't so far off after all.
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TheBlackNova [2017-07-08 22:29:53 +0000 UTC]
Foxes, PANTS PLEASE! Nobody wants to see your junk!
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TrollingOverlord [2014-07-28 05:36:51 +0000 UTC]
Hey look they have something more in common then being in the same game there both smooth
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TrollingOverlord [2014-07-28 05:35:03 +0000 UTC]
Hey look they both have something in common there both smooth lolz
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Keyotea [2013-11-18 02:05:12 +0000 UTC]
I wondered when they would get together like this.
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ErraticBASARAfan [2011-03-01 07:19:38 +0000 UTC]
Krystal: Deeper...deeper...deeper...
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Gynandromorph [2009-06-15 15:01:58 +0000 UTC]
Do it! Do it! Do it! DO IT!!!
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Atawai-Dragons [2009-04-29 14:33:50 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, they don't look naked, they look like they follow the Wookie rule.(they don't wear cloths, but they are still covered)
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SkycladFox In reply to Atawai-Dragons [2009-04-29 23:47:29 +0000 UTC]
In this instance, yes, but this was before I'd figured out how to add genitals convincingly, and I felt overt nudity would struggle to fit in with the mood I was after anyway.
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Atawai-Dragons In reply to SkycladFox [2009-04-30 00:40:59 +0000 UTC]
Well, I really like Wookie rule Creatures, but I like your ladies just as much.
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alexwarlorn [2008-04-18 16:05:06 +0000 UTC]
P.S.
StarWolf might be adding to many spices to the soup.
On the other hand a surprise attack by them might be what keeps Fox's team from looking for him.
Another possibly though is that a mana (magic) story in space caused by Dinosaur planet breaking into bits hits the arwings and great fox (which censors of ccourse can't make heads or tails of magic), knocking them away from each other. And possibly keeps other ships from getting closer to the planet. (Fox DOES crash land in this scenario after all.)
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alexwarlorn [2008-04-17 03:52:39 +0000 UTC]
Heh. When I look at this image, I think this is how Dinosaur Planet COULD have been if Krystal hadn't been forced into the role of Damsel in Undress! Seriously, the role of 'save me' doesn't suit her.
I have the mental image of Fox, having lost contact with his team, his arwing having fallen into a swamp with his equipment, and his clothes having been stolen by animal pests, leaving him with only his space age knowledge, and suddenly finding out how little good knowing how to fix a transwarp engine does you on a planet of giant dinos!
And Krystal ends up having to teach him how to survive in such a world.
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alexwarlorn In reply to SkycladFox [2008-04-17 15:29:13 +0000 UTC]
I already have 12 stories on my plate I've been working on for eight years, sorry, if I add anymore to the plate I'll explode. That's the truth of things. Sorry. If someone else could write such a story of Fox losing EVERYTHING when he crashlands on Dinosaur planet, and the local likely thinking he's eaten some bad mushroom from saying he's from outerspace, and Krystal having to teach him how to fight to survive on a world where your only weapons are your wits and the most basic tools.
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alexwarlorn In reply to SkycladFox [2008-04-18 00:44:54 +0000 UTC]
I want to try and post the final chapters for them all at once.
Set effort? I'm not quite familiar with that term.
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SkycladFox In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-04-18 02:08:21 +0000 UTC]
Effort as in an attempt at a fanfiction I've been writing sporadically for a couple of years now, set as in it takes place during StarFox Adventures (SFA-set). Actually, it's a reworking of the game, playing out as my twisted mind would like it to, complete with 95% more Krystal.
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alexwarlorn In reply to SkycladFox [2008-04-18 03:36:02 +0000 UTC]
It would be a longer ride, and more character driven with Krystal there and not hanging out in a gem as a maiden to be saved. (Even if it was a riot to see him staring at her in a romantic filled gaze.)
So imagine fox, naked, unarmed, his airwing at the bottom of a swamp, not able to speak the local language, no way to contact his team mates (who AREN'T in orbit), and with no idea how to survive in a culture without laser guns or transmat beams.
It would require Fox to learn an entire new set of skills and abilities!
He might even have to convince his squad mates once it's all over that he hasn't lost his memory and gone native.
THEN... it would be Fox's turn to teach Krystal about his high tech world. How poetic that would be!!!
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SkycladFox In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-04-18 14:19:04 +0000 UTC]
Exactly my thinking.
It is, as I've said before, a great scenario ripe with possibilities. The only problem is the logistics of setting it all up in a manner that doesn't feel contrived. For example, why aren't his team mates in orbit? Why doesn't Pepper send someone to investigate when StarFox fail to check in? How do McCloud and Krystal travel to the floating planet pieces without an Arwing?
