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Published: 2010-02-28 16:00:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1257; Favourites: 90; Downloads: 20
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iv had a bit of artblock again,so i thought drawing an adoptable im going for would help,
i know her pose is a bit awkward and her anatomys bad.
name:Faleu
age:6 years(human years)
sex:female
background:a possible relative to the infamous black shuck/barghest she serves helloween as a bodyguard and partner in mischieve.
sketch:10 minutes
colouring:30 minutes
advise or constructive critisicm welcome.
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thanx alot,though it wont let me vote it fair or not,is that the way its meant to be now?
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Hm, I'm not sure myself to be honest, first critique, though it does say "1 out of 1 deviants thought this was fair." so maybe you already have? 
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lol,iv sent a bug report to the help desk,i think its got a bit of a bug
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Most probably. ^_^ Should I send a report too?
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I was like, "WOW!" when I first saw this. A lot of people can not perfectly do this pose, but you did it. The eyes look really cool and I like the shadows and details. It looks interesting. I like the tail. It was aligned very well and it was realistic looking, in a way. The bottom, with the grass is original. Instead of just grass, you added in dirt, creating an overlap and a good advantage to create an overcast. I also thought the paws were cool too. Instead of just letting the viewer see just the black paw, you let them see the paw print. Not a lot of artists do that so, I am giving you props for that.
Suggestions? Well, I think the wolf turned out terrific but some parts of the scenery were a tad bit off. The moon, for example, I think you should have creased it down a bit. It pops out a little too much. And also, the cloud, I didn't quite understand it. I do not think it was supposed to be there.
So, it was really good! I love the bottom and the wolf. My suggestions for next time is too blur out the moon and the cloud a little bit so they would look even more realistic!
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thanx alot
but it wont let me rate it fair or unfair?
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I am not really sure why it would do that. Maybe because you drew this? I don't really know
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i used to be able to?
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I would report that. I never saw that before.
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were do you report it to?
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I think the help desk. Its located here:
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here is something about critiquing:
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sorry for asking but those she have the moon on the other way?
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no just one side
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oo ok!!^^
i hope ill finish it tomorow!!^^
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Ok, this picture just screams its awesomeness. Lol. I love how its eyes are glowing and how it seems to be foggy in the background. I'm also loving her paws, they're big and sturdy, i wouldnt want to get anywhere near those claws. XD Its very good.
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lol,thankies,
black dogs are a fave of mine
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Lol, not a prob.
Thats cool.
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Hooooo I love this! That pose and stare, so cool!
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just wondering,but how did you find me?
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You're welcome!
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I see nothing wrong with the pose, I actually like it a lot ~
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lol,thanx alot mate
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wassss!!! i want to know how make that!!! XD itΒ΄s great!! XP
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jajaja XD youΒ΄re welcome for ever!! XD c ya!!
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Ooh, beautiful! 
~Flareon.
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No worries! xD
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very nice ^^
i like the crescent mark she has too
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Wow really cool pose
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Eyes are awesome !
I wish I had eyes like this (but red =3 )
Badass job though !
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