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Haha! Page two! Told you I'd get it up.... eventually. This is page two of my kingdom hearts comic. ITS AKUROKU. Meaning this is SHONEN AI. If you have a problem with yaoi or the pairing or the way I draw or anything else, I ask you to please not comment. Don't even comment about how its good but you don't like the pairing. I DON'T CARE. Go flame someone else. I will eat you... seriously. just don't do it...

Now that thats out of the way, its not heading for rape! DX I swear its clean! Everyone tells me Axel looks like he's about to rape Roxas, but that's not where this is going... Well I'm not sure where this is going... but still! I don't draw man parts so don't worry, there will be no rape...

THE COMIC HAS BEEN NAMED! This is called Shattered, thanks to my buddy who does not have a deviantart account. Oh, and I'll be putting up the cover page asap. Its got a lot of detail and I'm still not so great with my tablet so I'm sorry its taking so long. DX I'm only 15! What do you expect!?

And now I must make some appologies. To the person who I dedicated this too because you inspired me with your photography, I'm sorry, I had no idea you hated akuroku XD there will be some Zemyx later for ya. To all you people I left waiting, I'm sorry, I'm swamped with work =_= I'm doing the best I can here. To all you people forced to look at this lameness, I'm sorry I can't draw for beans T.T and to all those people annoyed by the smudges, I'm NOT SORRY!!! You can blame the jerks at my school. You try drawing in math class when you're the only freshman in a class of seniors. >.< gullible was NOT written on the ceiling when they took my papers!

Anyways, all comments and IDEAS are very much appreciated. I need some ideas REALLY badly. And suggestions too... like if the pencil look is annoying, should I change to inking? Seriously, gimme some feedback people. much <3 2 u all~
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Comments: 65

xXxLostGirlxXX [2012-05-02 19:28:23 +0000 UTC]

"Who said I needed your permission?"
OHHHH, YOU JUST GOT TOLD, ROXY!

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KashTheKat [2012-02-25 01:29:01 +0000 UTC]

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bananaba [2011-11-15 06:22:34 +0000 UTC]

PAGE # NOW!~!!!!!!

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BlueDressWonder [2011-10-09 23:50:36 +0000 UTC]

PAGE 3!

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Doens-Angel [2011-09-18 19:37:27 +0000 UTC]

Insta fave~!

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crazycheckers [2011-06-22 21:07:14 +0000 UTC]

page three? what ... you cant just stop..wha.. you... page 3 NOW !!! XPPP hahahah keep up the good work it looks AWEsome

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AnimeManga16 [2011-05-30 18:12:52 +0000 UTC]

is there more?? D:

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sonic2049 [2011-05-21 17:49:31 +0000 UTC]

oh and nice art

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sonic2049 [2011-05-21 17:49:13 +0000 UTC]

I'd be looking forward to the continuation of this comic.

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earthwing15 [2010-07-23 07:43:42 +0000 UTC]

oooo! scandalous! xD haha Im lovin' this comic! ;D Love your drawing style! :3

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AnimekerGirl [2010-03-31 23:11:52 +0000 UTC]

You use your awesome drawing skills for evil! Not cool.

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nennachan [2009-12-04 06:24:35 +0000 UTC]

love it!! >///<

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x-Nekotsubasa-x [2009-11-24 09:39:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow, your art is fantastic! :3

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hyugayume [2009-10-26 05:13:04 +0000 UTC]

ohh going sraight to the sex...i love it

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DigiMoon93 [2009-07-17 04:47:56 +0000 UTC]

WOW U DRAW SOOO PRETTY!!!!!!! *gasp* and u got Axel's hair right....to this day i STILL cant draw his hair XD......or his eyes....i can draw his nose SOMETIMES but normally no........
Jes, u draw Axel VERRRRY good

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DisneyStar12 [2009-06-10 04:10:11 +0000 UTC]

Um...what's he doing at pannel 7?

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1axelfan [2009-03-26 02:52:43 +0000 UTC]

is there going to be a third

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bloodyblackvalentine [2009-01-04 11:25:10 +0000 UTC]

Whatever you choose to do, you've got me lined up for page three.

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pineappleeeez [2009-01-04 04:51:46 +0000 UTC]

your drawing is AMAZING! i suck at drawing axel.
hopefully i'll be as good as you soon. (any tips?)

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shattered-destiny In reply to pineappleeeez [2009-01-19 03:13:28 +0000 UTC]

Keep your angles sharp and it helps to keep reference pictures. Axel is easiest in my opinion from a side view.

Sorry for the delayed response, I have moved accounts.

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pineappleeeez In reply to shattered-destiny [2009-01-19 04:51:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much for the tips! I just drew a sketch of Axel and it looks so much better!

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Ata-Chan [2008-12-19 17:40:39 +0000 UTC]

Waaaaaaaaaaah. I wanna read somemooore!

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Mosstar [2008-10-23 17:19:18 +0000 UTC]

I love your technique, it's really awsome. and i absoloutley love Akuroku <3 no worries there. my mind i crawling about thinking about what the plot might be :3 definatley going to keep an eye out.

