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Shadowof-Mahogany — Together In The Rain
Published: 2009-04-25 22:35:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 722; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 3
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Description Laying here, watching the rain fall,
I am struck by a sudden revelation,
One that taunts and teases my mind.

How many of these falling drops,
These tiny spheres of liquid life,
Have come into contact with you?

Was the one that landed on my cheek,
A tear you shed in a moment of pain,
Of weakness, despair, or mourning?

Was the one that landed on my hand,
A bead of sweat wiped from your brow,
When you were proving your strength?

Is the one trickling down my chest,
A bead of water that caressed yours,
As you washed life down the drain?

That tiny droplet of water on my lips,
Did it ever caress your parched ones,
As you were slaking a terrible thirst?

So, I lay here, watching the rain fall,
Wondering if you ever realized this:
We will always be together in the rain.

(c) Ellen Timmerman (Shiloh Thompson) 2009
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Comments: 19

piggieheartsbaby [2009-10-11 20:52:44 +0000 UTC]

awww...me <3'y !! and i like your little icon that says love is a lie

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Shadowof-Mahogany In reply to piggieheartsbaby [2009-10-12 01:18:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I greatly appreciate it.

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piggieheartsbaby In reply to Shadowof-Mahogany [2009-10-12 01:28:43 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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SirTimmyty [2009-08-18 07:31:01 +0000 UTC]

Deep. Loved it.

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Shadowof-Mahogany In reply to SirTimmyty [2009-08-18 12:31:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Just an epiphany I had while missing someone special one day.

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TheseKrimzonFlames [2009-05-01 01:49:14 +0000 UTC]

I like this, a lot.

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Shadowof-Mahogany In reply to TheseKrimzonFlames [2009-05-01 08:35:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, love! And thanks for the favorite on it too!

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TheseKrimzonFlames In reply to Shadowof-Mahogany [2009-05-01 15:56:10 +0000 UTC]

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TheKnell [2009-04-26 00:59:34 +0000 UTC]

What a lovely concept! Love it!

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Shadowof-Mahogany In reply to TheKnell [2009-04-26 01:35:15 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! And thank you for the favorite as well!

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TheKnell In reply to Shadowof-Mahogany [2009-04-26 01:56:24 +0000 UTC]

My pleasure entirely.

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Shadowof-Mahogany In reply to TheKnell [2009-04-26 01:35:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! And thank you for the favorite as well!

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Puffshkin [2009-04-25 22:41:55 +0000 UTC]

I love this, and the idea <3
I'm like that too, I have a slight phobia of rain but I would sit and think... just like you did here hense why I can relate.

That,and this is an amazing piece that had me reading till the end. Well done ^_^

Fave<3

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Shadowof-Mahogany In reply to Puffshkin [2009-04-25 22:50:24 +0000 UTC]

Wow, thank you so much!

Yeah, it is kind of a weird thing to think about, especially considering some of the things we put water through... I mean, I know the whole water cycle cleans it and whatnot, but still, the point remains. >< Ah, the joys of thinking too much and too hard.

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Puffshkin In reply to Shadowof-Mahogany [2009-04-25 22:55:43 +0000 UTC]

Bwaha thanks for the glomp ^_^

Exactly... poor water.
[notices your sig] I <3 coffee!

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Shadowof-Mahogany In reply to Puffshkin [2009-04-25 23:01:49 +0000 UTC]

Ahh! Coffee is the best! I went without it for three months this last summer, and when I started drinking it again, I wasn't used to the caffeine anymore. It was pretty amazing to see the results. I think I scared my poor coworkers.

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Puffshkin In reply to Shadowof-Mahogany [2009-04-25 23:09:26 +0000 UTC]

Aw, three months without? How did you LIVE D: I can just imagine the results too xDD

I went... two months without before. I was in hospital and their coffee was rank so I lived on tea until someone brought in decaf (DECAF) and I went crazy. Yeah decaf. o.O
x

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Shadowof-Mahogany In reply to Puffshkin [2009-04-26 00:16:10 +0000 UTC]

I barely survived. I can live without most things, but taking away my coffee is like sentencing me to death. It was horrible. ><

Ewww... Decaf? It's like the bastard child of coffee. It doesn't even count. Its like... Coffee flavored water... Tea, to me, is even worse. I had to try some sweet tea today at work, and it was, ugh... I'm so from the North. Its coffee or nothing for me.

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Puffshkin In reply to Shadowof-Mahogany [2009-04-27 20:58:46 +0000 UTC]

*hugs* Noone should ever have to endure such a thing D:
Decaf is the pointless clone of coffee, (or bastard child )
Oh but tea is great! I'm afraid we will differ here *hmph*

One of us should write a poem of how great coffee is P: xDD

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