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Published: 2012-04-29 18:13:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 553; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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Another Blazblue fan art!
This time it's Blazblue's resident Troll, and all-round ass-hole (Let's be honest here... XD), Yuuki Terumi! (a.k.a. Hazama!)
He's definitely my favourite bad guy (in general.)... I LOVE how sarcastic and sadistic he is, how he blatently goes out of his way to torment and belittle people, playing with lives as if they're mere toys... [Bad-guy rating = 11/10, off the freakin' charts!
]The best way I can describe him is simply... He is Poison...
Art talk now, and I'll be honest, he was trolling me even as I was drawing him, the green in the background ran out... Originally it was just gonna be a plain green background... But it looks alright I guess.
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Whether you like it or not, you will take my critique. The last person I critiqued didn't take it so well, and ended up blocking me like the pussy he is. Enough ranting: Let's get started.
The first thing I saw was his face. While the anatomy is great and all, and it's well done, the face just seems so...boring. I would suggest making him look more menacing, rather than calm and tired. Try tilting his eyebrows down a little more, open his mouth, and reveal some teeth, widen his eyes and give him that "Diabolical" look. The coloring on the jacket is just not dark enough. You need to find a darker black color for it. Terumi's eyes are also bright yellow, not dark brown. One more thing, there's a gap between his arm pit and the jacket, which looks to me like he's incomplete. It looks like he's missing a key part of his sides. Other than that, the anatomy is fine, and your did a good job as far as linework goes. However, the colors and expression are extremely off. Remember: Yellow eyes, blac jacket. For the expression, tilt the eyebrows down a little more, and since Terumi rarely ever has his mouth closed, give him a diabolical grin. Widen his right eye, and move the iris to the left on his left eye to make it look like he's looking at the viewer. Make sure to give him that sadistic look we all know and love Terumi for. Good try, but it needs to be better!
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Thank you for your honesty, I think it a pretty accurate critique. In truth I still need to practice drawing the more crazier characters (I mostly draw cute girls, and kinda wimpy looking guys...), and as for the colors I agree totally, I'm in desperate need of new marker pens, that gray is the darkest I've got right now, and they cost a bomb... I'll be sure to take this critique to heart, once again, thanks for the honesty.
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