Thing is, I think I have a solution - StarWolf.
O'Donnell and his team catch wind of StarFox's current contract, and smell an opportunity for revenge and a little sport. Boarding and commandeering the Great Fox wouldn't be a huge challenge with neither McCloud nor Lombardi (and thus no Arwings) to deal with. They could then either take it, Peppy and Slippy to their home base, or, if they were feeling particularly mean, lock the ship on a collision course with a planet of their choosing, sealing the toad and the hare inside.
As for Pepper, it's simply that there is no-one to send. Everyone's busy rebuilding after the devastating Andross wars, or dealing with numerous aggressive Venomian factions that formed after the evil ape was killed, or investigating reports of attacks on far-flung settlements and outposts.
Falco? Either he's still going solo and completely disinterested in anything StarFox, or, if you're like me and have him on Sauria attempting to infiltrate Scale's base and gather intel, he's discovered and captured when O'Donnell's voice comes over his radio at the worst possible moment. Unpleasant side-effect of the latter - some pretty potent weaponry (I can't imagine Falco going anywhere not being tooled up to the hilt) is now in Scales' hands...
All of which leaves Wolf (Leon, Pigma and Andrew having headed off to deal with other irons they have in the fire) just having to destroy any potential means of escape (Arwings that didn't crash land, or survived partially intact, shuttle craft used to get to Sauria by blue vixens or cocky avians, etc) and he'll have a Fox trapped and ready to hunt.
So not only is Fox stranded and without backup technological or physical, he's also got a psychotic lupine with vastly superior resources and a deep-set hatred of him slowly but surely tracking him down. Not only does he have to adjust to an entirely new world, language and way of thinking, he has to do so quickly enough to avoid becoming a trophy...
As for getting to the floating chunks of world, maybe it's simply a case of tracking down objects - keys, if you will - that enable WarpStone to transport people to them. I'm thinking gems that he can swap with the one set into his forehead.
Good grief - what an essay. O.O But then, you're proving to be a brilliant person to bounce ideas off of. Most inspiring.
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alexwarlorn In reply to SkycladFox [2008-04-18 15:50:38 +0000 UTC]
The Warp Stone logically would have had a much larger role in the original game, it's very name suggests it would have functioned to teleport Fox to other areas instead of the Arwing.
"why aren't his team mates in orbit?"
My idea is a lot more simple sadly. I just figure that they have no idea were Fox is. Either they think his ship was destroyed (and think he's dead). Or they lost track of his Arwing before it crash landed on Dinosaur Planet.
"Why doesn't Pepper send someone to investigate when StarFox fail to check in?"
StarFox is NOT part of the Cornarian military. They are purely service contractors. They aren't ones to check in or send in reports on the Cornarian clock that Pepper is used to when it comes to men and women -actually- under his command.
"How do McCloud and Krystal travel to the floating planet pieces without an Arwing?"
Short answer? Magic. Both arcane and spiritual. Something Fox's science aligned brain has been taught from the start is merely science that primitives can't understands. And Fox suddenly finds himself face to face with the real deal, rather than cleverly hidden holoprojectors or forgotten technology. It should serve as another humbling experience for him. And an enlightening one if done right.
And I think I have a compromise for Krystal's origin. And to explain the lack of other members of her species on Dinosaur Planet.
Imagine if Fox after Scales is dead (sorry Andross' showing up felt SO contrived!) finds a decades old ship with some Fox skeletons in it? The Saurians nor Krystal have a clue what it is. It would also provide a way for Fox to FINALLY put his space age knowledge to use.
Or you could have Falco, the guy no longer part of Starfox, be the one guy not to give up on Fox and go looking for him, and finding him "after all the funs over."
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SkycladFox In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-04-18 17:10:07 +0000 UTC]
Again, exactly my thinking - what's the point of a Warpstone that only links to two places? Now...
My idea is a lot more simple sadly. I just figure that they have no idea were Fox is. Either they think his ship was destroyed (and think he's dead). Or they lost track of his Arwing before it crash landed on Dinosaur Planet.
So he jetted off by himself to deal with the Saurian situation when Pepper told them about it, leaving his team no hint or record of where he was going? Can't really see him doing that, or them letting him do that, for that matter. Unless his ending up on the planet was entirely accidental (got into trouble while passing by) and nothing to do with the Cornerian Military employing him to go there? That scenario, admittedly, would be a nice, simple, clean way of doing it, albeit kinda reliant on coincidence...it just happened to be the deeply-in-trouble Sauria he ended up on...
StarFox is NOT part of the Cornarian military. They are purely service contractors. They aren't ones to check in or send in reports on the Cornarian clock that Pepper is used to when it comes to men and women -actually- under his command.
