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WorldWar-Tori [2010-04-05 05:36:56 +0000 UTC]
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Though I haven't seen the original color photo of this, I have to say I'd probably prefer it in black and white. Not only does it keep your attention pulled to the center without any distracting colors, it gives off an old time feeling to it. One thing I would suggest is maybe if you could up the contrast a little to bring out a little more of the black and white feel rather than gray scale. Second would be if there was something you could stand on to get over that bush a little bit more, to catch what looks like a basement window. other than that I really like it. I wouldn't cut out the shrubbery too much, it adds to that old sort of abandoned feel it gives off. Especially the way you have things hanging and brush all over like it's unkempt and over grown. The only thing that'd add to this at all would be if you had something crawling up the sides, but that's not in your control of course. Also, I notice that the roof looks older, a new roof always takes away from the feel for me, so even if it's not older, doesn't matter too much, it's what I see that matters. I also like the way it seems to be missing window panes. I don't know if it is or not, just looks that way to me. Nice work e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>
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WorldWar-Tori In reply to SammanthaAus [2010-04-05 06:03:44 +0000 UTC]
oooh... HDR would probably be lovely... especially if there is green and clouds!
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SammanthaAus In reply to WorldWar-Tori [2010-04-05 15:50:16 +0000 UTC]
oooooo.....you're right....*mind is ticking now* lol, that would be cool. gotta try that out for sure.
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