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Published: 2012-01-09 00:29:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 2541; Favourites: 173; Downloads: 0
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Edit, removed moon and stars and accidentaly bamboo. added depth to mokou.Thank you ~MaullarMaullar , ~HotTorchic , ~ChocolaYuki and ~Mizu-nyan for the critiques!
Edit, this made it to Kourindou and Danbooru. Thank you B)
Happy Birthday, ~tsukidokei !!
; v ; I love you soooooooo much
Im sorry I forgot
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Looking quite graceful today, Mokou.
I love them huge sleevecuffs.
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Wow. You always do great coloring work, but this is above and beyond even for you. I like the highlights of the flames, the contrast of it to the dark background; basically, all of your color work is awesome.
The only problem is that I would have liked to see Mokou's eyes be more contrasting and "pop" more.
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un minuto....
DONDE ESTA EL BAMBU DE FONDO?!?!?!?!
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xD eso es posible? XDDD y donde esta el Ctrl z?
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Thanks a looot <3 And for the fav too!
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No problem, I really like it.~
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megusssssssssta β₯
Siiiiiiil :3 estΓ‘ hermoso! muchas graciass! ;__;
you're the best
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:3 me alegra que le haya gustadouuuuuuuuuuuu <3
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POWAH
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just a random deviant passing by
i read a critique and just had a different view on it so i thought i'd say that i do not think the head shape looks weird at all it looks like its just has a unique style added to it, it doesn't need to be a perfect U/V shape, and i really your style and the coloring/painting you used
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Thanks, and that critique is rather old, I fixed her head right after several people gave me advice B)
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see, I told you , you didn't need my help at all, and you can do your best by yourself to get in
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Viste? Me lo aceptaron en touhou-kourindou o:
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Really digging this. Also, nothing major to criticize, and the anatomy looks okay since the style seems pretty ellastic. And the effects look good without stealing too much attention.
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The overall picture looks great and you really got the idea across, but I'm still going to pick on the little things because you asked.
The pose is a little weird. Her legs are in places they shouldn't be able to and it appears you tried to draw everything either from the front or the side. If you turned her left leg a little to the right side of the pic it would look a lot less awkward. I think she's supposed to be floating but it doesn't look that way. More space underneath her would solve that, I think.
Her head is rather long and has an odd shape, like an upside-down pear. If her face were a little wider it would look more natural. Her hair looks like it's in a ponytail, which looks pretty good on her, but if you attached it lower on the head it would look more loose.
The shading technique is lovely, it doesn't look too hard to do and has a really nice effect. However, it looks like you only used one light source while there are three: the three flames. This doesn't stand out though and it's just something you should keep in mind for the next drawing.
It sounds like I think it's awful now but I really like what you made, and I hope you'll teach me how to draw fire this awesome sometime c:
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Thanks, bro! I needed critiques because I look forward to fix this piece (:
I will try to fix it x)
The fire is actually easy to make, but Its not that awesome :c
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You're welcome, I think you can be a really good artist if you work on your posing a bit.
It looks like it's made of ribbons, that's cute!
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;n; ame como dibujaste el fuego!!!! no se vale!!! >3<
*3* mookooooooo
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HOW CAN I CRITIQUE SOMETHING THIS AWESOME
SERIOUSLY
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Im serious, I want critique
I feel like shit xD
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BUT THERE'S NOTHING D:
!? D: What's wrong??
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De nada Sil c:
Te puedo decir Sil verdad?
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esto esta terriblemente... bien hecho |D *trolling NEET*
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A few minutes before seeing this I decided I would do a piece with her in it, but now I feel like I'd just be copying you.
When the hair goes behind her left (our right) shoe, it seems to suddenly get a lot smaller on the other side, but other than that I can't see anything off. The fire, and lighting in general is esplΓ©ndido-- if I actually used favorites I would favorite this.
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Dont be silly and do it
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I'm back with another minor bit, because nitpicking is fun.
On her left (our right) hand, her fingers simply go over the fire, I think it might have added a bit more depth if you had them going behind the fire. But that just may be me.
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I only have one deviation in my favorites, and it's been that way for years. You're going to have to try pretty hard to get me to start faving.
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este me gusto mucho
pintas tan lindo <3 como toda una diva
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nou vos sos la mejor Diva del mundo
de verdad lo eres 8D
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A single, small, constructive critique:
Shouldn't the ground be lit up?
Other than that, perfect! ^__^
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Well, there are
lights in the bamboos. I didnt want to make them to be on fire xD
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