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Published: 2013-11-12 21:36:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 755; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 0
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Long time no see, huh guys? x3
I don't really know what to say here, but I really love this piece. It came out so much better than what I even hoped for. And that's a miracle for me. lol
Estimated time: 12 hours
Media: Prang watercolors and black and white charcoal on watercolor paper.
I love hearing what my pieces make people think of
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Uhg, I am going to try to give a good critique but it is not my strong point at all.
This picture is amazing. Especially when you get up close and look at it. I would love to see it in person. I think that the strongest point you have here is the female, though both forms look very nice. Even though it may seem like a very small detail, the darker orange line around the woman's face really makes it pop. I love the fact that you used pencil and what looks to be watercolor. Great choice of mixed media. The fact that you cut out the flowers and laid them on top of the picture also adds to the piece as a whole. Though, in saying this, the skeletal face on the other side seems a bit lacking. It is darker so it does not draw the eye as much as the other figure. While you have the flowers and colored hair on the female side, the other side has hardly anything. I feel that you want the eye to be drawn to her first, and the skeletal face second, which is all very good. I wouldn't try to add anymore to the dark side at this point, it would take away from the piece you have. Now, the originality is lowered because you have done something like this before, as I pointed out in the comment section. This one is different, but at the same time it is similarly structured. I also left the impact low because I do not know what the story of the picture is. I do not know if it is making the right impact that you want it to. Again, as I said in that comment, it makes me feel like this picture is representing you and someone who you were with for a long time, you just have grown up and are seeing things at a different perspective, since their layout is the same. Your technique is wonderful. All of your shades and shadows run smoothly. And the colors work because they are not to strong but are still there. The light source you have used on the woman is wonderful. All in all, you have done a great job on this work. I see much improvement in this, and I hope to keep seeing improvement from you. If you keep this up, you will really go far. c:
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This is stunning, I love the shading and the complexity of the skull ;3; <3
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No problem, it truly is amazing ;3;
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This is absolutely freaking gorgeous.
I gotta give you and your work so many freaking props, you've got such great skill. ;w;
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D'aaww<3 Thank you very much. ;u;
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0_0 Oh my... this... this is just so... stunning!!! The emotion captured; the contrast; the perfection.... This is an absolutely stunning, breath-taking piece!!! I'm just... In LOVE with this piece!!!!
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Thank you very, very much~! ;u;
I'm very happy you see the emotion
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You are MOST welcome indeed!!!! But certainly; YOU are the one who must be thanked; for creating such an amazing piece!!!!
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D'aaaww
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Seera.
I feel like this is a remake of this picture you did last year.
rosutosuki.deviantart.com/art/…
Like, the one last year is kinda your childhood and now that you have grown up you have changed and see things differently.
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...Damn. That's really interesting. Brooke told me it looked like I just remade the picture, but she didn't say anything like that.
I feel kind of trippy thinking about that now. lol They're about completely different subjects though actually.
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Girl, you best quit talking shit bout meh or you're gonna get SHOT. Lol. Don't use my real name on here bitch.
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It was your mind doing it. Even though you did not intentionally "re-make" the old picture, that is kinda what you did, you know?
Like, you made it and thought it was something but that something was just an excuse to what you were actually trying to say. Ahahahaha!
But naw, I wrote you a critique. I hope that helps.
I hope it sent actually, it said there was an error and it didn't send but then it said that it did send...
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That last part what? XD Haha, gurl!
Thank you very much ;u;
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AH! I have to say that that text you sent me about what the picture is about make that make sence in my mind as well.
Wanting something that is bad for you.
I don't want to sound mean but... you know.
You were always upset but you just wanted him still.
You know what I mean?
And I see the kissy kiss part now too. c;
say no to the clap
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