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Rulisu [2008-09-12 18:39:00 +0000 UTC]

I just can't believe how freakin' amazingly awesome you are. O.O

I can barely draw stick figures and this... this totally beats the hell out of any hand-drawn comic i've ever seen.

Major kudos!

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Sora-X-Roxas-X-Me [2008-09-10 16:12:02 +0000 UTC]

OMG lol sexual assult would be perfect for page three! And maybe even page four! You gotta make sure to get a fair bit in. What Axel says last makes it sound like there will be rape lol. I know you said you dont daw man parts so maybe just force kissing and touching? Pin Roxy up agaisnt the wall or something -- I dunno

But yeah -- that should be your next move. Your style of drawing is so cool! I love the shading and stuffs. X3 Ciao!
Shannon..x

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shattered-destiny In reply to Sora-X-Roxas-X-Me [2008-09-10 20:50:06 +0000 UTC]

XD I like your style, hun. I'm seriously debating my next moves for page four. It all depends on what I can come up with plot wise.

Lemme know if you have any more advice, cause honest I have no clue where this is going X3

Thanks for the comment <3

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Sora-X-Roxas-X-Me In reply to shattered-destiny [2008-09-11 07:29:11 +0000 UTC]

OMG i just read the third page and Yay! Roxas literall begs for it lol He's so cute! ((Thats my yaoi looving side -- the sensible side of me will be back soon ))

Lol Shannon..x

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shattered-destiny In reply to Sora-X-Roxas-X-Me [2008-09-12 00:03:29 +0000 UTC]

Lol thanks, I still don't know a thing about page for so maybe Roxy will get it~!

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Sora-X-Roxas-X-Me In reply to shattered-destiny [2008-09-12 15:47:01 +0000 UTC]

Yay!

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ShinigamiAura [2008-06-21 15:24:58 +0000 UTC]

yay
It looks promising ^^
Can't wait to read more ^^

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gabrielsangel [2008-05-26 06:50:12 +0000 UTC]

OH WOW! They look great! I love the Axel Roxas sexyness going on!

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shattered-destiny In reply to gabrielsangel [2008-05-27 19:12:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks <3 If you've got any requests or suggestions for the next pages feel free to speak up

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gabrielsangel In reply to shattered-destiny [2008-05-28 01:44:06 +0000 UTC]

You are so welcome! Your work is great!

Really? I do have an idea, I'll post it on the third page.

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Zaria-Aleris [2008-04-30 23:18:04 +0000 UTC]

Ooooh I remember this haha. Can't wait to see how it actually plays out! ^_^

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shattered-destiny In reply to Zaria-Aleris [2008-06-13 23:53:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah thanks so much for you help! I hope you will like it.

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Zaria-Aleris In reply to shattered-destiny [2008-06-17 21:17:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure I will

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Ldrmas [2008-04-19 18:03:38 +0000 UTC]

W00T was happens next

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A-dArK-SiDe-3-6-9-8 [2008-04-05 23:07:18 +0000 UTC]

Wow! it's great!

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shattered-destiny In reply to A-dArK-SiDe-3-6-9-8 [2008-04-07 23:31:15 +0000 UTC]

^^ thanks~

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patraningenskiller [2008-04-05 14:24:54 +0000 UTC]

I'd be looking forward to the continuation of this comic. I don't see why it wouldn't be continued, it's quite entertaining.

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shattered-destiny In reply to patraningenskiller [2008-04-07 23:28:43 +0000 UTC]

XD Thanks! I'll get right on that. Lemme know if you've got any ideas for what you want to see happen later in the comic.

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patraningenskiller In reply to shattered-destiny [2008-04-08 19:37:33 +0000 UTC]

I sayyyyyy something borderline sexual assault and Roxas begins to cry or something along those lines

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shattered-destiny In reply to patraningenskiller [2008-04-09 23:58:16 +0000 UTC]

XD Lol a lot of people are saying that. I'm still debating!

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patraningenskiller In reply to shattered-destiny [2008-04-10 01:44:07 +0000 UTC]

Well jebus, just keep going it's killing me not to see a page 3!! XD

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shattered-destiny In reply to patraningenskiller [2008-04-27 00:01:37 +0000 UTC]

You'll definately like page three! XD Im inking it! it will be up asap!

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patraningenskiller In reply to shattered-destiny [2008-04-27 00:45:50 +0000 UTC]

HELLZ YAAAAAAAAAA c:!!!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3 I'VE BEEN WAITING

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shattered-destiny In reply to patraningenskiller [2008-04-27 12:23:01 +0000 UTC]

:3 thanks~ that means a lot. I'll have it uploaded within 1 week.

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patraningenskiller In reply to shattered-destiny [2008-04-27 13:47:00 +0000 UTC]

lmfao Yayyyyyyyyyyyy <3

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spicytacopie [2008-04-02 12:23:00 +0000 UTC]

i love it and this page has me laughing! i dono why tho..

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spicytacopie In reply to spicytacopie [2008-04-03 21:11:01 +0000 UTC]

yay

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