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luminariasellaiia [2012-05-12 03:25:13 +0000 UTC]
you redesigned her! i like this one better. the detail is very (good god i know no technical terms for this stuff) nice... (sorry...cant figure out a better way to word it.) The new color and the contrast to the top that covers her pulss things together better now.
Very nicely done. if i could figure out a way to make it sound less choppy and like i knew anything i would have....
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OstrichZero [2012-04-20 07:10:56 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I love this!
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Scotty-Lad In reply to OstrichZero [2012-04-20 07:17:20 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I was wondering if I could some feedback like what you like best about it and if there is anything that needs improvement. Would you do that for me please?
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OstrichZero In reply to Scotty-Lad [2012-04-20 07:25:12 +0000 UTC]
Sure, my favorite parts of it include her expression and how you rendered the drip effects. Nice subtle contrasts there. Personally what I would like to see is more contrast in the hair. By this I mean darkening the back side of it so we can fully understand the light source since you've captured it well on the rest of her body. I only say that since I'm obsessed with adding contrast in my own stuff like color pencil drawings...but for cartoons its fine too for it to stay the way it is now. Great job!
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OstrichZero In reply to Scotty-Lad [2012-04-21 00:14:51 +0000 UTC]
No problem, I'm happy to help!
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