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Published: 2017-07-08 19:59:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 802; Favourites: 39; Downloads: 0
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eYYY I HAVEN'T DRAWN MY OC FOR FUN IN A WHILE~ I really hope chu like it ^^This is the first time i'm asking for critiques sooooooo hmu lol <33
I know I'm not a professional drawer, I seriously barely know how to incorporate things in my mind to paper/digital canvas lol. Please know that~
Time Took: a while lol
Program: FireAlpaca
mY OC. lol~ If you see anyone posting my OC or this picture anywhere claiming it as someone elses, please tell me ^^
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oki ill go back to commissions~
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Comments: 36
This is very beautiful and shiny. I know many people would say that making something shiny and using unrealistic shading is a bad thing, I personally enjoy it. The sparkling and shining are very pleasing to the eye. (sorry for using the word "shiny" so much)
I like the way you drew the legs as they remind me of an old MLP movie I watched. The rounding of it is very cute. The way the back legs are angled is weird, though, and make it seem like they are about to fall out from under her.
The placement of the horn makes me question where her head is under her mane. The horn looks like it should be placed higher up, otherwise, the head seems too small.
The little designs in the eyes are really cute and pleasing to the eye. Though I don't normally mind when artists do this, I think that the eyes being visible under the mane looks a bit odd.
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this is very pretty, and I love the color choice and technique. for this, I'm being honest. and of course its an oc, that you made, so its kind of original, so I will rate 5 starts. and the fact that you are one of the people who didn't make an alicorn, this is better. as I said before, this is a great oc, and you should draw it more. now, this is where I tell you the bad things, there aren't many either. her snout comes out too much to me, and I wont judge it but, is it supposed to be pointy? this is awesome, and I love it.
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You have really clean lines, but watch the hooves if you're doing size by pen pressure (if you want thiccCCC lines like how you drew the chest!)! Watch the lineart whenever you're shading! The shading could be darker than the lineart! I won't talk about anything that could be a feature of your art style! Overlapping colors in lineart may be confusing! CM proportions are doin great! Always pay attention to if the tail droops down further than the hooves, if so, give the effect as if the tail has touched the floor! You may stick to white for lighting, but add effects are great! The dots are cute, but if you want to show some sparkle effect, there are programs for editing images (u already know, u use them more than i would), or the sparkle tool on firealpalca! The hooves should also look as if they touched the floor (think of the flat side of a bouncy ball hitting the ground)!
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thats so cute i love how you draw the ponies
could you draw me
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ilyyyy more <33333333333333333333333333
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SHUSHUSHSUHSUSHUSH I LOVE YOU MORE
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nU UH I LOVE YOUUUUU MORE
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you shut your lil
no i do
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wELL I LOVE YOU MORE THAN SPAGHETTI GOES WITH MEATBALLS.
hAH
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OH SHOOT THAT'S A LOT OF LOVE
ILY MORE THAN U LOVE OREOS
THE VELVET KIND
WITH MILK
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sHOOOT GOD NO I CAN'T COMPETE WITH THAT
BUT I CAN
ILY MORE THAN YOU LOVE ART AND DRAWING AND MOCHI AND YOUR OC HUMAN THINGS AND GOOGLE+ AND YOUR COMPUTER AND YOUR FAMILY AND ME.
hAH.
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i love you more than EXISTENCE ITSELF
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hHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEEEHEHEHEE
I LOVE YOU MORE THAN ALL OF THE EXISTENCE, UNIVERSE, SPACE AND TIME, AND ANYTHING ENDLESS
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Oml soo cute!!! M U S T...D R A W...T H I S..C O O T...PONE!
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