True, they're simply contractors, but surely when under contract the military insist StarFox keep them informed of progress? For that matter, haven't they done exactly that on a frequent basis in every game? And I can't imagine any employer NOT being worried when those they've employed seemingly vanish from the face of the solar system, and not wanting to do something to find out what's going on, least of all the military and Pepper.
Therefore, it makes most sense, to my mind, to say they simply can't send anyone as they're fully taken up by dealing with the fallout from Andross (just look at Iraq to see how long and tenaciously a war's effects can linger, and that's just one country) and the first hints of something potentially worse on the horizon (the Aparoids). Heck, right there is your reason why StarFox were contracted in the first place.
I quite like the ship idea, not least as it presents some interesting questions - where did it come from and why did they end up on Sauria, for example. I must admit, though, I prefer Krystal being from a lost planet, and moreover not knowing how it was destroyed, or who by. Just the time spent roaming the system looking for answers is ripe with potential...
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alexwarlorn In reply to SkycladFox [2008-04-18 19:14:02 +0000 UTC]
"So he jetted off by himself to deal with the Saurian situation when Pepper told them about it, leaving his team no hint or record of where he was going?"
I'm sorry that my message came across that way. I meant that this happened -before- they get to Sauria. And my magicial space typhone idea you've got to admit it provides a perfectly good reason for Fox to be forcibly separated from his team mates.
Though here's a much more interesting question. Why the HECK would the Cornarians interfere with a pre-space travel civilization, and where the heck did that bizzare SOS could have come from?
Let's face facts. The SFA plot was full of holes due to the fact they were basically adopting the game from a plot almost totally different.
"must admit, though, I prefer Krystal being from a lost planet, and moreover not knowing how it was destroyed, or who by. Just the time spent roaming the system looking for answers is ripe with potential..."
The fact that was only mentioned once in the SFA manual, and hasn't been referred to even once in any of the games in any amount of depth, show again how it was a cheap-o tag on origin for her. She deserves better. (And the whole princess thing was just gratutious!) This this provides a reason WHY she'd dress up jungle style in the first place and knows the language flawlessly.
And the idea of Krystal being an ET who just arrived on the same SOS as Fox was completely absurd IMHO. It reminds me of how they rect-conned her mytical in born talents as 'mundane' telepathy!
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alexwarlorn In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-04-19 00:04:06 +0000 UTC]
I did not say that StarFox wouldn't pick up the MST, I meant that their ship's computers wouldn't know how to interpret a storm caused by and being sustained by the magic of an entire planet being out of whack from Scales basically holding the entire world hostage to get his clan into a ruling position. Of course none of his loyalists think he'd REALLY blow up the planet, it's just to keep the masses in line, right? So they wouldn't realize the trouble they were in until -bang!- And Fox, being the protagonist he is, would go out in his Arwing to 'check it out' against Peppy's common sense and Slippy's cowardice.
I know this isn't Star Trek, but I'm still surprised they didn't try to keep it a secret from a non-space culture there were other planets or that the universe was filled with ETs.
One plot point that I'd shoot if I had the chance was the idea of Krystal 'coming to the planet because of a distress signal' it's just too awful.
And my plot idea STILL leaves Krystal's origin a mystery. IMHO. So I don't see the conflict. I just believe that she arrived so early in her life she has NO memory of any planet BUT Sauria and has no clue she is an ET or there is such a thing as ETs. (The Saurian likely consider her a benign mutant. Rather like the Sharp Claws are said to be mutants themselves.)
Another idea that I've almost always had is that Krystal was actually created by the Kazowa to help Fox, and was given implanted memories of a life of a space farer with a convient excuse for why she had no family or fellows, with her dingy ship being created in the same fashion. Making nearly everything she remembers up until she raided Scale's ship a lie. It would explain her powers, her style of dress, why she's blue, and other things that are slightly off about her (the things about caporal entities the Kazowa couldn't quite pin down). You gotta admit would explain a lot of things.
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alexwarlorn In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-04-30 05:26:07 +0000 UTC]
You never responded to this, so I wonder if I offended you.
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SkycladFox In reply to alexwarlorn [2008-04-18 22:37:31 +0000 UTC]
We could end up amiably arguing these points for a while, at this rate.
Yes, the magical space typhoon certainly could separate the group, but I find it hard to conceive that the sensors wouldn't detect anything, and if they did, the sheer unknown nature of it would surely prompt StarFox to keep their distance. Unless, of course, it happened very suddenly, which isn't implausible. Definitely a workable idea, as long as you can explain it without the reader's eyes glazing over.
