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Published: 2007-01-17 13:09:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 2479; Favourites: 33; Downloads: 36
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Description Before The Fall: Marluxia

This is for the ~Organization contest: I think we had to show what life was possibly like for Organization members before they became.. Organization members. As in, when they were actually people. I chose Marluxia.. and I have no idea why. He's not my absolute favourite, but he's near the top... And he looked much like Riku before I coloured his hair. I tried to make it darker, since it seems like Nobodies have lighter-coloured hair than their Somebodies, but I'm probably not paying attention. And his eyes are blue in this picture, but I don't actually know what colour his eyes actually are. See the detail shots below!

His head (woo)
Shorts!
Very much larger version

JPEG version (non-transparent background)
Original scanned lines
(I was going to colour it using the pencil lines but it looked too cheap.)

I had lots of trouble with deciding what the background would be, so I just slapped on a cheap one with random splodges. *coughs* I'm unsatisfied with this picture as it doesn't really seem.. complete to me. It really bothers me. If anyone can see what's wrong with it (not including anatomy, I'm aware I suck at drawing people), please tell me!


Anyway. Here's the explanation I thought up:

Name: Lamaiur (reminds me of something French for some reason)
Age: 19?
Occupation: Working on farm with parents, helping out

Brief (or not so) story:
Marluxia was a farmboy before his 'fall'. He helped around his father's farm, being the typical good boy: tilling the land, sowing the seeds, feeding the animals and of course, harvesting. His favourite job was the harvesting: he felt completely at peace while he did so for some reason. He always carried around two mini-scythes, even off the farm, in his pockets, and if he was ever nervous or frightened, he would stick his hands in his pockets and feel the familiar wood grain of the handle, to calm himself down.

One year, on his annual family trip to the beach, he decided to explore the thicket of trees which surrounded the beach on the way back to the van. Before he knew it, he was caught in a strange, seemingly-living vine, one of many which spread out from a massive, rafflesia-like flower. Terrified, he managed to draw his two mini-scythes out and free himself, but he would never, ever forget the terrible fear he felt as he was completely at nature's mercy. He started avoiding large flowers so often that it became habit to avoid even smaller ones, and soon he found himself giving a wide berth to even a small, innocent patch of daisies which had always grown in one of the paddocks in the farm.
He trusted his mini-scythes more than ever.

Then something or other happened (because I seriously can't think of anything: perhaps Sora came along to his farm and poked him with the Keyblade accidentally while drinking tea), and his Nobody was born. That Nobody was completely unlike his Somebody in the fact that he loved [or at least, he could command them. 'Love' is a bit extreme for a Nobody.] flowers, but now he wielded a massive scythe! [woot!]

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I think... this picture is probably of the very few moments when the vine-thing was still tightening its grip and he'd just taken out his mini-scythes. Marluxia must sure feel secure with his massive bendy-handled scythe if he was comforted by two mini ones when he was ... somebody.

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Wow, I believe I just majorly declared myself KH-nerd of the year for coming up with the lamest idea. XD

Hidden Mickey something! Find it and you'll get a virtual cookie + a hug
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Comments: 31

cathywren218 [2007-11-01 15:00:45 +0000 UTC]

OH!I FOUND IT!I FOUND THE MICKY!It's REALLY tiny,but I JUST BARLY found it.It's on his left pant leg(veiwer's right)and it blends in real well making it even harder to spot.wow...Where's mah cookie!?

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animalkid [2007-04-14 06:41:21 +0000 UTC]

hidden mickey something? hmm..is it the Nobody-esque symbol on his shorts? OwO
anywho ^_^ sorry i'm commenting so late, but i was browsing and luffles this pic. i love the story behind it too ^^ i hope my guess was right ^_^;;;

-Mimzy

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scrii In reply to animalkid [2007-04-14 07:10:49 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow. XDD You're amazing. You found it!! *gives you a virtual cookie and a hug*


Buutt... since you found it after such a long time, you get a quick sketch too. XD Who'd you like me to draw?

Thank ye for the comment!

I'm unbelievably happy that someone found it. Honestly.

