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Published: 2016-09-16 11:11:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 177; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Description This is my OC for a new fanfiction! This fic is based in the Resident Evil series and Raven is on a mission to kill EVERYONE who was involved with the Racoon City incident. She is an assassin and not somebody you'd want to mess with. Her main nemesis is Wesker. Her primary target is Oswald E. Spencer.

if you wanna check out the fic you can find the first chapter here : fav.me/dahsw01
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horrorlandcop74 [2016-10-26 14:11:40 +0000 UTC]

awesome drawing! she definitely looks like someone who shouldnt be messed with

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-10-26 15:19:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! no she's not lol. She's worse than her brother and I'm gonna give her a makeover

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-10-27 11:53:36 +0000 UTC]

oh really? and what does her brother do? look forward to seeing

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-10-27 13:09:52 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm should I tell you the spoiler or not... *Taps chin thoughtfully* I'll give you a hint. He's in Resident Evil 0

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-10-28 07:39:07 +0000 UTC]

spoiler, hmm? Oh, i think i know who it might be but im probably wrong. Is it...Billy Cohen?  

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-10-28 07:55:54 +0000 UTC]

*ding ding ding!* Congratulations!! You just won seven minutes of heaven with an RE character of your choice :3

Yup! You guessed right it's Billy

And new pic!! fav.me/damkae4

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-10-28 08:16:18 +0000 UTC]

yay!! *Spends 7 mins with Birkin*

Thanks, I just checked it out! its just

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-10-28 10:01:22 +0000 UTC]

have fun?

And thank you!

So ya, Raven/Rachel is Billy's younger sister by about 2 years. She lost faith in the system when her brother was incarcerated for the murder of 23 people and sentenced to death. She had every intention of intercepting his prisoner transport but problems at home involving Cheif Irons and her baby sister Sophie (12 yrs old) kept her in Racoon city. She was actually in the lock up when the infection broke out.

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-10-28 11:14:13 +0000 UTC]

i sure did

Oh wow, its a fantastic idea that those two are related! And Billy is such a hottie, i really envied Rebecca I'm wondering whether or not he was falsely accused though, seeing how Raven lost faith in the system? Good sister, looking out for him and trying to intercept his vehicle. And cute she has a little sister Did she ever reunite with her? And what problems did she have with Chief Irons, was he pursuing her?

I keep forgetting her name is Rachel, its a cool name! My buddy who i rp with who did the Birkin bunny undies drawing is called Rachel

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-10-28 11:55:42 +0000 UTC]



Oh man me too XD but what's creepy is that at the time, my real life brother looked exactly like Chris Redfield from RE 1 GCN, but hands down he has Billy's attitude. I kid you not. So that inspired me to make Billy, Rachel's big brother :3 but yeah, I believe Billy was the soldier trying to stop the massacre and got knocked to the ground so I reckon he's innocent Rachel, wasn't always so dark, she used to be a rough diamond like her brother. Hard and heavy handed but would do the right thing in the end.

I don't wanna spoil too much of her back story but... Oh I wanna tell you anyway :3 Sophie doesn't make it out of Racoon city. Neither does Rachel's parents. As to what her problem with cheif Irons was, well let me paint the scene I wanna use later. Raven choked the disgusting man with his own tie before slamming his head into his own crowded desk, repeatedly bashing his face against the door before screaming right into his ear "KEEP YOUR FILTHY MITTS OFF MY SISTER!"

Yeah I did kinda obscure her identity so it'd be a big surprise for everyone when Wesker figures out who she is :3 and omg really? What a coincidence!

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-10-28 21:14:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gods!! that is a weird coincidence, looking like and having the attitude of two characters from RE - like a mix of the two. XD Did he have the same hair as Chris?

aww, I think he may be innocent too. Maybe he just tried to scare Rebecca more than anything. in your story, does she appear too? Nice to hear more about Rachel

oh oh how sad about her sister and parents unable to make it out Sophie sounds so cute ;3; And yay for choking him after he molested her poor little sister! What a disgusting sicko he is.  

i love over the idea of obscuring her identity, that was cleverly done!