The Cornerians interfere because an entire planet going kerblooey, which is what Sauria was threatening to do, would have a dramatic effect on the Lylat system; think of the shockwave that would emanate from such a blast, for a start. Plus, and this is admittedly straying into speculation, I'd imagine Scales' sudden power and dominance would be a little worrying, especially after Andross. The SOS, I believe, came from Krazoa Palace - it's where Krystal was led to, after all, and as a potently magical place I can imagine something there powerful enough to send a signal into space.
As to Krystal's origin, here's where we must agree to disagree. Yes, it was rather a hurried origin, but I see a lot a potential in it, largely because it is so vague - lots of room for an active imagination to play. For example, we don't actually know how long she was on Sauria before Fox showed up; the fact she was working with the Cloudrunner Kyte would suggest long enough to gain the trust of some of the natives. She could have been there long enough to pick up the language, or maybe those never-pinned-down mystical abilities helped her understand it very quickly. Maybe her homeworld had long-standing customs and rules that insisted she dress that way, or maybe she just enjoyed dressing up. It could be desert garb for an arid world just as easily as it could be jungle garb. We don't know, and it's a heck of a lot of fun to speculate.
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alexwarlorn In reply to SkycladFox [2008-04-19 00:06:43 +0000 UTC]
I did not say that StarFox wouldn't pick up the MST, I meant that their ship's computers wouldn't know how to interpret a storm caused by and being sustained by the magic of an entire planet being out of whack from Scales basically holding the entire world hostage to get his clan into a ruling position. Of course none of his loyalists think he'd REALLY blow up the planet, it's just to keep the masses in line, right? So they wouldn't realize the trouble they were in until -bang!- And Fox, being the protagonist he is, would go out in his Arwing to 'check it out' against Peppy's common sense and Slippy's cowardice.
I know this isn't Star Trek, but I'm still surprised they didn't try to keep it a secret from a non-space culture there were other planets or that the universe was filled with ETs.
One plot point that I'd shoot if I had the chance was the idea of Krystal 'coming to the planet because of a distress signal' it's just too awful.
And my plot idea STILL leaves Krystal's origin a mystery. IMHO. So I don't see the conflict. I just believe that she arrived so early in her life she has NO memory of any planet BUT Sauria and has no clue she is an ET or there is such a thing as ETs. (The Saurian likely consider her a benign mutant. Rather like the Sharp Claws are said to be mutants themselves.)
Another idea that I've almost always had is that Krystal was actually created by the Kazowa to help Fox, and was given implanted memories of a life of a space farer with a convient excuse for why she had no family or fellows, with her dingy ship being created in the same fashion. Making nearly everything she remembers up until she raided Scale's ship a lie. It would explain her powers, her style of dress, why she's blue, and other things that are slightly off about her (the things about caporal entities the Kazowa couldn't quite pin down). You gotta admit would explain a lot of things.
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Aaronmcloud [2008-02-09 18:32:07 +0000 UTC]
saw this on another particular site. very lovely series. awesome job!
fox's muzzle is supposed to be all white not white on one side and orange on the other.
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Aaronmcloud In reply to SkycladFox [2008-02-16 18:57:11 +0000 UTC]
no problem.
one little question, at the end do they have twin girls, or is it one boy and a girl?
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SkycladFox In reply to Aaronmcloud [2008-02-17 13:24:55 +0000 UTC]
A boy (the blue one) and a girl (the gold one), James and Amber.
Any particular reason why, or is it simply that I didn't make it clear enough?
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Aaronmcloud In reply to SkycladFox [2008-02-17 20:52:59 +0000 UTC]
well, I guessed it was a boy from the start and I already knew the gold one was a girl and having her mothers hair is a big giveaway. to me at least it was a tiny bit hard to tell the blue one being a boy, my guess was it was around the forehead area with the blue part of his fur pointing down like the bottom part of a heart.
p.s. will you be doing more? like showing the kits grown up a little (age 7 or 8 or whatever) I know you said it was over but i was just wondering.
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YesImDeadpool [2008-01-17 00:31:29 +0000 UTC]
For a moment I thought Fox was just Krystal but with different fur, but it turns out their two separate characters. Great work!
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Dragonrider1227 [2008-01-16 03:42:13 +0000 UTC]
That looks so sweet ^^
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RadosBadger [2008-01-06 20:08:46 +0000 UTC]
Well, I believe this is the first time itΒ΄s not a picture you took in nature with your camera. Do I get right from your comment youΒ΄re not actually a furry? Nevertheless, you did a very nice work here.
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Model-O [2008-01-06 05:00:33 +0000 UTC]
Why arnt the rest of them as furry as their tails?
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TK422 In reply to SkycladFox [2008-04-14 21:55:48 +0000 UTC]
i say they are furry enough to be pillows
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