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sayhellotoart β The Sound of Darkness
Published: 2009-09-27 14:30:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 203; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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No one shall hear the sound of,Darkness creeping forth and above.
Obscurity grasps slumbering souls,
Land of cipher, where ebony rules.
Darkness breathes through crawling fingers,
And thrives in where dilemma lingers.
Rise about me, your livid hold,
Consume my body βtil I come cold.
Youβll never hear the grim sounds of,
Darkness slaying the silence of love.
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Awesome Neller...are you on a half morbid streak? Your writing seems darker lately? Lol...darkness and emotions seem to make the best poems. Good Job!!
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The emotions poem was a collaboration time deal with Rhi. XD That had a purpose.
But brain storming for that lead me to write this. Lol.
I'm going to write a poem about the glee of night, though, so that one will be happy!
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i think you should get rid of the in where "and thrives in where dilemma lingers. the in makes it read weird. good poem though
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