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Published: 2016-08-07 07:52:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 413; Favourites: 53; Downloads: 6
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Late night doodle in between comic pages. I'm pretty determined to get the next Critical 3 page out before I go back to school on Thursday. And at the pace I'm going, it might be out by tomorrow if I'm not busy.Anyway, here's Tali. She's in that other comic that I'm working on. She's one of the main characters and is basically my waifu-- I'm going to bed before I say something stupid. Goodnight~
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((I'm going to get my shot at this)) I can tell you put enough effort into this piece. You chose the right color combination and blended it well to create a texture. It is very pleasing to the eye but the plain white streak of tears is distracting. If you put a bit of depth at the end it will be okay. The position of the character is also thought out. Your proportions are okay, though the hands are kinda big. Overall, I think this piece is very unique (though disturbing in it's own way). Good job. Keep improving and send an impact in your own way.
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((Aye you're welcome. It's pretty amazing for artists like you do amazing stuff like this, then go down into shtposts within a span of a second XD))
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aaaaye thank you! Tbh this is the first critique on a picture I've ever gotten. Thank you so much for reviewing it!Β Β
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I wish I could be helpful and critique this, but I don`t art and you art well.
I really like the look of this. It looks simple, but not simple and I want to say more but I feel mostly speechless. It`s so nice, everything catches my eye.
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Aaaye thank you! :3c And you don't have to best the best artist in the world to give a critique. Solar Sands and Menace don't draw but look how popular they are just from critiquing deviantart.
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You`re welcome ^_^
I know. I critiqued two pieces of art today, but I don`t think I notice as much because there are certain things I don`t know about to notice. Nothing really jumps out at me to make suggestions for improvement on so I can`t really give a critique.
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Ah ok, I still see parts where I can improve some stuff but I'm always pretty hard on myself with my art.Β
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It`s good to be hard on yourself some times. It`s one of the things that encourages you to improve the most. Just as long as you can see your talent and how amazing your work is still.
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Aight cool, I'll keep that in mind
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SHE CRYING TEARS OF CUM, WHAT IS WRONG WITH ME
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OH MY GOD WHAT HAVE YOU DONE
NOW I CAN NEVER UNSEE IT
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HAHAHA!!!! I WILL RUIN EVERYTHING!!!! >:]
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You've tainted my waifu's innocence
you shall pay for this
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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
i have a dirty mind, W H Y
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I have a dirty mind too. If you saw my internet history you would have to go to God himself and plead forgiveness for having looked at such sin.Β
Β don't do hentai, kids. It will ruin you
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I seen worse shit than that. Look up giuffria-alt-5, he post porn now.
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Oh I've had quite a long and frustrating conversation with him on his alt-3 account. I never want to talk to that crazy fuck ever again.
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Me too. He say that DA is a porn site and sex is wonderful. I tell him DA is art site and will be and he a sad man with no life, but to jeck off on porn.
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I seriously kinda pity him. He's just so fucked in the head, jesus christ. And he thinks I'm a pro-life republican conservative even when I told him I was pro-choice. Like ????? wtf is wrong with him. He's so ignorant.
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He need to step out of the internet and learn shit.
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Exactly. He's probably some jobless 40-something year old creep who lives in his mother's basement and drains her resources. What a douche.
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oooh that fucker just got #exposed Β
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Memestar style
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Thank you!
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Your welcome!
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