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Published: 2004-04-16 14:25:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 200; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 52
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Description Lovingly she lays her hand
Upon a rose fallen within the sand,
Its petals buried beneath the ground
Only the stem and leaves were found;

One petal hidden underneath a stone,
Reflecting a lover that lay all alone
Disquieted dreams plague her in her sleep,
While it burrows beneath the sand and
With the tide will always weep.

The second lay beenath a shell,
Brightly colored and beautiful,
Yet its inside a cold hell-
As it shimmers with translucent tenacity,
Its inside delves into utter insanity-
A curious man brings to the naked ear,
And hears the shallow, screaming ocean inside,
Filled with such desperate fear.

The third is seen within the sky,
Admired by the naked eye;
Held by a seagull's talons within the air,
With goals and fate that become brilliant
And yet tear after failed attempts to fly,
Struggling to get up and become resilient,
Yet the seagull and its companion slowly fall and die.

The last and foremost petal had,
Fallen within the watered sand,
Faced with hardships so strong, yet,
Had buried itself within the land;
And sought forth to carry on.

The young girl watched as this petal dove,
Beneath the earth and valiantly strove,
To create and thrive, to survive within
A decadence laced with malicious sin.

It rose, so great
Yet greater than
The gull's flight, as
It brought itself from beneath the land;

And if this petal could grow,
Into a rose with its proud, red hue,
The girl realized that
She could, too.
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Comments: 20

mrshan [2004-04-17 04:38:59 +0000 UTC]

. . i came seeing the beautiful pic but was awarded with some bonus words . .Wonderful Work !

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ScarletKisses In reply to mrshan [2004-04-17 09:35:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^^ I'm glad you like it!

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mrshan In reply to ScarletKisses [2004-04-17 14:43:44 +0000 UTC]

no prob ! u r welcome . .

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TheFireBurningWithin [2004-04-17 01:49:57 +0000 UTC]

Wow, you lace your poetry with amazing wordplay and detail. Great imagery and I just love it. Great job.

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ScarletKisses In reply to TheFireBurningWithin [2004-04-17 02:24:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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OrianaBorealis [2004-04-16 23:26:30 +0000 UTC]

... How can you say I'm a better writer than you after this? IT IS THE WORK OF THE GODS!!!

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<3 for nada!

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ScarletKisses In reply to OrianaBorealis [2004-04-17 02:25:07 +0000 UTC]

Lol...thank you

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OrianaBorealis In reply to ScarletKisses [2004-04-17 02:30:27 +0000 UTC]

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ScarletKisses In reply to OrianaBorealis [2004-04-17 09:37:00 +0000 UTC]

lol...cute

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jerzchick16 [2004-04-16 17:15:34 +0000 UTC]

nicce..this is truly inspiring!

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ScarletKisses In reply to jerzchick16 [2004-04-16 18:07:35 +0000 UTC]

:embarrassed: Ohhh....thank you

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soul-lozenge [2004-04-16 16:50:29 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I'm faving this one too! Beautiful. Keep up the great work!

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ScarletKisses In reply to soul-lozenge [2004-04-16 18:08:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you soooo much!

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soul-lozenge In reply to ScarletKisses [2004-04-19 14:12:14 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome!

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MaterialGirl377 [2004-04-16 15:42:49 +0000 UTC]

THAT IS SOOOO PRETTY! i kinda get what you mean with the sower parable too. i'm faving this one.

btw- i saw a few spelling mistakes, so you might want to edit this.

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ScarletKisses In reply to MaterialGirl377 [2004-04-16 18:10:38 +0000 UTC]

Really? crap. I'm going to edit it..yeah. lol thanks, I probably typed too fast.

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MaterialGirl377 In reply to ScarletKisses [2004-04-16 18:22:56 +0000 UTC]

lol i do that too

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MaterialGirl377 In reply to ScarletKisses [2004-04-16 18:22:51 +0000 UTC]

lol i do that too

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A-pillow [2004-04-16 14:27:53 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, I see what you mean about the parable of the sower though. I did enjoy it especially the lines:
"And if this petal could grow,
Into a rose with its proud, red hue,
The girl realized that
She could, too. "

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ScarletKisses In reply to A-pillow [2004-04-16 14:43:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! And that you saw what I meant

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