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Description I've been experimenting with the happy birthday card. I'm thinking the image on the left will be the outside of the card and the image on the right will be on the inside. Thoughts? I also added bunny graffiti and a white background instead of light blue.

Thanks for all your input, it is very helpful!!!
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Comments: 15

kiiasuki [2013-05-29 12:13:21 +0000 UTC]

My Birthday is TODAY!

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kisa2411 [2012-08-16 04:08:57 +0000 UTC]

funny and cool!

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Missayah [2011-06-28 17:22:54 +0000 UTC]

sooo coowl!

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Blostma1 [2011-04-26 05:33:38 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE dark humour. This is wonderfulllll.

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cottonmouth992 [2010-10-19 15:01:04 +0000 UTC]

I want this card for my birthday!

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sebreg In reply to cottonmouth992 [2010-10-19 16:29:53 +0000 UTC]

yay! so glad you likes!

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miso-soupie [2010-06-13 23:50:01 +0000 UTC]

XDDD this is amazing ^^

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sebreg In reply to miso-soupie [2010-06-22 22:35:27 +0000 UTC]

yay! thank you

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missdania [2010-06-12 11:31:06 +0000 UTC]

Love it!
I want to give this to people...

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sebreg In reply to missdania [2010-06-12 15:24:03 +0000 UTC]

yay! thank you

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fragmeister [2010-06-12 09:01:35 +0000 UTC]

I think this looks great The bunny graff is really adorable aswell. How do you feel about it? ^^

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sebreg In reply to fragmeister [2010-06-12 15:23:23 +0000 UTC]

you know, I think I like it, the graffiti is fun but I wonder if it clutters the image too much

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fragmeister In reply to sebreg [2010-06-12 16:00:43 +0000 UTC]

Perhaps try putting some of the graffiti as a background behind the actual image? Looking like it is affecting the card, not the actual focus image? Try making the graffiti large scale, behind the focus image and lowering the opacity maybe? I think the white space is good around the image, because it makes the image "pop out" but maybe it is drowning the image a little?

The only real issue with the graffiti that I could say from my opinion is remove the rabbit graffiti that is directly over the word "birthday" as this makes it a bit illegible from a print point of view? Perhaps it is just the fact it is white that is making it overpowered? I think the black graffiti looks fantastic though and doesn't draw the eye away, but really adds to the signage.

Hope this helps

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Benwillreid [2010-06-12 07:50:55 +0000 UTC]

Nice! like a disguise for any onlookers

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sebreg In reply to Benwillreid [2010-06-12 15:23:47 +0000 UTC]

thanks Ben!

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