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sayhellotoart β€” On this Silent Winter Night
Published: 2009-09-24 00:43:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 172; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description Winter night frost,
Trees layered by snow,
See a man's breath,
It can't be left go,
Sword in his hand,
He is ready to fight,
For the one he loves,
On this silent winter night,
Two men on horses,
Ride high on their steeds,
With an imprisoned girl,
Her love is what feeds,
Quiet between the trees,
The man flies past sight,
And takes a deep breath,
On this silent winter night,
Attack and ambush,
This man does,
To save the imprisoned girl,
To save his love,
Beat, batter, and break,
The fight is cruel and long,
Not until the man finds,
ThatΒ Β he has done wrong,
He strikes and kills one man,
He thought he has done all right,
But one got him from the back,
On this silent winter night,
The man falls to the ground,
With his back that bleeds,
One more breath,
It is all this man needs,
Death finds him quicker,
His last wish "Take me Lord",
And the girl cries in pain,
Stares at his blood stain sword,
Tears stream down her face,
She holds herself tight,
And she falls to the body,
On this silent winter night,
"I love you so Dalthor,
But why be so dumb?
May you wait for me,
I will soon come,"
She turns and stares,
At the remaining man,
"I want you to kill me,"
The girl did demand,
He shakes his head no,
But she leaps to a fight,
He strikes her with death,
On this silent winter night.
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Comments: 9

shining-armor7 [2009-09-24 02:24:21 +0000 UTC]

great poem it is

but make a happy one you shoud

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sayhellotoart In reply to shining-armor7 [2009-09-24 03:11:53 +0000 UTC]

I do have a poem with a happy ending. Dragon Fire and Dragon Ice. ^_^
I never realized that my poems had such unhappy endings. Altough the ending to Only the Old Know is humorous.

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MyBrennendeLiebe [2009-09-24 01:49:25 +0000 UTC]

I remember this poem! It was awesome then and still is now!

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sayhellotoart In reply to MyBrennendeLiebe [2009-09-24 02:42:09 +0000 UTC]


Thank you.

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MyBrennendeLiebe In reply to sayhellotoart [2009-09-24 02:51:52 +0000 UTC]

You're Welcome!

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ToXTheXMorgueX [2009-09-24 00:48:24 +0000 UTC]

I envy people that can truly tell a story through their poetry . . . this is great

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sayhellotoart In reply to ToXTheXMorgueX [2009-09-24 00:49:36 +0000 UTC]

Hehe.
Thank you.
You're comment means bunches.

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ToXTheXMorgueX In reply to sayhellotoart [2009-09-24 00:58:01 +0000 UTC]

Anytime, as a writer I know how nice it is to get comments on work, even old work ^_^

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sayhellotoart In reply to ToXTheXMorgueX [2009-09-24 03:10:58 +0000 UTC]

It's really nice.
Thank you, again. XD

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