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shadey54 — You killed me
Published: 2004-07-06 21:59:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 85; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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Description Crying out your name,
I cannot hear,
Just take this pain away,
For death I do not fear,
Do you turn from me,
In this hour I need you most,
Why must you betray me,
When the voice of death is this close.
Did I mean as much to you,
As you meant to me,
Or was I just a gulliable child,
wrapped deep within your teeth,
I must protest my deepest thoughts,
Of you before I go,
you mean the world to me,
literally,
Nothing can express how much I love you so,
You gave me all your love and attention,
To my heart, I shall hold them,
It was then I realized,
I've been dead since the first line of this poem.
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Comments: 4

poetika [2004-07-06 22:08:31 +0000 UTC]

ooo gripping, i love it

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shadey54 In reply to poetika [2004-07-06 22:33:23 +0000 UTC]

have you read her other ones?

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poetika In reply to shadey54 [2004-07-06 22:36:58 +0000 UTC]

no i dont think i have

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shadey54 In reply to poetika [2004-07-06 23:09:03 +0000 UTC]

well check em out you might find other of hers or possibly mine interesting to^.^*shameless self promotion woot!

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