Bozu-chan [2007-05-15 17:24:01 +0000 UTC]
*nods in agreement* well it seems like evryone is trying to get to the other side but the other side is just another person prison....so why go to the other side....brighten up your side and you'll live happier and longer.
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shadowfox-sf In reply to Bozu-chan [2007-05-16 03:32:58 +0000 UTC]
I'm more pleased with this poem, it has more structure than the other ones...
4 lines per section, and in each main sections before I start giving a command to the reader, it includes "other side"
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