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sinlaire In reply to 123leyang321 [2014-05-03 01:06:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks~
yup, i love to explore the cyberpunk / post-apocalypse theme, especially the peaceful aspect of them~

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123leyang321 In reply to sinlaire [2014-05-03 04:16:22 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. I liked your approach of the genre and the way you created the atmosphere of the universe you created.
It has that peaceful feeling, but it also has that feeling that something bad might be amiss.

I'll definitely be keeping an eye on your comic. Keep doing a great job.

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sinlaire In reply to CelesOran [2013-12-23 08:21:46 +0000 UTC]

i was experimenting with that 4 coma format. i usually make an action comic with dynamic panel, so i guess it'll be interesting to try something new~

is it not big enough? i originally uploaded a bigger page, but when i try to open it on the website, it takes sometime to load the whole page...

so i assumed that loading time could be bothersome for the reader.

shall i upload a bit bigger than that next time?

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CelesOran In reply to sinlaire [2013-12-24 02:03:45 +0000 UTC]

Well personally I don't read that many mangas, but when I do they usually don't have 8 panels on one page. I think this is why they look so small... well to me.. it's not like there is a manga rule on how many panels to put on one page out there But I do think that taking into account the layout of a page and how it look does impact the manga and story line. But the biggest thing to remember is that the most import part of a manga is the art not the text for we are telling a story through pictures.... if we wanted to tell a story with words we would have just wrote a book instead of a manga (I hope that did sound too mean, for I am really not at all trying to be mean). I hope this answers your question. 

As a side note, I personally think that the max number of panels on one page for you is 7 for how you laid this page out made the panels appear lager to me. (but that is just MY opinion and observation, you don't have to do anything with it)

I also saw that you used the same drawing twice, once on page 8 and again on page 17. I highly recommend to do your best and avoid reusing your drawings in your manga but if you do try at lest try changing it a bit and to not reuse it within the same chapter. There is something that just say "lazy" when you see people reusing a scene.

But above all I want you to remember that this is YOUR manga and I REALLY don't want you to feel pressured into doing something  just because I pointed it out or made a comment I want you to only do it if you want to.

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sinlaire In reply to CelesOran [2013-12-24 02:29:47 +0000 UTC]

thank you for your advice and comment ^____^

i do understand your point . it's just that this time i'm not using that basic theory of panelling and layout.

this time, i was experimenting with 4 coma style comic. since it's quite rare to find a 4 coma comic with

a genre other than gag.

4 coma has different way of story telling. unlike normal comic where you can put any number of panel

with any size you want in one page, 4 coma comic can only use 4 panel for one strip (so maximal 8 panel / 2 strips in

1 standard size paper). it's harder than normal comic format... since you have to figure out how to put 1 topic that

usually took 1 full page in normal comic format in 4 panels / 1 strip, and connect it to the next strip and next page.

it's something new to me and quite challenging~ (it turn out to be very difficult... it took me twice the time i usually needed

to finish normal page...)

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CelesOran In reply to sinlaire [2013-12-26 01:18:42 +0000 UTC]

Ahh I see...that makes sense.. I didn't know that 4 coma was a style of comic... (but then I could have just googled it LOL!!)

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sinlaire In reply to S7alker117 [2013-11-30 20:06:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you ^__^

can't open the one on pixiv? probably because you need pixiv account >___________<

i'm planning to upload the english version to my gallery regularly soon, so you'll probably able to read it here pretty soon ^____^

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MGartist In reply to sinlaire [2013-12-18 14:37:47 +0000 UTC]

I can't get on the pixiv site either...

I thought it had something to do with a regional/location sort of thing. What is pixiv btw? I haven't heard of that site before.

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sinlaire In reply to MGartist [2013-12-18 15:49:58 +0000 UTC]

it's like DA but most of the population is Japanese and mainly populated with manga - anime styled artworks.

the quality is...well I'd say it's higher than DA... so it's a good place to find some reference and inspiration.

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S7alker117 In reply to sinlaire [2013-12-01 22:52:15 +0000 UTC]

Ah, I see!

I'll be waiting for you to post it here, then. I'm watching you and eagerly waiting! ^^

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sinlaire In reply to S7alker117 [2013-12-14 22:11:56 +0000 UTC]

news~

i uploaded the first english chapter on MangaMagazine.

here you go : shar.es/Ov2sb

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S7alker117 In reply to sinlaire [2013-12-15 00:52:10 +0000 UTC]

This was awesome! What a cliffhanger at the end!
Moar please! ^^

I've caught some issues with the English and if you want to I would liek to point them out for you.