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-10-29 07:18:38 +0000 UTC]

YES! yes he did! he had the brushed back flat top hair cut. The only major difference was my brother has blue eyes instead of brown XD I called him Chris for a week after playing the game with him. he was not impressed XD

Well did you notice how Billy doesn't confirm or deny if he killed those people? Just explained what happened then didn't want to say anything else? elusive man. very elusive. and yes I was planning to bring Rebecca into the story later, right when things are beginning to get complicated between Raven and Wesker. I figured since Rebecca is a medic she wouldn't really be on the front lines so's to speak so I've made her a part of the BSAA MASH unit. So she can be an in the field medic but is like off sight from the heat of the action.

Yeah.. it kinda messed Rachel up. It's nice and tragic but you'll have to wait for that chapter for the juicy details Yeah but she got thrown into the county jail, right next to that annoying reporter, missing her chance to save her brother and is now separated from her sister. She was not a happy chappie.

why thank you I just wish we got an epilogue that explained what happened to the original survivors like Billy and Rebecca so I decided to make my own In doing so, I needed to keep Raven hidden from the reader until the last minute (actually you'd get a big hint when she bumps into Rebecca)

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-10-29 10:00:36 +0000 UTC]

Your brother sounds gorgeous aww why wasnt he impressed? didnt he like the character? I recently found another reason why i'm drawn to Birkin so much- RE2 Birkin actually resembles my hubby, but a slimer version of him. I also find that RE2 Birkin looks a tiny bit oriental, and my hubby is Japanese so theres the weird coincidences again. Tbh the first time i saw a shot of RE2 Birkin i didnt even realise it was him as they changed him too much in RE0-i thought he was a woman with mysterious eyes!

Its been a while since i played/watched play throughs of the game but i will have to check it out. Sounds very elusive indeed Nice, sneaking Rebecca in at that time should be interesting  

Aww, poor girl thrown into jail for having killed a disgusting man and then unable to save her brother and never see her sister again. I hope she gets revenge on the system, but maybe she already is. And id love to read about the juicy details

I didnt know there was no epilogue, i only started playing the game sometime in April but still havent gotten through it. And yay, looking forward to the story and all the twists

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-10-29 15:08:47 +0000 UTC]

I always though he was very handsome. On the contrary, my brother thought Chris was cool. I was just being the super annoying younger system who would randomly yell "Aaahhh Chris!!!" And tackle hug him XD omg Birkin looks like your hubby? That is awesome! oh wait are you sure you haven't mistaken him for this guy? youtu.be/H-1xPNR2uNU that's Dr Marcus, not our dear old Will. Birkin does show up later though.

Well it could be my wishful thinking but they did make it obvious that Billy was haunted by the events in Africa. That country seems to be a bad omen for the RE franchise :-/ and ya! It'll be the first time Raven loses her cool demeanour, having to be dragged away by Wesker so they could flee XD

Ah she doesn't kill the Cheif, she gets stopped before she can. She will find her sister but I'm not gonna say what happenes so her revenge is bitter sweet don't worry,all will be revealed later!

Oh it's tricky! Despite controlling two people you never seem to have enough space in your inventory XD now go try and write the next chapter...

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-10-29 15:46:27 +0000 UTC]

Aww! I think it's normal for siblings to get annoyed, for example if I say something to my Bro and his friends have said the same thing,it's always a different story.

Oh yeah, I remember Dr Marcus! he and his leaches freaked me out and I always thought he looked like a woman. But I didn't mean him,I meant Birkin in RE2. sta.sh/01blc81982rv first time I saw this shot of him,I thought he was a woman with mysterious eyes! maybe I'm the only one who thinks so though...

Wow I didn't realise it was a bad omen for the game,that's scary! oh I see,I didn't realise she hadn't killed him. But he gets finished in RE2 I seem to remember. 

And good luck with the next chapter!

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-10-30 02:46:08 +0000 UTC]

We specialize in annoying our siblings XD yeah that's true... Funny how people react differently to certain people for saying the exact same thing. For example if I say "you suck" to my bro, his usual comeback would be "you blow" and we'd banter with really bad comebacks for an hour. If one of his friends said "you suck" he'd just laugh or something.

