Comments: 8
sJibbi [2014-02-15 01:08:24 +0000 UTC]
This definitely appears to be a violent and creepy monster. The size of the creature in this composition adds a strong emphasis on how dangerous this scene is, as well as how the trees appear to be bending under the weight.ย
The fearful pose and position of the much smaller human is dynamic as he lays frenzied on the ground before those 11 eyes and sharp teeth.
A very minor suggestion is to maybe make the fire more active by adding some red/orange and some of the fire's flicker. (:
But, I find this horrific monster concept executed nicely with the dark tones and the vertical layout. Great work overall shoze
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shoze In reply to sJibbi [2014-02-16 14:35:52 +0000 UTC]
thank you for the well thought crit. i totally agree with what you said about the orange fire, must've forgotten about it along the way.
this seems like a very cool initiative you got there, many thanks for choosing my work. keep up the good job
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mortalshinobi [2014-02-14 23:56:52 +0000 UTC]
interesting. makes me think of a dr. sues type monster.
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Redcaterpie In reply to shoze [2014-02-16 17:43:37 +0000 UTC]
I see where you're coming from. Looks like Howl's Moving Castle mixed with the creepy cave spider things in Legend of Zelda: Spirit Tracks. Awesome.
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