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Published: 2013-03-11 13:39:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 2679; Favourites: 60; Downloads: 0
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I got so much problems with this illustration when I had to print it XD So much problems that I don't even have any posters available for that illustration T_T sooooo only postcard XDWe'll sell the leftovers postcards really soon and they'll be available worldwide !
More infos soon ! Stay tuned ppl ! <3No features today, sorry guys, I don't have time to browse art x'D
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Nice Job on this. I wish I could write a more detailed critique but when there isn't really anything that stands out as something that requires improvement , then all I can offer is nitpicks. That is a good thing though because it means you did a great job! Anyway here are my nitpicks:
1.The face- Asuka doesn't really have high cheekbones. I don't know if you attempted to give her some but even if you did the line between her chin and cheeks becomes concave as opposed to a smooth curve. If I were you I would try smoothing that line out a bit more.
The lighting (maybe) - You have a definite light source but unless there is some sort of structure in front of Asuka that is obscuring it, you really shouldn't have such hard shadows on her. If there is something in front of her (like a busted wall or something) then you can pretty much ignore this part. One thing that would suggest that there is a structure in front of her is that the shadows seem inconsistent. Her torso is dark but her thigh is lit. Her face is also partially lit but there is a smooth transition of light in her hair. One could argue that her hair is obscuring her face and body, however if that were the case then there should be more highlights in her hair facing the source as well as maybe a few strands in front of the suit to denote the difference in depth.
proportioning (nitpick) - The plugs in the body suit (particularly on her torso) are sized wrong. The one on the left is bigger which is weird because the one on the right seems like it should be closer to the viewer.
To reiterate, The curve from the cheek to the chin is off. The shadows seem inconsistent and aren't really possible unless there is a structure present that is obscuring the light source, and lastly make sure that the pieces of the suit are drawn in proportion with each other. Aside from those few nitpicks there is nothing that really stands out as wrong in this picture. You did a pretty good job at depicting a more serious/ mature looking side to Asuka. Good luck with your posters and keep up the awesome work e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/sā¦ " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thank you !
sorry for the late late late reply ;w;
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Should Try To Get The Poster Up, It's A Very Good Image That Looks Like You're Promoting An Anime Movie.
Success On All The Sales.
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aaaaaaw that's the best comment I've had ! Thank you so much ! ccc:
and so sorry for the lateness of the reply ;w;
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My Pleasure And Don't Worry About It.
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I really like the way you colored it, the shading is good too.
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Thank you !
sorry for the late late late reply ;w;
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You're welcome 
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Thank you !
sorry for the late late late reply ;w;
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Thank you !
sorry for the late late late reply ;w;
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Thank you !
sorry for the late late late reply ;w;
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God, you and your fabulous shading. D:<
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Thank you !
sorry for the late late late reply ;w;
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You're welcome, hun. <3
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This is really, really nice. Wish you could make it a poster though, would totally buy it :3
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I wish too ahahah but it came all weird when printed XD
and Thank you !
sorry for the late late late reply ;w;
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Haha it's okay, I haven't been on DA or made any art in a looooong time. Trying to build a gaming PC, buy a DDR cabinet, fix my car, get ready for school, etc.
So yeah haha I need time and motivation
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omg ahahha I need to build a PC too for work x'D (and games ofcccc)
wth a DDR cabinet ??? for real??? I can't even make a step on a real DDR I'm such a loser
School is starting now for you? I just finished school a week ago XD
Urgh yeah, motivation OTZ
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So uhh...sorry for the super super super late reply. I was busy working all summer and not doing anything art related. Just had my first day of classes today and it reminded me that I had artwork on here I can use of portfolios and inspiration haha.
I never did make or buy a cabinet. And school is going to kiiiiill me this semester. 2 modeling/animation classes and a game design class. It's goin to be pretty rough.
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