In general, though, the art is beautiful, the story compelling and all in all it's a very cool piece. It was totally worth it!

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sinlaire In reply to S7alker117 [2013-12-15 01:09:03 +0000 UTC]

i'll be very happy if you can do that >____<

if you don't mind... would you like to be my beta reader? >_______<

since my main language isn't english (even my secondary language is not english either XD)....

i need a native speaker that would correct my grammar and words...

by the way, thank you for reading it ^__________^

i'm still trying to get more reader for this english version... XD

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S7alker117 In reply to sinlaire [2013-12-15 15:56:47 +0000 UTC]

All right, I've sent you some correctios, and I think I managed to get all the major issues.

There's something that we might need to discuss, though.

First is Yurika's dialogue. I corrected it but for some reason I think it would be cute to keep her "Engrish". I'm saying because of her funy demeanor it would be actualyl fitting if she didn't talked it perfect English.
The Doctor, though, I think should talk in perfect English, of course.

Secondly, the Doctor. I LOOOOVEEE this guy! He has a very strong presence, and I think that's what you intended. I've made some notes regarding his name. Again, this is just advice, the work is yours and you should do what you feel to be better.
The thing is Doctor is a term, so it sounds better with the "the" before it. But if you itnend to keep it as a name, then you should simply ignore this and keep it as it is. On the other hand, calling him "The Doctor" gives him a greater aura of mystery and works as a shout-out of sorts to Dr. Who and similar works, what is always funny. Of course, it's all up to you.

Third, the girl's mother. She's so pretty... 

Anyhow, I would love to help you out with this project of yours. It's interesting and funny. How would you want to do this? Do you want me to share my e-mail with you?

On th other hand, you should have in mind that I'm not an English native speaker. I kind of learned it on my own expenses to write my sci-fi stories. What I mean is that your issues with English now shouldn't discourage you. With work you can become as profecient as a native speaker.

Now, I really want to see mroe of this, keep it coming.

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sinlaire In reply to S7alker117 [2013-12-15 20:52:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you very muuuuch, i lovee yoooouuu XD

by the way, can you send me your email (via note), so that i can send you the next chapter

before i upload it ^_________________^

first - i guess so, i agree with you~ ^___^

second - i actually didn't think much about this guy... the whole comic was originally a spontaneous

comic project to keep me entertained (since i get bored with my daily job quite easily and that'll 

bring down my mood >____<). so i didn't expecting doctor would gain so much fan >_____<

i guess i'll consider the "the" for doctor. i kinda afraid that it'll be too close to Dr.Who and some people

will not quite happy with that >________<

hooo~ you write sci-fi stories~?  (i kinda like that genre too quite recently~ ^_____________^)

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S7alker117 In reply to sinlaire [2013-12-15 23:10:05 +0000 UTC]

I'll do that, then.

Yeah, it would make her cuter and give some sense of multiculturalism.

Maybe it was something instinctive. He seems to be the hero type of sorts and when we write such characters we usually bring out what we want a hero to be. When it happens by accident then it's the best kind of accidents. ^^
Yeah, I see your point, although I believe this story t obe different enough from Dr. Who for any real connection. It's was just an idea though, and it would do good either way.

Yeah, I have a couple of them published and also have some fanfiction in my DA page. ^^
I always loved sci-fi, so it was natural that I began writing about it.

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sinlaire In reply to S7alker117 [2013-12-16 00:59:32 +0000 UTC]

i see. let me think about it then. i guess using "the" in some particular situation sounds cool too....

hooO~~ then i'll be off to your page~ (yaay new things to read tonight~)

i love sci-fi stories~ ^________^

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S7alker117 In reply to sinlaire [2013-12-16 18:58:39 +0000 UTC]

It does, it all depends on what you intend to do with the character.

Thank you. Hope you enjoy what you find. ^^

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sinlaire In reply to Karinta [2013-11-30 20:07:15 +0000 UTC]

thank youu ^_____^

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Karinta In reply to sinlaire [2013-12-04 13:37:59 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome dear.

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sinlaire In reply to Abdulla-A [2013-11-27 13:56:00 +0000 UTC]

thank you for sparing your time to read it ^______^

glad you enjoy it~

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sinlaire In reply to toxiety [2013-11-15 06:16:05 +0000 UTC]

thank you~

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sinlaire In reply to Nekomicha [2013-11-15 00:32:13 +0000 UTC]

hahha XD 

so far sih saya cetak n jual terbatas, vol.01 nya kemarin saya jual di AFAID 2013.

belum ada tanda2 bakal coba submit ke penerbit sih, sayanya masih sibuk ama yg lain soalnya >_____<

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