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CFJrosa [2011-05-10 19:46:41 +0000 UTC]

I REALLY love the composition of this one. My only critique would be that the eye isn't instantly drawn to the face. I spent a while searching for her right hand. Maybe create a little more shadow / burn elsewhere so that her face and legs are the focal point? Just my first impression
(and yes, it's amateur but...)
As I said, I adore this composition, so I stared at it for ages to take it in properly.

(Jeez, can you tell that I've had a tutorial from Perry now? hehe)

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