When he threw up i was like "ewwwwww" but I really thought he was a woman... Until he spoke and I was like "wtf?" Ohhhhhh yeah he does look kinda feminine there huh? well no I think everyone would have thought so but as soon as he spoke everyone would be like "oh it's a guy.. oh it's Birkin!" Lol

Idk if it is but let's evaluate. The progenitor/T-virus is based on the Ebola virus, which is found in Africa; Billy's massacre is in Africa; and Wesker's Uroboros virus and new world order debacle happened in Africa...

Yeah I think either Jill or Nemesis kills chief Irons... Don't quite recall and I don't have RE 3 anymore so I'd have to look it up on YouTube. And thanks! I do have a good idea with how to start the chapter now

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-10-30 18:36:22 +0000 UTC]

Yes, it's not really fair is it could be because it's not as cool if family members say it. Also to do with the fact that we sometimes don't listen to our parents advice but our friends instead, I've been known to do that, for good things too  

eww!XDDD that and all the leeches and the old man really scared the crap out of me ye she does, very different to RE0 and in the art based on the game where he looked more masculine and had facial hair. XD and yes, the voice is the obvious give away

oh wow, you're right! This game has been jinxed

and cool, I look forward to reading it

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-11-01 10:59:22 +0000 UTC]

Now it's not fair XD oh really? Can I get an example? I've always listened to my dad over my friends, mostly because I'd get into so much trouble with their little schemes

I'm a seasoned horror fan, takes a lot to scare me XD.... Jump scares on the other hand, make me hit the roof every time, hence Nemesis scared the crap out of me XD and yeah I totally agree with you

Ahhh!!!!!!

Well I've written about two pages and I think it's a strong intro. Gonna keep setting aside a few hours a day to work on the story

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-11-03 10:16:16 +0000 UTC]

Well, maybe its not the same thing, but when i was younger i had the annoying habit of chewing gum really loudly. No matter how often my parents told me how rude and annoying it was, i never listened. It wasnt until a good buddy of mine told me the same thing (he was getting really annoyed with me and i dont blame him XD ) And i finally listened and didnt do it again. Thats probably a bad example though, as its not the same

But yeah, usually i listen to my parents and try to take their advice as much as i can.

Oh i hate jump scares i find Nemesis not so scary, but then he didnt jump scare me. Though while playing RE0 i did get a lot of jump scares, i would get all nervous as soon as i heard the zombies. XD

Thats great, good luck and hope to read some soon!

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-11-05 09:06:42 +0000 UTC]

Lol maybe it's because it's fun to have these annoying habits when you're around family because no matter how angry you get them you know they will forgive you XD

Well that's good, we seem to be a dying breed

Oh God Nemmy jump scared me in RE 3, I never jumped so high in my life XD oh man the leech zombies are pretty unnerving!

Ugh.. still going. I can only type a page or two at a time then I get called away to do something else. Plus I'm considering weather or not to do that cafe scene in this chapter but... I dunno if it's too soon. What do you think?

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-11-06 09:04:08 +0000 UTC]

Aww, I never thought of that! makes sense though, and it could be we are worried that we will put friends off us for good if we don't behave right, like you said our family would forgive us

ugh, leech zombies and that huge crab mister thingy too.

and I understand, I I have similar problems when trying to draw. No, I think it would be fine having the cafe scene in this chapter

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-11-09 08:02:31 +0000 UTC]

True, but if we did lose our friends from being annoying then I guess they were just too damn sensitive XD but kids don't think like that huh?

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-11-09 09:30:50 +0000 UTC]

yes, thats very true and speaking of sensitivity, nowadays people can get sensitive over the smallest things and cut ties. Luckily, this friend and I have been friends since 1999 (We did film studies A-level together) and i consider him my younger bro.