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animalkid In reply to scrii [2007-04-14 23:26:03 +0000 UTC]

OO are you serious?! OMFG!!!-screams happily and hugs you-
well....hmmm...i love Demyx and Zexion......can i have a Demyx? ^_^ -is super happy- i luffles my Demmeh...-huggles demyx- even if he IS a bitch to beat @_@;;;

joo ish welcome ^_^

well i'm glad i found it then ^_^ i'll browse through your gallery, i do love how you drew Marly before he was a Nobody ^_^

thanks so much ...-squeals and runs to tell friends-

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scrii In reply to animalkid [2007-04-15 02:49:35 +0000 UTC]

Gladly. XD Demyx = <3333333

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animalkid In reply to scrii [2007-04-15 04:19:33 +0000 UTC]

YAY!!!
-watches joo- X3

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LadyOCloud7 [2007-01-24 08:38:59 +0000 UTC]

XD In my fan fiction, Reno's Last Order, Marluxia's other's name is Laumair XD Close to yours...just found that ironic...but I guess it does kinda suit him...I mean, I could really picture him with a French name o.O

Anyhoo, very nice picture! ^^ Good luck in the contest!

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scrii In reply to LadyOCloud7 [2007-01-24 09:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!! XD Yeah, I thought it sounded French.
Thank ye. (I'd like to read your fanfic, too... sounds interesting!)

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LadyOCloud7 In reply to scrii [2007-01-26 19:15:36 +0000 UTC]

Well, the fanfic is mostly focused on Reno and Rude, but here ya go. Tell me what you think if you decided to read it ^^ XD

[link]

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LouisDelacroix [2007-01-24 03:21:29 +0000 UTC]

yay marluxia!!!he looked so innocent back then...*sniffs*^^

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scrii In reply to LouisDelacroix [2007-01-24 03:24:04 +0000 UTC]

XD Yes, now he's all evil and flower-obsessed.

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LouisDelacroix In reply to scrii [2007-01-24 05:01:03 +0000 UTC]

and pretty.:3

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scrii In reply to LouisDelacroix [2007-01-24 05:11:13 +0000 UTC]

XD

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reimyourou [2007-01-23 04:30:34 +0000 UTC]

Hey.....O_O When did you get so good at people scrii!

That is seriously amazing. (I keep typing the same kind of thing, don't I?...lol)

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scrii In reply to reimyourou [2007-01-23 04:47:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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NightshadeULF [2007-01-18 20:00:48 +0000 UTC]

Sweet! He looks awesome and so do the vines. I cant find the hidden thing

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TimerRabbit [2007-01-18 05:08:10 +0000 UTC]

Great "Before the Fall" story for Marluxia. ^_^

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scrii In reply to TimerRabbit [2007-01-18 05:10:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Rajia [2007-01-18 01:15:59 +0000 UTC]

awww... poor thing. he needs a hug... that is once someone takes away those scythes. THEN I'll hug him. Good piccy.

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scrii In reply to Rajia [2007-01-18 01:16:29 +0000 UTC]

XD He might think you're a vine.

Thanks!

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Rajia In reply to scrii [2007-01-18 01:18:28 +0000 UTC]

Not good!

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zexies [2007-01-17 23:11:05 +0000 UTC]

Fun~ 8D

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Umbree [2007-01-17 19:08:47 +0000 UTC]

I really like the coloring, the way your colored it somehow makes me really happy. xD I really like how the vines tangle him up. Nice effect.

P.S. I'm stealing his outfit. I want to wear something like that. D:

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scrii In reply to Umbree [2007-01-18 00:04:37 +0000 UTC]

XD Alright. But I don't think he'd be happy with no clothes.

Thanks!

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waiting4wings [2007-01-17 15:48:43 +0000 UTC]

Great. You are good at drawing humans as well, I see! Nice shading, only there are some white spots at the bottom edge and top that are kind of bothering me... It is only visible when not full-viewed. I know you didn't ask for crits, but I wasn't sure. Its not a big deal, and certainly doesn't take away from the quality of the picture!

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scrii In reply to waiting4wings [2007-01-18 00:04:17 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, that's what dA does to PNG images, I'm not sure of how to get rid of them.

Thank you!!

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Zaylie [2007-01-17 13:38:56 +0000 UTC]

I can't find the hidden stuff D: ooh well x3
pretty picture...the clothing detail is amazing I wish I could design clothes like that!!!
as for what's wrong...his left/right foot (lowest) doesn't have toenails while his other does...
Otherwise it all looks good to me

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scrii In reply to Zaylie [2007-01-18 00:04:58 +0000 UTC]

XD It might be a little hard to find.

Yeah, the toenails... I kinda got lazy with them.

Thanks!

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Zaylie In reply to scrii [2007-01-18 11:04:29 +0000 UTC]

I guess...I looked for like 5 minutes x3

hahaha well I guess you should either erase them as a whole or add them...cause now it looks yeah...I dunno your drawing x3

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Miss--B [2007-01-17 13:27:45 +0000 UTC]

loool i just noticed youre scrii from BBA XD im Crafts ^^

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scrii In reply to Miss--B [2007-01-18 00:05:09 +0000 UTC]

Yes, yes I am. XD

Hello! -waves-

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