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shwade-emoboy — dry those eyes
Published: 2004-11-08 08:01:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 161; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 3
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I feel like shitAs I lie here in this bed
This pain is too much
I wish I was dead
Another chance
Another chance to fail
But right now it’s the only thing I have
Once again I’m good for nothing
Dry your eyes
It’s not worth the tears
Cry through the night
And watch as your heart rips in two
Dry your eyes
Stop crying
Sometimes I don’t know
Weather I’m doomed to be lonely
Or is it just the way I act
But then again why should I give a fuck
Left lonely with a broken heart just my luck
Time after time
Putting my self on the line
Getting ripped apart
Left crying in the dark
Dry your eyes
It’s not worth the tears
Cry through the night
And watch as your heart rips in two
Dry your eyes
Stop crying
Hating the way I feel
I can’t take it
That really hurt
Not here in the dark you make me feel like dirt
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Comments: 11
Wonderful rythm that flos really well. As for critique...well..I would either make more line breaks to make all the lines equally short or combine a few to make them all equally long. other than that nothing comes to mind. The word choice is rather good and the feeling comes across. Cool stuff!
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not bad seeming i was quite upset when i wrote that.....i was actually crying
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break up suck.....but meh i gain soemthing outta the hole thing
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thas good. as long as there's something to feel glad about in the end then all's well.
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*hug* thats awful. I'm sorry. Yeah. its hellish isn't it?
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ooooo me likes and me can so relate to this.....going is fav's....
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great choice of words. i love your writings they are awesome, i hope you dont feel that bad.
if u ever want to talk u know where to find me
Elle xox
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thank..i have a pritty big supprot group most of them are her friends so yeah...im cool now
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