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-11-18 12:41:03 +0000 UTC]

Omg I know right? I was wearing a singlet with "I'm with stupid" and someone got so offended. I'm glad to hear you're still friends with your film buddy

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-11-18 13:09:33 +0000 UTC]

lol what? offended over such a t-shirt?was it a random person or someone you knew? i dont understand how people can be so silly, really...i also believe that soemtimes people just choose to be negative/get offended over stuff. if they try looking at stuff differently they probably wouldnt be so offensive XD

thanks we email each other quite a bit and meet up now and again, together with my hubby and daughter

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-11-19 04:53:56 +0000 UTC]

Yup! It was a random person. I sat down next to her, she looked at me then got up and moved! I think you're onto something hon, I do believe some people become fixated on being negative for the sake of being negative.

Awe that's so sweet

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-11-19 17:28:22 +0000 UTC]

Egads!I really don't get some people

And yes. I guess maybe somehow it's easier to be negative and prejudiced. Tbh I sometimes prefer to think negatively, in that I think I haven't passed a job interview,and when I actually have,its a pleasant surprise.

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-11-20 10:16:02 +0000 UTC]

me neither man  

hmm I think we're onto something. It is easier to be negative, especially if you're already down or upset. People need to take a page out of Odd Ball's book and knock it off with all them negative waves

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-11-20 13:05:42 +0000 UTC]

Yeah and I agree with you,throw the negative waves out!! not to mention, you live healthier if you see the positive in everything

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-11-22 02:51:53 +0000 UTC]

Very true, people who are down all the time lose all motivation. Some lose their will to live which is so tragic

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-11-22 09:40:26 +0000 UTC]

yeah, its so sad having said that, sometimes depression is a type of motivator to be creative. its one of the things that lead me to drawing again a friend of mine who kept cutting when she was younger ended up in hospital and she started drawing and painting, she has some good art if everyone turned their depression into something creative, there'd be less harming and suicides.

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-11-26 05:26:42 +0000 UTC]

Wow... I'm so glad to hear your friend managed to pull themselves out of their depression. It can be an excellent motivator but only if you have the will and the skill to use it. Not everyone has that but I reckon they should find their alternative talents and use their depression as creative fuel

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-11-26 09:39:24 +0000 UTC]

Yes I'm glad too that it didn't become worse and now she has some interesting art I find sometimes if I'm down with flue even I want to draw more. maybe groups/classes for people with depression is good, where they teach them to express themselves creatively when my grandpa was in hospital they did so,e art classes and he did really well. Though having said that he did draw when he was younger so it was easy to pick up again. He is a actually from New Zealand, sadly I still haven't been.

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-12-04 09:08:16 +0000 UTC]

I wish they'd run volunteer project to encourage art while depressed, that way the people who need help can get it for free. Oh wow your grandpa is from New Zealand?? That's so cool! I've always wanted to go there

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-12-05 10:36:55 +0000 UTC]

They dont do it? I think here they do, but maybe not so much ebcause of course our government had to make so many cuts, even for libraries  

Yes he is his ancestors were Scottish,English and Irish. I'm guessing it wouldnt take long to get there from Australia, ot maybe thats just an illusion?

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-12-07 06:40:04 +0000 UTC]

well I haven't heard anything art related but we do have a 'beyond blue' group that look out for people who are depressed. Our government has been cutting back like crazy over here too. *sigh* God knows what they've done with all the money they tax us for.

wow that's an awesome mix for someone's heritage umm... not sure how long it would take but it is a short hop in the form of a plane ride we are pretty close

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-12-07 10:02:45 +0000 UTC]

I hate when governments do that. it seems to happen in a lot of places unfortunately. Nice that you have such a group

and cool! I'm always wondering because even from China to Japan it's almost 3 hours or a bit more, by plane. I was surprised because they seem so close on the map

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Shadow12177 In reply to horrorlandcop74 [2016-12-13 07:44:06 +0000 UTC]

yeah. I think half the problem is that they get paid WAY too much money. so they squander what they get for finances and budgeting.

wow really? a 3 hour flight? wow I would never have guessed.

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horrorlandcop74 In reply to Shadow12177 [2016-12-13 23:12:28 +0000 UTC]

Oh right...that sucks.

yeah, it's astounding

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